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[mikewozere]

Agreed. Chapter 5 is great. Love the picture too

[Somebody]

Yep, really cute!

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[MGS]

Which character would you guys like me to show you next?

I will read the new chapter at the end of the week, but like everyone had said so far, I think most of us love long chapters, and I am excited to read chapter 5. But to answer your question I would say if I had to choose, I would say Amy again

[MaireadM]

The quality is much improved and the story had a great twist

[MGS]

I just read chapter 5 and like everyone has been saying, it is amazing! I love the way you put on the tiniest piece of "clothing" on Amy, only to probably once again strip her soon of the barely there piece of cloth. I cannot wait for chapter 6

[superevil7]

Such betrayal! Lol

It's already been said, but I think this is the best chapter yet. Can't wait to see Amy have to face the boys.


And I'm already hoping for Emma, but even more so, Val, to get some comeuppance eventually

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[Hooked6]

Unfortunately for Amy, Val's in far too much of a superior position at the moment. But I totally agree, both girls would definitely deserve some retribution for the mean things they did!

Retribution would usually only occur if Amy hated what is happening to her. Seems to me, from what has been written so far that, despite her humiliation and embarrassment, AMY seems to be enjoying herself. Val and her friends have only been enabling a shy girl with poor self-esteem to come out of her shell and enjoy things that she would have never thought of doing.

Just a thought.

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[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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