Tami Lynn's Halloween Scare

[Skylar21]

Wonderfull halloween story. I could feel her anxiety at being discovered. Giving the chain leash to her son is a nice touch. I would like to be in the car ride home! Great humiliation. Great writing.

[Hooked6]

Wonderfull halloween story. I could feel her anxiety at being discovered. Giving the chain leash to her son is a nice touch. I would like to be in the car ride home! Great humiliation. Great writing.

I wasn't planning on continuing as I was writing a short Halloween story but I agree there are opportunities to explore. Should I continue?

Hooked6

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[jojo12026]

1 vote for Absofuckinglutely!

[Skylar21]

I wasn't planning on continuing as I was writing a short Halloween story but I agree there are opportunities to explore. Should I continue?

I enjoy the shorter stories, but this one offers much potential for a follow-up. Mom nude, gagged, hands tied behind her; her son holding her leash. Husband at a party near by, townsfolk recognizing her...

Please write another part. The humiliation is great in this one.

[mikewozere]

I agree

[Mariax]

I wasn't planning on continuing as I was writing a short Halloween story but I agree there are opportunities to explore. Should I continue?

Hooked6

I'm always excited when I see you've posted anything new. Whether you continue this, continue one of your other stories, or write something completely new I'll be there.

[underdog_13]

Wonderfull halloween story. I could feel her anxiety at being discovered. Giving the chain leash to her son is a nice touch. I would like to be in the car ride home! Great humiliation. Great writing.

I wasn't planning on continuing as I was writing a short Halloween story but I agree there are opportunities to explore. Should I continue?

Hooked6

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Sure!

[EddieDavidson]

As always, masterful.

I feel like there is more to this story, though. What happens next is going to bug me. There is more to this performance art to come, imho.

Also, as a tiny nit, in chapter 6, you have principle and I think it's principal.

I had an old Principal who taught us to remember it's spelled that he's a Prince and also your Pal - he was classy as fuck. Mister Gesdorf.

Like you, his time with me was brief, but his lessons remain long after.

The PRINCIPLE leaned in closer and looked me directly into my eyes as if studying me, as my breathing quickened again, causing my hood to poof out and back in with every nervous breath. He just stood there for ages without saying a word looking into my eyes, as if this technique of his had served him well in discerning between a lie and the truth.

Also, one missing comma - again, super minor, please continue.

[verrekus]

I love your stories about mom in no position to refuse to eBay to the devious minds of her son’s friends. I hope to see new ones in a near future