Time freeze!

[Ashley cruxley]

Time freeze: Chapter 1 - Maxxie is average height and weight for his age, light brown hair and brown eyes.

Young 10 yr old Maxwell, Max or Maxxie he went by all names, had just woken up and decided to go right to the kitchen for some water.

He got to the fridge door, opened it and then heard the giggles. He turned around to see his twin cousins and auntie at the table for breakfast.
Auntie May was smirking as her eyes never left him and the twin cousins Jack and Stella (8) could hardly contain their laughter.
Max stood there confused as he drank from his bottle.

"Didn't think you would be cosplaying as Greg Heffley today Max." Jack teased.

"Your costume is just like his." Stella laughed.

It finally dawned on Max what they meant. They had watched diary of a wimpy kid from 2011 last night and he looked down at himself to realize that he was only wearing his briefs. Bright and white just like Greg wore as he chased his brother outside of the hotel.

He totally forgot that his family was visiting for a few days. He normally doesn't wear pj's so he just went about like normal.

Max hid behind the door to cover up much to the delight of his cousins. He closed his eyes and wished for them to stop, just stop so he disappear. Suddenly the room went silent and Max peaked around and everyone was frozen either eating or laughing. No reaction when he left the safety of the fridge and stood in front of them near nude.

Omg this is incredible! Max thought to himself. Exciment buzzed through his body like electricity as they sat there gazing upon him. He noticed a weird feeling in his briefs and saw that his penis was pointing up and it was bigger than it should be. He was concerned as it was the first time he noticed it but he couldn't focus on it right now. He ran back to his room and put on his day clothes as they were going to an indoor trampoline today. Once dressed, he ran back to the fridge and tried to be in the same spot as he repeated what he did last time. Noise flared as time flowed and Max went about getting food. His family sat there stunned as he suddenly had clothes, they looked at each other to see if they were going crazy.

His heart was racing as he recalled being seen in such a vulnerable state of dress. He felt a stirring in his pants. Did he like being seen like that?

[NudeBaG]

Very interesting start!
Time freeze is a great power, though, in this case, it seems like it might backfire

[TeenFan]

Will this story be Frozen in Time, when Maxxie is ten years old? Or will there be a Time-Jump to when he's older and the strangely growing
penis will have many more powers than it has when he's young?

[Ashley cruxley]

Will this story be Frozen in Time, when Maxxie is ten years old? Or will there be a Time-Jump to when he's older and the strangely growing
penis will have many more powers than it has when he's young?

Uh no idea right now, literally wrote it this morning. I don't forsee a time jump, probably just exploring what mischief happens

[Vader]

Could be a lot of fun to be had with that power.

[PantsDownFun]

I'd love to see him use his ability to do a role reversal, leave his cousin the one in nothing but tighty whities (or less) in front of everyone.

[Ashley cruxley]

Chapter 2:
Max and his family were mere minutes away from leaving. Auntie May was busy locking up the house and his cousins were making their way to get their shoes at the front door.

As Jack was finishing up and stood Max froze time. He thought over his plan for a moment before taking action and removing Jack's shoes and tossing them into the hallway. Off came his yellow socks, one went on top of a plant and the other he put in Jack's mouth. Lastly he stripped off his shirt and jeans, leaving him in only his black briefs with Monday written on the waistband despite it being a Saturday. Max folded up his clothes and put them in the spot that his mother had put them. He went back to his spot and continued to put on his own shoes as he resumed time.

Jack's eyes widened in surprise as he spat out his sock. He wiped his tongue and went to rinse out his mouth with water. Auntie May walked in from outside and locked that door. She turned and frowned at her son.

"Jack honey, why aren't you dressed? We are leaving in 3 minutes." It finally dawned on Jack his state of dress as he checked himself. He panicked and covered himself with his hands as he shuffled away to his room.

"You boys act so silly, you act like I've never seen you naked. I used to bathe the both of you at the same time when you were littler." Auntie May said.

Max and Stella were already inside the car and Jack was just buckling himself into his seat. May had locked the garage door and opened her door when time froze.

Max got out of his seat and opened Jacks door. He undid the seat belt for ease of access and made quick work of the shirt and tossed it onto his mother's seat. He moved Jack around to face him so he could lay him down on the back seat and take his jeans off. To the front seat they go. After putting Jack back in his spot and buckling him, he decided to put Jack's hand down his undies for good measure.

With everything in the right spot, Max resumed time and turned around to start talking to Stella so he could see Jack who again was oblivious.

Auntie May slid into her seat, put her handbag down by Max's and checked the rear view mirror to see her son nearly naked.

"Jack, maybe it was funny the first time but now I'm getting cross. Get your clothes on now or I'll leave you in the car without them when we get there and stop touching yourself." May warned as she tossed him his clothes.

The look on his face was priceless as Jack raced to unbuckle himself, step out of the car while covering himself and dress out of view as best as he could despite his sister and cousin seeing.
Jack rejoined the family and avoided eye contact.

"Now Jack, when we get home you can stripp to your little undies if your feeling hot but I expect better of you when we are going out."

"Mum I was dressed I swear."

"That's enough honey, it's not like your clothes magically came off by themselves."


May almost lost track of the kids, they raced off in their excitement but she caught up to them and reminded them of the rules. She would stick with Jack more despite wanting to split her time with all of them. She was mentally preparing herself for if she has to drag him to the family change room and spank Jack. Depending on what he does, she would consider keeping the kids in the room while she does it to really drive home the lesson to her son.

[superevil7]

I know it's ENM, but is there an in continuity explanation for why Max is only using his power on Jack and not Stella too?

[Ashley cruxley]

I know it's ENM, but is there an in continuity explanation for why Max is only using his power on Jack and not Stella too?

No? If I did write for that category I'd put it in it.
I imagine him to get along better with Stella than Jack plus he isn't in that time of his life yet so pranking his male cousin is the most appealing

[LostBoy90]

Great story so far. Wish time manipulation was actually possible.