Our First Story (Complete)
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Themarble
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Thats always good. Gotta enjoy what you are writing. Cant wait to see the next chapter and who loses it first. Loving the pacing as well.
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NudeBaG
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Re: our first story
It might continue.
We have been focused on Magic, but have had writer’s block.
Maybe it would be good to get back into this story for a bit.
We have been focused on Magic, but have had writer’s block.
Maybe it would be good to get back into this story for a bit.
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I would really like to see them cum already, so much build-up...NudeBaG wrote: Fri Nov 27, 2020 11:23 am It might continue.
We have been focused on Magic, but have had writer’s block.
Maybe it would be good to get back into this story for a bit.
Re: our first story
This is a great story!! If you're still looking for ideas, I'd like to see something like this:
One of the girls has to go inside to use the bathroom. While she's in there, she calls more of her friends over. These friends are able to spy on the boys and take pictures of them for blackmail purposes, and the control of the boys could go on indefinitely.
Also, I would like to see one of the girls inside create some sort of emergency. Something like a car pulling up as a surprise return of Amber's parents, or an older male sibling of Ambers just out of prison. Maybe, on the side of the house, one of them could light off a left over "smoke bomb" from the 4th of July to simulate a fire. Anything that would prompt the boys to immediately have to run naked out of the gate and wind up right in front of the new girls waiting for them to take public nudity pics with stunned facial reaction pics. This could further the blackmail of forcing the boys into the sexual encounters you may want to begin.
Happy writing!!
One of the girls has to go inside to use the bathroom. While she's in there, she calls more of her friends over. These friends are able to spy on the boys and take pictures of them for blackmail purposes, and the control of the boys could go on indefinitely.
Also, I would like to see one of the girls inside create some sort of emergency. Something like a car pulling up as a surprise return of Amber's parents, or an older male sibling of Ambers just out of prison. Maybe, on the side of the house, one of them could light off a left over "smoke bomb" from the 4th of July to simulate a fire. Anything that would prompt the boys to immediately have to run naked out of the gate and wind up right in front of the new girls waiting for them to take public nudity pics with stunned facial reaction pics. This could further the blackmail of forcing the boys into the sexual encounters you may want to begin.
Happy writing!!
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Re: our first story
Most likely so it likely isn't the best. I wanna see this story continue the way it was heading. The build up was sooo good. I can't wait to see them all lose it.
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Re: our first story
I’m ashamed to admit, We had completely forgotten about this 
Maybe we’ll get back to it.
Maybe we’ll get back to it.
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