GOS Pulled

[Danielle]

This story, and the central character arc within it, is a transformative work inspired by "The Last Straw" by the author neverdoubted. My narrative explores a new premise and follows a different path for the characters, but the foundational spark and initial conceptual framework belong entirely to neverdoubted. I am grateful for their original creation, which inspired this new tale.

Warning! This story contains depictions of children as young as 12 years old nude and in sexual situations. Reader discretion is advised.
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Geometry of Shame



Pulled for editing.

[student]

This is a different take on "The Last Straw" by neverdoubted. It will be interesting to see how you develop it.

[Hooked6]

This is a different take on "The Last Straw" by neverdoubted. It will be interesting to see how you develop it.

Yeah, that's the problem with AI generated work in that the original author is never credited or acknowledged. Afterall, The Last Straw is still active on this board with almost a quarter of a million reads and 43 chapters and still growing as a trending classic novel in its own right.

Perhaps the human author that created the framework for this AI assisted story could rectify that by making a small but well-deserved edit at the beginning of her story acknowledging the fine ORGINAL work by neverdoubted.

That said, I am enjoying the Geometry of Shame and am interested to see where this goes in the next installment.

Hooked6

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[Danielle]

Thank you for the comment. I will fix that.

[TovaG]

“As for the car,” Dad finished, turning to look out the window at its crippled silhouette. “The insurance won’t cover the cost as the repairs would cost more than the car is worth, now. So, I’ll sell it for parts or scrap.”

This all depends on the extent of the damage. The excuse was someone "backed into it" If they were at a party at a drive-in, then the other car wouldn't be moving that fast. If the damage was bad enough to total the car, then something else happened and she totally lied about it. You did say he rebuilt it.

That's the only major issue I had with the story. I enjoy reading The Last Straw, so I look forward to reading this one. I also enjoyed the reason for the girls being naked. Although two weeks isn't enough time for what they did. It should be for the entire summer.

Let's see how little brother handles the situation. Will he take control like the boy in The Last Straw did? Will he just be a witness to their humiliation and adjustment to their new reality? Maybe they will come to like, even prefer, the nudity and ask to remain nude for the rest of the summer.

Google says:
The value of a custom rebuilt 1969 Ford Mustang can range from approximately $30,000 to over $400,000, depending heavily on the quality of the work, the nature of the modifications (restomod vs. original restoration), and specific components used.

[neverdoubted]

It did sound familiar

[Danielle]

Pulled for editing.

[student]

Sam seems more embarrassed that his sisters are about the girls' nudity than the girls themselves are.

[TeenFan]

The small birthmark above Ashley's hip is a nice touch, but there hasn't been much said about the physical features of the three sisters.
Sam will be spending hours staring at their assets, being able to do a comparison and contrast, such as which one has the nicer nipples?
Is one a darker shade than the others? Which one paints their toenails...little things like that.

[Danielle]

Pulled for editing.