It’s Rude to Point (Chapter 5a - April 16)

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Can wait for Emmas turn. :D
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I think Sarah should offer a flash reward for being so good so he rises to the occasion.
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It’s Rude to Point - Chapter 4a

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My life flashed before my eyes. I remembered the morning my mom sat me down on the couch and told me I was going to learn to be a gentleman. She told me my body was my own, and I had to control it. She told me pointing was rude, and it was about respect. Respect for myself, and respect for other people.

Then an image of me in the living room with a huge, raging erection and my mom just glaring at me popped into my head. Me in my bed with lotion all over my hands, trying so hard to make my penis calm down. I don't think that was a memory. I think I was hallucinating. I couldn't remember things correctly.

Mia had just asked Lisa if she knew any boys who were acting up. It was happening again. They were starting the cycle. I was the prototype, and they needed another one.

Lisa's eyes suddenly lit up, a look of pure, unadulterated discovery on her face. "Jeffrey!" she announced, her voice ringing with the certainty of a witness in a courtroom drama.

"Jeffrey?" I asked, my head snapping towards her. "Who's Jeffrey?"

"He lives next door, silly," Lisa said, rolling her eyes like I was the most oblivious person on the planet. "You've met him before. He's in my class. He was just out in his backyard playing with his two little brothers while I was making popcorn. And he was being SO. ANNOYING."

My blood ran cold. My next-door neighbor. Jeffrey. I had a vague image of a lanky kid with giant ears and a permanent cowlick, always yelling something about aliens or superheroes at the top of his lungs. Not a baby, but not a teenager, either. Somewhere in the middle. A dangerous, impressionable middle.

"What was he doing, Lisa?" Sarah asked, her voice a low, encouraging purr.

"Well, they were playing tag, right? And he kept winning. And he was rubbing it in, going 'nya nya nya, you can't catch me! I'm the fastest, and you're slow-pokes!'" She did a little dance, a clumsy, jerky imitation that made the other girls giggle. "And then he pushed his little brother down, not hard, but he still cried. And Jeffrey just stood there and laughed. He wouldn't even say sorry."

"Sound's like a classic case," Sarah declared, a triumphant little smirk playing on her lips. "Definite irritability. A lack of empathy. A delusion of superiority." She was ticking symptoms off on her fingers.

"Does he... point?" Mia asked, leaning forward, her black notebook suddenly back in her hands, her pen poised.

Lisa's face went red, a bright, embarrassed flush that made her look even younger. "Well... Not then," she mumbled, staring down at my penis. "I've seen him do it in class, though. From my desk. Mrs. Henderson was passing out our spelling tests, and Jeffrey's chair was facing me for a second, and I saw it. His little shorts got all... pointy. He saw me looking, and he turned all red and scooched his chair around really fast. It was... pokey. It looked like it was trying to poke right through his shorts."

Mia's pen was flying across the page. "Interesting. Subject displays pre-emptive symptoms. Early onset." She snapped the notebook shut, a decisive click. "Well, girls. It seems we have our next case. Another sick boy, right next door."

A cold dread, sharp and metallic, washed over me. This couldn't be happening.

My mom, who had been hovering in the doorway, came into my room. Her face was a mask of worried curiosity. "Who has a case of... the sickness? Lisa, who are you talking about?" She looked from my flushed face to the girls' triumphant expressions.

"The little boy next door, Mrs. Miller," Mia said, slipping back into her "expert" role with practiced ease. "Lisa just gave us a textbook description of the early stages. Left unchecked, Jeffrey's case could be much more aggressive than Tommy's. He's younger, the hormones aren't as regulated. The blockages could form much faster."

My mom's eyes widened. She looked from Lisa's earnest little face to me, then to the girls. "Oh, my goodness. Not another one. What can we do? Should we call Dr. García?"

"The full protocol with my cousin is a lengthy process, Mrs. Miller. We'd have to schedule an appointment, and with the backlog from the spill..." Mia said, letting her voice trail off.

"It's an emergency, though!" my mom insisted, wringing her hands. "We have to do something!"

"Right, of course," Mia said, nodding seriously, playing her role to the hilt. "In an emergency situation like this, we could administer the preliminary field test. It's not as conclusive as a full exam, but it's highly effective for early detection. We call it the Two-Minute Pointing Test."

My mom's face lit up with a desperate hope. "The Two-Minute Pointing Test? What is that?"

"It's just what it sounds like," Sarah explained, her voice a calm, reassuring purr. "A boy with a healthy system will calm down within two minutes. But a boy with the toxin in his system... well, the blockage makes it almost impossible for them to... un-point. Their body is literally fighting itself. The test is simple," she added, a serious look on her face. "We get him naked. We measure. Then we wait two minutes. If he's still pointing, he's sick."

My mom just stared at them, her mind racing, trying to process this new, insane information. She looked at me, her eyes filled with a desperate, pleading hope. "You'd have to... get him naked? Here? Now?" She shook her head, a flush of embarrassment creeping up her neck. "I'll... I'll talk to Jeffrey's mom. I'll tell her."

Before anyone could say anything else, she and Lisa were gone. We all listened to the frantic clatter of their footsteps down the stairs, then the sound of the back door slamming shut. Then, the silence.

And then, the giggles started.

First it was just a little snort from Sarah, but then Mia's shoulders started shaking, and pretty soon, all three of them were doubled over, howling with laughter.

"Oh my god," Mia gasped, wiping a tear from her eye. "She's actually going to do it. She's going to ask another mom to let us strip her kid naked."

"It's the most beautiful thing I've ever heard," Sarah wheezed, clinging to Emma for support. "This is better than I ever, ever planned."

Even Emma was laughing, her face crimson, a hiccup of pure glee escaping her lips. "He's going to get all red, and he has such big ears," she managed to get out between giggles. I could only sit there, naked on my bed, feeling a knot of dread tighten in my stomach.

"Come on, sick boy," Mia said, grabbing my arm and yanking me to my feet. "You're not getting out of this. You're Exhibit A. The star of the show."

They basically frog-marched me out of my room and down the stairs, still naked, my penis a shriveled, embarrassed little thing between my legs. My mom was already back in the kitchen, a look of frantic purpose on her face.

"They said yes," she announced, not even looking at me. "Mrs. Malone is home. She wants Jeffrey to get the test. He's in the backyard with his brothers. Everyone, come with me."

Another walk of shame. But this one was worse. I wasn't just going from my room to my living room. I was going outside. In broad daylight. To another person's house. I thought about making a run for it, about bolting for the front door, but where would I go? I was naked. And my mom, and the girls, and my sister were right behind me. I was trapped.

We didn't go out the front. We went out the back door, into our little fenced-in yard. The sun was hot on my bare skin. The grass felt weird and ticklish under my feet. We piled through the little gate in the fence that led to the Malone's yard.

And there they were. The Malone's. A whole other family, about to get sucked into my nightmare.

Jeffrey was standing by the swing set, looking sullen and defiant. He was just a skinny kid, all elbows and knees, with a constellation of freckles across his nose and those giant, dumbo-like ears I remembered. His little brothers, Jason and Joe, were wrestling in the grass, a giggling, tangle of limbs. They didn't seem to notice us at first.

Their mom, Mrs. Malone, saw us, though. And my entire body went hot with a new, deeper level of shame. She was sitting on a patio chair, a glass of something sparkly in her hand. And she was... young. Way too young to have three kids. She had long, dark hair pulled back in a messy ponytail, and a big smile, the kind that showed all her teeth. She was wearing a really small crop top and some little cutoff shorts. She was, like, super hot.

And then she saw me.

Her smile didn't falter, but it changed. Her eyes, which were a really bright green, got a little wider. They drifted down, from my face, to my chest, and then lower. They didn't just glance. They lingered. A slow, warm blush crept up her neck, and she took a slow sip of her drink, her eyes still locked on my... you know. I wanted to die. I wanted to crawl into a hole and pull the grass in over me.

"Hi, Kelsey," she said, her voice all warm and friendly to my mom, but her gaze was still on me. "Tommy, it's SO nice to see you."

"Hi, Tiffany," my mom said, all business. "We're here. We need to run the Two-Minute Pointing Test."

Mrs. Malone's face got serious and worried, just like my mom's had. "Yes, of course. I've been so worried. All that irritability... the other day, he kicked a hole in the wall because I told him he had to come in for dinner."

"My goodness," Mom said. "It is the syndrome. Girls, the protocol. All three of them." She gestured to the three boys, who had now stopped what they were doing and were staring at us. Jason and Joe had stopped wrestling and were just standing there, their mouths hanging open. They had just spotted me. The naked boy.

"Wait," Mrs. Malone said, her eyes wide. "All three of them? Not just Jeffrey?"

"We have to be thorough, Tiffany," Mia said, stepping forward like she owned the place. "The syndrome can lie dormant in younger subjects. The earlier we catch it, the better. We need to establish a baseline for all of them."

Mrs. Malone looked at her three sons, a real flicker of fear in her eyes. "Okay," she said, her voice a little shaky. "Okay, do what you have to do. For their health."

And that was it. The green light. For all three of them.

"Alright, boys," Sarah chirped, clapping her hands together. "You know the drill. Shirts off, then shorts. Everything. You too, Jason, Joe."

Jeffrey looked like he was about to be sick. "What? Mom! Did you hear what that girl just said?" he whined. He had a higher-pitched, still-a-kid kind of whine.

"Do what the girls say, Jeffrey," Mrs. Malone said, her firm mom-voice coming out. "It's for your own good. And don't think you two are getting out of it," she said, pointing at her littlest ones. "Off with it."

Jeffrey crossed his arms over his chest. "No! This is stupid! I'm not doing it! I'm not taking my clothes off in front of HER!" He pointed a trembling finger at my little sister, Lisa.

"I can always take them off for him," Lisa offered, skipping over to him with a huge, mean grin on her face. She actually looked like she was enjoying this. "I'm Tommy's little house helper. And now I'm going to be your little big helper, too!"

Her threat worked. Jeffrey's face went beat red. He grumbled something under his breath but started to yank his T-shirt over his head. He was skinny, with no muscle at all, and the T-shirt got stuck for a second, making him even more flustered.

Jason, the ten-year-old, looked like he was going to cry. He slowly pulled his shirt off, hugging it to his chest like a security blanket, his eyes darting from me to the girls to his mom, a look of pure panic on his face.

Little Joe, the seven-year-old, was the only one who didn't seem to care. He just giggled and stripped off everything in one go, then did a funny little dance, waving what was basically a belly button on a stick in the air.

Even Mrs. Malone looked at him and giggled before catching herself. "Joseph, get over here," she said, a blush on her own cheeks.

"Okay," Mia said, pulling out her pink measuring tape. "Now for the shorts, boys."

One by one, the shorts and underwear came off. I saw Jason's little penis shrivel up until it was basically gone. I wanted to tell him it was okay, that I knew the feeling, but I couldn't speak.

Then Jeffrey's shorts came off. He was smaller than me, but bigger than I was expecting for a 12-year-old. He had a lot of dark hair down there, too, almost as much as me.

Lisa let out a little squeal, a high-pitched sound of pure, unadulterated excitement. She pointed a shaky finger right at him. "His penis is so cute!" she chirped, her face flushed. "And it has little hairs around it! I didn't know a boy my age could have hairs!"

Jeffrey went pale, then bright red, then pale again. He slapped a hand over his privates, but it was too late. His own little classmate had seen it all. And was, apparently, a huge fan.

Lisa pranced over to him, circling him like a shark. "You're not so tough now, huh, Jeffrey?" she taunted, poking him in the chest. "You can't push your brothers down when you're all naked like this, can you?"

"Leave me alone!" he whined, swatting at her hand.

"He's not pointing yet," Sarah observed from a few feet away. "He needs some Point and Praise."

"He does!" Emma chimed in. "He needs to know we appreciate him, even when he's soft like that."

Lisa got right in front of him, her hands on her hips. I watched her, and I saw the way her own eyes lit up with an evil sort of power as she started her chant. She had learned from the best. From my own personal tormentors.

"You are so cute, Jeffrey," Lisa started, her voice high and sweet. "I can see your little pee-pee. And your little ball-sack. You're so cute naked. My brother is cute naked too, but you're cuter because you're my age, and in my class at school. And I like that I'll always know what you look like naked from now on."

Jeffrey just stood there, shaking, a strangled sort of squeak coming from his throat. His brothers were just staring, their little mouths open. "What? Are you crazy? Don't say those things!" he gasped, his hands covering himself more tightly.

"But it's my job," Lisa said, her bottom lip jutting out. "I'm Tommy's little house helper, but now I guess I'm all of your guys' helper. I have to do it."

"I see you, Jeffrey," Mia added from a short distance away. "You are naked for us. But I'm not naked for you, Jeffrey. I'm wearing all my clothes."

"Jeffrey, move your hands. The girls need to see what they are working with," his mom demanded of him.

A fresh, deep wave of shame and pity for him washed over me. His own mom was making him show us his penis. Reluctantly, like he was being forced to lift a car with his bare hands, he moved his hands. And right away... it twitched. A slow, sleepy kind of twitch. Then again. It was waking up. It grew a little, plumping up, still soft and floppy, but pointing up, in that early-teen way that only a boy's penis can.

"His little thing is waking up! It's starting to point a little bit!" Lisa chirped excitedly, and I could have died. It looked like Jeffrey could have died right along with me. He was so embarrassed he was almost purple.

"Look! His butt is adorable!" Emma whispered as he turned to the side a little, trying to hide what was happening, and Lisa let out a happy giggle.

"He is so much cuter now that he can't boss everyone around. Now we can just see everything," Lisa said, her voice full of glee.

"It won't go down!" Jeffrey whimpered, sounding like he was about to cry. "I can't make it stop!"

"That's okay. You're supposed to make it point at us now," Lisa told him sweetly. "It means we can appreciate you more."

"I don't want you to appreciate me!" he yelped, looking like he was about to have a total meltdown.

"He's pointing. That's enough for me," Mia said. She knelt and did the same thing she'd done to me, measuring Jeffrey right there in front of everyone. "Three-point-one inches hard. Good size for a boy his age. Circumference is... we'll just note it as 'inadequate'," she said loud enough for everyone to hear as she scribbled in her notebook.

"Now the timer," Sarah said, pulling out her phone and setting it. "Two minutes. Let's see. Lisa, keep pointing and praising him."

We all stood there, a weird, staring circle around Jeffrey. His poor little penis was pointing up at an almost ninety-degree angle, the tip a bright, angry red. He was breathing hard, little panicked pants. Jason just stood there, trying to make himself invisible. Little Joe was starting to get fidgety.

"Okay, little penis, I can see you!" Lisa started right in. She was in her element, a tiny drill sergeant of shame. "And you're so brave for pointing at me! You can't see my special parts, Jeffrey, but I can see yours! You're so all naked!"

"Mom!" Jeffrey cried out, looking at his mom with this horrible, betrayed look on his face. But Mrs. Malone just looked away, taking another big gulp of her drink. He was on his own.

"And look at my cute top, Jeffrey! You'll never see my boobies!" Lisa chirped. "But I get to see all of you! Even your cute little butt!" She poked him in the back, and he let out a yelp. "And your little hairy nuts!"

"Hairy?" Joe asked, looking down at Jeffrey. Then he looked down at himself. "I don't have hairy nuts. When will I get hairy nuts, Mommy?"

"Not for a long, long time, sweetie," Mrs. Malone said, her face a deep, burning red.

"It's okay that you don't have hairs, Joe! Your little pee-pee is still very cute, and I can see all of it!" Lisa told him, trying to be an equal-opportunity tormentor. Joe just giggled, oblivious.

My eyes drifted over to Mrs. Malone. She wasn't looking at her sons anymore. She was looking at me. And her smile was back. She took a sip of her sparkling drink, and her eyes just... stayed on me. On my whole naked body. I could feel them on my skin like a touch. A hot, tingly touch.

Then it happened. My own body betrayed me. I could feel it. A slow, creeping warmth started in my groin. The stupid, dumb, traitorous part of my body that I hated more than anything else in the world started to wake up. It wasn't because of anything Lisa was saying to Jeffrey. It wasn't even the sight of the three of them standing there, naked and shivering. It was her. It was Mrs. Malone's stare.

My face went so hot I thought I might pass out. I tried to think about anything else. Nothing worked. My own penis, which had been behaving itself, started to twitch. A sleepy little stir at first, then another one, more insistent this time. I tried to casually cross my legs, but Sarah was there.

"Uh-uh-uh, Tommy," she said, stepping in front of me and gently pushing my legs apart with her foot. "We need to observe you, too. You could have a relapse at any moment." Her own gaze was fixed on my lap, and my erection answered her silent call, growing and hardening until it was pointing straight up at the bright blue sky, a traitorous flag of my shame.

Mrs. Malone let out a soft, little "oh" that was way too loud. She shifted in her chair, crossing one long, tanned leg over the other. "Well, a certain young man has a very... cute penis too," she said, her voice sounding all husky. The way she said "cute" made my whole body shiver.

Lisa didn't even notice. She was too busy tormenting her new favorite project. "Look at you! All the boys are all naked! And I'm not! You can't see my butt, Jeffrey, but I can see yours!"

The timer went off with that same cheerful, happy little tune that made me want to punch a wall. Mia silenced it, a small, satisfied smirk on her face.

"Time's up," she announced, her voice full of fake gravity. "Conclusion: The entire Malone household is experiencing an outbreak of Toxic Male Syndrome. We have three confirmed cases."

"Confirmed," Sarah repeated, her arm sliding around my waist. She pulled me closer, until I was pressed right up against her. "They all need extractions. All of them."

The words hung in the air, and Jeffrey started to cry. Real, silent tears streaming down his flushed face. Jason's lip was trembling, and he looked like he was about to join him. Even little Joe's cheerful giggles had stopped, replaced by a look of wide-eyed confusion and fear.

"Okay, everyone, back to our house!" my mom said, clapping her hands together like she was a kindergarten teacher, and we were her class of field-trippers. "The procedure needs to be done in a controlled environment."

So we all marched inside, our strange little naked parade. Mrs. Malone shepherded her three boys ahead of her, herding them towards the couch like a shepherdess with her flock of doomed lambs. My mom brought up the rear, her face a pale, worried mask.

Jeffrey, sat down on the couch, squished together in the middle. His mom sat on one side of him, and my mom sat on the other, their hands resting on his shoulders like he was a king on a throne of shame. The two younger boys, Jason and Joe, were told to sit on the floor, a little, naked, pointed audience.

"Lisa, you need to do the three boys," Sarah said, her voice low and serious as she handed my sister the big white bottle of aloe lotion. "The procedure works best when a peer, a female peer of close age, is the primary extractor. It helps with... the psychological comfort."

Lisa's eyes went wide, like Sarah had just handed her the keys to a brand-new car. "Me? I get to do all three of them?" she breathed, a huge, wicked grin spreading across her face.

"It's your official helper duty," Mia confirmed, her tone as serious as a surgeon's. "Start with Jeffrey. He has the most advanced case. His blockage is likely the most... substantial."

Jeffrey's face went from red to a kind of sickly green. "No way! Not her! Anyone but her!" he squeaked, trying to scramble away, but the two moms held him in place. "Mom!"

"Let the girls do what they need to do, Jeffrey," Mrs. Malone said, her voice firm, but her eyes kept flicking over towards me, and then towards Mia, who was still scribbling in her stupid notebook.

"And remember, Lisa, this is the most important part," Sarah continued, a dark, excited glint in her blue eyes. "After the... 'sneeze'... you must continue the stimulation for a full three minutes. The toxins are clingy. The extra stimulation helps get the last few stubborn bits out. If you stop too soon, the blockage could reform even stronger."

"Three minutes? After it... goes off?" Lisa repeated, her face a mask of intense concentration. A whole new world of understanding was dawning in her big, brown eyes. She wasn't just going to make him cum. She was going to make him keep... cumming. The power of it was almost too much for her to process. "Okay," she said, her voice a determined little whisper. "I can do that."

"No! Don't! Don't let her touch me!" Jeffrey was thrashing around now, but his mom and my mom were like a pair of vice grips, their hands on his shoulders holding him down. It was the most pathetic, helpless thing I had ever seen.

"She's just a little girl!" he sobbed, looking at Lisa, who was now squeezing a huge blob of cold, aloe lotion into her hands.

"I'm eleven," Lisa said, puffing out her chest with pride. "I'm in sixth grade. I'm old enough to do this, and Mom says I'm your helper. So you need to cooperate." She got on her knees in front of the couch, her face set in a look of stern determination.

Lisa wrapped her slippery, aloe-covered hands around Jeffrey's pointing penis. His whole body went rigid, and he let out a strangled little gasp. "Your penis is so cute, Jeffrey, but it looks like it needs a good massage,"

"Good, Lisa. Now move your hand up and down, like you're trying to start a fire with a stick. A nice, steady rhythm," Mia instructed, her dark eyes glued to the scene, her notebook balanced on her knee.

Lisa did exactly as she was told. Her small, lotion-slicked hand moved up and down Jeffrey's shaft in a clumsy but determined rhythm. He was squirming, his face a blotchy red, trying to wriggle away from her, but the combined force of the two moms was too much. He was pinned.

"It feels... weird," Lisa said, her nose crinkling.

"Just keep going," Mia urged. "The tissue needs to be stimulated. The blockage is... dense. Hard to break down."

"This is kinda fun," Lisa announced with a giggle. "Your little penis is so warm, Jeffrey! And so smooth with the lotion on! But you can't even see my tummy, Jeffrey. My shirt is covering it up so you can't even see it wiggle."

A little whimper escaped Jeffrey’s lips, a sound that was half-shame, half... something else. He squeezed his eyes tighter. But I saw it. A tiny, involuntary twitch in his hips, a little push upwards into Lisa's stroking hand. A betrayal. His body was starting to like it, even if his mind was screaming.

"See? He likes it! He's pushing up! I can feel it!" Lisa squealed with glee. "He's pointing so hard for me!"

"That's the physiological response we're looking for," Mia said, her approval warming her clinical tone. "Keep going, Lisa. Don't speed up. Maintain the tempo."

Lisa's hand kept moving. Up and down. Up and down. Jeffrey's whimpers got a little softer, a little more... breathy. The angry thrashing of his hips calmed down, replaced by a slow, almost rhythmic rocking. He couldn't help it. His stupid, traitorous body was responding.

"Is it... supposed to do that?" Lisa asked, her eyes wide as a little bead of clear, slippery fluid appeared at the tip of Jeffrey's penis.

"That's a very positive sign," Mia said with an approving nod. "That's the healthy liquid, starting to loosen the blockage. Keep going, Lisa. You're doing great. Try moving your hand a little faster now."

The praise went to Lisa's head. She leaned in closer, her straight brown hair brushing against Jeffrey's trembling thigh. "Your little penis is working so hard for me, Jeffrey," she chirped, her voice full of a new, confident power. "I can feel it getting all twitchy in my hand. My skin is getting all shivery, but you can't see it, can you? No, because I'm all covered up in my shorts and my t-shirt."

Jeffrey let out a choked sob. He started to thrash again, but it was different this time. It wasn't a desperate attempt to escape. It was an uncontrollable, instinctual bucking of his hips, pushing himself deeper into her moving hand.

"It feels so... weird," Lisa said, a note of scientific curiosity in her voice as she started to move her hands up and down, her slick palms gliding over him. "It's all... hard and hot. And it's getting harder. Look!" She pointed with her chin, a proud little smile on her face. He was, indeed, even harder than before. And twitching like crazy.

"Okay, focus on the extraction, Lisa," Mia said, her tone serious. She was leaning against the wall, her arms crossed, watching the whole scene like she was directing a movie.

"I am," Lisa said, and went back to work with an intensity I'd only ever seen her use on her video games. Her little hands were moving in a steady, confident rhythm, not fast, but determined.

Jeffrey was breathing in these short, panicky little gasps. His eyes were squeezed shut, and he had his teeth gritted so hard I could see the muscles in his jaw jumping. It was like watching someone get a really painful shot at the doctor's office, but way, way worse. I wanted to look away, but I couldn't. It was like watching a car crash. You knew you shouldn't look, but you just had to.

"It's starting to... to feel... funny," Jeffrey whimpered, and his hips started to move, like he was trying to get away, or trying to get more, he probably didn't even know.

"Jeffrey, I know you've played with your penis before. Stop acting like this is so awful," his mom warned him.

"I can't! I've never... it's her! Oh gosh, oh gosh..." he moaned, looking Lisa dead in her eyes.

"He's bucking!" Lisa squealed, her giggles mixing with a gasp of genuine surprise. "He's a bucking bronco!"

"Please! Please, don't stop! Lisa, please!" he begged, the words a tortured, confusing mess that spilled out of him without any thought. He was lost.

"Gosh, I think he's enjoying this! And he's the one who told me to stop just a second ago. Make up your mind!" Lisa giggled, her head thrown back, her laughter a peal of pure, unadulterated glee. She was a goddess, and this squirming, begging boy was her worshiper. She tightened her grip, her slick little hand flying up and down his shaft in a fast, jerky rhythm that was fueled by her own giddy excitement.

I could tell Lisa was loving this. Her whole face was lit up with this intense, focused glow. "Jeffrey, your little pee-pee is so cute, and so, so sensitive! It's almost like a little baby animal, all shaky and shy. But you're the bully in my class, and I've got you by the penis right now." Her words were like little daggers, each one making him flinch.

"Wouldn't you love to know how sensitive everything is underneath my panties is, Jeffrey?" Lisa asked him, her hands still working their magic.

"Lisa," our mom seemed like she was going to scold her. "You shouldn't be talking about your private parts."

"But he can't see them," Lisa said. "He has a tiny penis, every bit of it showing, and he can't see my private parts at all. I think that's fair."

"Lisa is just using point and praise, Mrs. Miller. It's an essential part of the process," Mia explained.

"See, Jeffrey?" Lisa said, her eyes narrowing. She squeezed him, a firm, possessive grip that made him cry out. "You can't be a big tough bully when you're naked and I'm holding onto your little pointy thing. You're going to be nice to me at school now. And to everyone. Or I'm going to tell everyone about your blockage."

"It's not... I'm... oh no..." Jeffrey's hips bucked, and a long, pathetic moan escaped his lips. He wasn't just cumming, he was convulsing, a strangled sob escaping him. A thin little jet of white spurted out, landing on his own stomach. "Ugh!" he cried. "It's done! Stop! Stop it now!"

"Remember, three minutes," Sarah chirped. "Don't stop, Lisa. We need to get the last of the toxins out."

"But it's so sensitive!" he whined, trying to squirm away. "Please, Lisa! Please stop! You got it all out!"

"Don't be so dramatic," Lisa said with a little giggle. She sounded just like Sarah. She kept her hands moving, her slick palms rubbing him hard and fast. His penis had started to soften a little after the 'sneeze', but Lisa's relentless massage was pulling it right back to attention. It was a strange, rubbery kind of hard, and poor Jeffrey looked like he was being electrocuted. His whole body was twitching, a fine sheen of sweat covering his freckled face.

"It's not that bad. And I'm not done yet," Lisa said, a mean little smirk playing on her lips. "It's my job to get you all emptied out. And besides, you're not so scary now. Are you, Jeffrey? You're not going to push your little brother around anymore." She glanced at Jason, who was still sitting on the floor, watching with wide, scared eyes.

"I won't! I promise! Just please... stop..." he begged, a fresh wave of tears streaming down his face. But Lisa was in charge now. And she wasn't letting go.

"I think I'm going to try for five minutes," Lisa announced, to no one in particular. She looked over at Sarah, who gave her a big, proud thumbs-up. "Just to make extra sure you're better."

"Five?" Jeffrey squeaked, his whole body tensing up. "No! Please! Not five!"

But it was too late for begging. Lisa's hands were like a machine. She was a natural. She learned from the best.

"No! Please! Stop! I can't!" he wailed, a new wave of fresh, agonized pleasure crashing over him. "Please, it's too much! It's too much!" He thrashed wildly, bucking his hips like a fish on a hook, but the two moms held him fast. He was completely powerless.

"Oh, don't be so dramatic, Jeffrey," Lisa said, a pout playing on her lips. Her teasing was so natural, so practiced. "It's just a little massage. You're being such a baby. You're so sensitive."

"Stay focused, Lisa," Mia commanded, her dark eyes alight with the thrill of scientific discovery. "The tissue is now hyper-sensitive. Continued stimulation is required to fully evacuate the remaining toxin build-up. You must maintain the tempo for the full three-minute post-expulsion window. His reactions are textbook. They confirm our hypothesis."

Lisa's face lit up with pride. Textbook! Her little extraction was textbook! She redoubled her efforts, she took hold of his aching erection with both hands and pumped. She held on, her knuckles white with the effort, her small, determined hands working him over with a mix of childish glee and a fierce, newfound purpose.

"You're doing so good, Jeffrey! You're being such a good boy for the girl you sit two rows in front of," she cooed, her words a sharp, cruel contrast to the desperate sobs racking his body.

"Please, God, please, I'm begging you, Lisa," he sobbed, his words a jumbled, incomprehensible mess. His body was a knot of overstimulated nerves, every touch a lightning bolt of pure, agonizing pleasure. "No more! I can't take it! Make it stop!"

"But why?" Lisa chirped, her head cocked to the side, a look of perfect, feigned confusion on her face. "You were just telling me not to stop a second ago! You should make up your mind!" She let out another peal of bright, beautiful laughter that made my own skin crawl. "It's so funny! Your body doesn't know what it wants!"

"Please... please..." he whimpered, his whole body thrashing, but the moms held him firmly.

"I have to get all the toxins out," she said, a singsong quality to her voice now. She was enjoying this way too much. "And it looks like there's another one building up already. You're all sick, Jeffrey. So, so sick." Her little hands started moving faster.

Jeffrey's body arched off the couch, a hoarse cry tearing from his throat. A second, smaller jet of white shot out, landing right next to the first one. His legs started to shake, a funny, uncontrollable trembling.

Lisa squealed with delight. "I did it again! Mom, I made him sneeze again!" She sounded so proud, like she'd just won the science fair. And she still didn't stop. Her hands kept moving, relentless and cruel, over Jeffrey's super sensitive penis.

He wasn't even fighting it anymore. He was just... limp. His whole body went slack, like all the strings had been cut. His head lolled to the side, and he was just staring at the ceiling, this blank, empty look on his face. A little drool was starting to leak from the corner of his mouth.

"Whoa," Joe said, pointing at the drool. "Jeffrey's a zombie now."

"He's not a zombie," Lisa said, a huff of irritation in her voice. "He's... relaxed. The toxins are almost all gone. He just needs one more sneeze."

With one last, vigorous rub, she coaxed a final, pathetic little dribble out of him. It wasn't even a spurt, just a little white bead that oozed from the tip. Then she finally let go. His penis flopped down, all red and sad looking on his leg. He just laid there, blinking slowly, looking like he'd forgotten how to be a person. He was a blissful, broken little zombie. Just like she'd wanted.

"You can stop now, sweetie," my mom said to Lisa, but my sister was already looking past Jeffrey, at Jason, who was still frozen on the floor.

"I'm not a doctor," Mia said, cleaning her glasses on her shirt, "but I'd say the extraction was a success. The subject is fully drained, and the toxins are successfully removed. For now. We should monitor him for... well, for at least the rest of the day. He should be kept naked."

Mrs. Malone nodded, her face a mixture of horror and relief. "Yes. Of course. Whatever's best. Thank you," she said, looking at my mom, then her gaze slid over to me, and stayed there. A hot, tingly feeling started in my stomach. "Thank you all. And you, Lisa. You... you did a great job."

Lisa beamed, puffing her chest out with pride. She loved this. She was good at this.

"He looks better, honey," Mrs. Malone said, leaning over to pat Jeffrey's sweaty cheek. "Doesn't he?"

Jeffrey just blinked at her, a dazed, empty look in his eyes. He looked at Lisa, who was standing over him with her hands on her hips, a little bit of Jeffrey's cum still on her wrist. He looked at his mom. And then he looked at me, at my own nakedness, and for a second, we were brothers in shame. But then the most confusing words I had ever heard came out of his mouth.

"Thank you," he whispered, his voice hoarse and raspy. "Thank you for... making me better, Lisa."

Lisa's grin got even wider. "You're welcome. That's what helpers are for." Then her eyes darted to Jason. "Okay, whose next?"

Jason's face went pale. "No," he whispered, shaking his head. "No, please. Not me. I feel fine. I don't have the... the sickness."

"But your penis is pointing. All your penises are pointing, besides Jeffrey's now," Lisa said, pointing at him and little Joe too. "It's our job to fix it."

"It's true, Jason," Mrs. Malone said, her voice a little shaky, but firm. "We have to take care of this. All of it. For your health." Her eyes flicked over to me again, and this time, I saw it. A look that wasn't just pity, or curiosity. A look that was hungry.

Jason slowly uncurled from his little ball on the floor. He stood up, his body all thin and stringy. He was even smaller than Jeffrey, with not a single hair on his pale body. His penis was still pointing, a tiny, determined little thing that looked comical compared to the rest of him. He had a miserable look on his face, like he was walking to the electric chair.

"Okay, Lisa," Mia said from the corner, a note of excitement in her scientific tone. "This one's a baseline. A younger subject. The reaction could be... illuminating. Use the full protocol."

Jason stood there, shivering, not just from fear, but because my mom had the AC blasting. "I don't want to," he whimpered, looking at his mom with big, tear-filled eyes.

Mrs. Malone just shook her head, a sad, tired smile on her face. "It'll be over soon, sweetie. Just be a good boy for Lisa. Let her help you."

Lisa, a seasoned pro now after her one successful procedure, just sighed, like this was a real inconvenience for her. "Fine, come on," she said, grabbing him by the arm and pulling him over to the armchair. She sat him down and plopped herself on the floor in front of him, getting right to business.

"Honestly, Jason," she said with a huff, squirting a big glob of aloe into her hands. "You're being such a baby about this. It's for your own good."

He squeezed his eyes shut as her cold, slippery hands wrapped around him. He was smaller than Jeffrey, and Lisa's hands almost covered his whole penis. He let out a little strangled noise.

"We're practically the same age, you know," Lisa started, her words already starting their toxic little work. "You're ten, I'm eleven. That's practically nothing. And from now on, whenever I see you, I'll know exactly what you look like. Naked. Every little bit of you." She said it with a weird sort of satisfaction in her voice. Like she was adding him to her collection.

"I can see your tiny penis, Jason. And your tiny ball-sack," she said, starting to move her hands in that same slow, steady rhythm. "And you can't see me at all. See my shorts?" She wiggled her hips a little. "You can't see my butt. Or my secret little girl parts. But I can see all of your boy parts."

A fresh wave of sobs shook Jason's tiny body. But, just like Jeffrey, I saw it. A little twitch. A little push upwards into Lisa's slick hands. His body was a traitor, just like mine.

"It's okay, Jason," she cooed, her mocking tone dripping with fake sympathy. "You don't have to be shy. Your little penis is being so brave for me. It's pointing so hard." She sped up a little, her hands slipping and sliding over him. "My kitty's getting all tingly, Jason, and you'll never get to see it. You'll never get to feel how warm it is." She giggled, a sound that was pure sugar and pure poison all at once.

Jason squeezed his eyes shut, a fresh wave of silent tears tracing paths down his pale, freckled cheeks. He started to tremble, a fine, shivering tremor that wracked his small frame.

"His skin is so sensitive," Lisa observed, her face a mask of clinical concentration. "He's trembling all over! He must be really, really sick."

"That's a very astute observation, Lisa," Mia said, a warm, approving tone in her voice that she only ever used with Lisa. She looked down at her notebook, a fresh page already prepped. "The oldest subject, Jeffrey, had a significant expulsion event. He was successfully, thoroughly extracted. However," she added, her eyes gleaming with the thrill of new data, "the ten-year-old subject, Jason, is pre-pubescent. His reproductive system is not yet developed to the point of producing semen. His body will react differently to the stimulation. The blockage, when coalesced and brought to a peak, will be reabsorbed back into the body's primary filtration system. The kidneys. He won't have the big sneeze that Jeffrey had, but he'll feel... different. A kind of full, achy release. It will still flush out the toxins."

My mom and Mrs. Malone were nodding along, their faces etched with a worried, serious understanding. They looked like two medical students, listening to a lecture. I felt a surge of hot anger rise in my chest, a burning, helpless rage.

Jason, of course, heard the "no sneeze" part and must have thought it was his only way out. "Please, don't!" he whimpered, finally opening his red-rimmed eyes. "Please, Lisa, I'll be good! I'll be good from now on, I promise! I swear!"

"You didn't do anything wrong, silly," Lisa said, shaking her head at him with a look of infinite pity. She really had the act down perfectly. "You're just sick. A very, very sick little boy. And it's my job to help you. We're practically the same age, Jason," she reminded him, her hands still moving on him, the rhythm never changing. "And I've seen everything now. There are no secrets between us anymore. Well, you have no secrets from me, but I still have all my secrets from you. I'll know exactly what you look like naked for the rest of our lives. You'll see me in the halls at school, and I'll see you, and I'll remember that I'm the one who made you all better. But you'll never get to see any of my secret parts. You'll never see what I look like under my clothes. I'll just see you." Her voice was this weird, hypnotic mix of syrupy sweetness and pure, undiluted power.

A low, guttural moan escaped Jason's lips. His hips started to buck, a desperate, confused rhythm. His small, pale body went rigid, a little arch in his back, and he let out a long, shuddering moan. "I... I... Oh! Oh!" he suddenly gasped, his whole body arching off the couch. His back bowed in a perfect, rigid curve, a little statue of pure, agonized sensation. His toes curled. His face turned a bright, blotchy red.

And then he was bucking his little hips all over the place. "Aaaah! Aaaaah! Stoooooop!" he wailed, a sound so pitiful it made my own stomach ache. But he wasn't pushing away anymore. He was riding her hand. Pushing into it. His mind was gone, lost in a fog of intense, overwhelming feeling.

"His kidneys are flushing!" Lisa shrieked with glee, her own little face flushed with the thrill of her success. "Look at him go! He's flushing out all the yucky poison!"

His little hips pumped and bucked, a frantic, jerky rhythm, but there was no mess. No sneeze. Just a boy, overwhelmed, lost in a feeling he was too young to understand.

"Please! Please! No more! I can't! I can't!" Jason sobbed, the words ragged, torn from him.

Lisa was just watching him with the biggest, proudest smile on her face, waiting for him to calm down. But he didn't.

"Okay, it's been a whole minute, and he's still super twitchy, and still pointing! I'm supposed to keep going, right? For three whole minutes?" Lisa asked, looking at Mia for confirmation.

"Yes, Lisa," Mia confirmed. "To ensure all of the residual toxins are cleared from the renal tubes." She said it with such a straight face, like she was reading from a dictionary.

Lisa took that as her green light. She jumped right back into it with both hands.

"I can't believe how sensitive you are after the first one, you little baby," Lisa cooed, her voice dripping with a sweet, syrupy poison.

Jason just wailed, a long, high-pitched sound of pure, helpless misery. "It's too much! Please! Aaaah! It's happening again! Lisa, stop! Stooop!"

But she didn't. She kept stroking him, her slick hands working over him, pushing him right back over that edge before he even had a chance to come down from the first wave. His little body started thrashing wildly again, a fresh convulsion of feeling that had him completely overwhelmed.

She was getting better and better at this with each boy. I could see it. The way she held him, the way she talked, she was learning. She was the star pupil in a class I never wanted to exist.

"NOOOOOOOO!" Jason screamed, a raw, ragged cry that was so full of pure pain it made my own skin crawl. His body, which had been limp with the aftershocks of his orgasm, went rigid again, this time with a fresh wave of pure agony. "IT HURTS! IT HURTS! IT'S TOO SENSITIVE! PLEASE, LISA, PLEASE, I'M BEGGING YOU!"

"Oh, don't be so dramatic," Lisa said with a theatrical sigh, a perfect imitation of her own torturer's words from just moments before. "Your little pee-pee is just cleaning itself out. But you're telling me to stop when it's still pointing for me? Make up your mind!"

His hips bucked wildly, an attempt to escape that only drove him deeper into her tormenting touch. The pleasure, which had just been a tsunami of sensation, was now a thousand tiny needles, each one pricking the most sensitive part of his body.

"It's funny that your body is confused, too!" Lisa chirped, her cheerful little laugh a stark contrast to Jason's sobs of agony. "Your penis is all tingly and sore and still wants to be touched, but you don't want me to touch it! That's why this sickness is so tricky! You're a very sick little boy, Jason, and I'm making you all better."

"Stop... please... I'll be good... I swear..." he begged, the words barely recognizable. He was a blubbering mess, a mess Lisa had made. She was the mess-maker. She loved it.

"And I'll get to see you in the halls at school," Lisa continued, her voice a sweet, happy singsong as she brought him to the edge again and again, her hands never ceasing their relentless motion. "And I'll just smile at you, Jason. Because I'll know your secret. That I saw everything. That I'm the one who touched you like this. And that you thanked me for it."

Jason let out a final, long shuddering cry, and went completely limp, just like Jeffrey had before him. He stared at the ceiling, but his eyes weren't seeing anything. He was gone. Checked out. A little, happy, blissed-out zombie. "Thank you, Lisa. For... making me better."

Lisa beamed, a look of pure, unadulterated triumph on her face. "You're welcome, Jason," she said. Then she turned her attention to the last boy. Little Joe. He'd just been sitting there the whole time, watching with his big, innocent eyes.

"What about you, sweetie?" Mom asked him. "Are you... pointing?"

Joe looked down at his own little penis. It was sticking straight up. "Uh-huh," he said. "My tummy feels funny. My little pee-pee is stiff." He said it with a kind of innocent wonder, not with any of the shame the older boys had. He didn't know any better. He was just going along with it.

"Then it's your turn, Joey," Lisa said with a happy little sigh. She patted her hands on her shorts, trying to wipe off the lotion. It didn't really work. "This should be quick. You're the littlest."

Lisa got on her knees in front of Joe and went right back to work. She was a professional now. "It's okay, Joey. You have a very cute penis," she cooed, her soft hands wrapping around him. "I like the way it stands up for me. You can't see under my shirt, Joey, but I can see all of you."

"It feels really... really good," Joe said, a huge, goofy grin spreading across his face. He wasn't scared or embarrassed. He was just a little kid who was getting a really good-feeling massage. He closed his eyes, a happy, contented sigh escaping him.

"See, Tommy?" Sarah whispered in my ear, her breath warm and ticklish. "He loves it. Because it feels good. And because it's what we're supposed to do. We're helping him." Her arm tightened around my waist, pulling me closer. Then she reached down and gave my erection a quick little tickle with her fingertips. I jumped, a spark of electricity shooting through me. "And we know you like it too, deep down."

Mia and Emma crowded around, their faces alight with a sort of weird, scientific pride. They were like proud parents watching their kid win a spelling bee. A very, very weird spelling bee.

"His muscles are reacting favorably," Mia observed, tapping away on her phone. "The endorphins are kicking in. No sign of resistance."

"He's so cute," Emma sighed. "I just want to squeeze him."

"You're so sensitive, Joe!" Lisa cooed, her hands starting to move a little faster. "You're such a good boy, letting me help you. My tummy is all tingly, Joey, and you'll never, ever see why. Because I'm wearing my shirt and my shorts. And you're not. You're all naked and floppy for me."

"Uh-huh," Joe mumbled, squirming a little on the floor. "It feels all tingly."

"And you'll never be able to push me down or be mean to your brothers, either, Joe," Lisa continued, her lesson plan clearly applying to all ages. "Because I'm the girl who makes the yucky feelings go away. I'm the one who gets to see everything."

Joe's little body started to twitch. He scrunched up his face, a look of intense concentration on it. "Whoa," he said. "Whoa, that's a... a big funny feeling."

"That's the toxins leaving, Joey," Mia said, her a serious, scientific expression on her face.

"The flush!" Lisa shrieked, her eyes wide with the thrill of it. "Here it comes! The big kidney flush!"

A funny look came over Joe's face, a sort of surprised, wrinkled-nose expression. "Something's happening!" he chirped.

His whole little body went stiff as a board, and he let out a happy little giggle. Then he completely relaxed, going all soft and boneless on the floor. He didn't make a mess, just like Mia said he wouldn't. But it was super obvious what had happened.

"Wow. That was the best thing ever," Joe said, a huge, dopy grin spreading across his face. He looked up at Lisa, who was leaning over him, her face flushed with success. "Thanks, Lisa! You're the best helper!"

Lisa beamed, puffing out her chest, speeding up her motions as she pushed him past another wave of sensations. "You betcha," she said, giving him a playful wink. "Who's the best helper in the whole world?"

"You are!" Joe chirped, but then he started to squirm. "Whoa! Whoa, stop! It's... it's too tickly now!"

Lisa, ever the dutiful professional, was already on it. "Hang on, Joey, just a few more minutes," she said, her hands still moving, her little body wracked with shivers of pure, unadulterated bliss. "Your penis feels like jello, Joey. My hands are getting all tired, but I'm going to keep going because I want all the poison to come out."

"Lisa, I think it's done!" Joe wailed, his little hips bucking wildly. "It feels funny now, like... a lot! Too much!"

"Almost done... almost there..." Lisa chirped, her hands still working him over, pushing him into yet another wave of pure, overwhelming sensation.

"I'm a zombie, too! I'm a zombie!" he shouted, a happy, little zombie scream.

Lisa finally let him go with a proud flourish. "There! All done! Another Malone boy is cured!" She stood up, put her hands on her hips, and looked around at the rest of the room like she was the mayor of her own little city of blissed-out boys.

Everyone, even my mom, started clapping. It was the most bizarre thing I had ever seen.

"So, tell me now, boys, without any shyness, do you still want to put your clothes on?" Mia asked, her voice a soft, probing purr that was just for them. "Or does it feel... better? Safer, maybe? To stay naked? While your bodies... recalibrate."

Jeffrey was the first one to speak. He was still slumped on the couch, a dazed, goofy smile on his face. "I think... it feels better not to be wearing anything," he mumbled, looking down at himself, at the way the cool air felt on his bare skin. "My shorts feel too tight."

Jason just nodded from his chair, not even looking up. He just stared at the wall, a little twitch in his eye, like he was replaying everything in his head. He looked totally and completely wrecked.

"My willy feels sleepy," Joe chirped from the floor, a happy, little sigh escaping him. "Being naked is my favorite now."

"See?" my mom said, her face full of relief. "They feel better already."

"They all need to stay naked. For the foreseeable future," Mia announced, a look of profound satisfaction on her face. She closed her notebook with a snap that sounded like a judge's gavel. "It's the only way to ensure the blockages don't return before we can schedule a full consultation with Catalina. They should all be monitored, twenty-four seven. But I think you, Mrs. Malone, are up to the task of keeping track of your own boys." Mia looked over at Mrs. Malone, who was just looking at me, her own glass long forgotten, a hungry look in her eyes. "And since Lisa is right next door, I'm sure she's more than happy to lend a hand."

"More than happy!" Lisa squealed, doing a little happy dance right there in the living room.

Mrs. Malone just shook her head, a slow, dazed nod. "Right. Of course. No clothes. Thank you. Thank you all."
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It’s Rude to Point - Chapter 4b

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Before they could leave, Sarah, Mia, and Emma all made a look at one another, and then at me. "Looks like we need to help the oldest sick boy," Sarah said as Mia reached over and gave my hard penis a nice, slow stroke. "Tommy here looks like he might have an aneurysm if we don't help him with his carrot again."

My heart started to pound, and I tried to say something smart like I was planning to in my head. "Hey, I don't need any help with my aneurysm... " I started, but then Lisa walked over and poked my hard penis right on the tip. "Hey! That is not a toy! And stop calling my penis a carrot!" I stammered.

"It's okay, Tommy. Lisa just wanted to see how your big penis feels compared to Jeffrey's or Jason's. Don't be such a grumpy pants just because it's so much fun for us to play with it, and you are just not getting any of the fun yet," Sarah said with a laugh, as Emma joined her on my other side, reaching down and giving my balls a nice little squeeze.

"Yeah, and don't forget my house helper duties, big brother. I have to see that all of you guys are getting your treatments, and that means you, too," Lisa said, her voice dripping with the authority of her new job.

"You're not putting your hands on me," I started to say, but then Mia's cool, slender fingers joined Sarah's, and my whole body went rigid. "I swear, if you guys try to do the whole 'three minutes of hell' thing on me, I'm going to lose it."

"Who said anything about three minutes? I think we need to go for at least ten. Maybe twenty," Sarah purred. "We need to make sure our star player is properly drained. We need him to be... ready for the big game."

Her words hung in the air, and I knew they had me. My body, that traitorous, stupid thing, was already betraying me. My hips gave a little involuntary push, and I bit my lip to keep from making a sound.

"Don't fight it, Tommy," Emma whispered, her fingers gently tracing the line of my hip. Then they pushed me down on the couch, in between my mom and Mrs. Malone. "Let us help you. Let us make you... better."

This was it. This was the end. The end of my fight, the end of my resistance. The end of me. A wave of hot shame washed over me, but underneath it, there was a tiny, little flicker of... something else. Something warm and excited, something that was thrilled by the idea of all four of them, their hands, their voices, their power, all focused on me.

And then they were all around me. A storm of hands, and whispers, and soft, teasing touches. It wasn't fast and demanding like it had been with the other boys. It was slow. Torturous. A slow, deliberate breaking down of my will.

"Oh, look at this big boy," Sarah purred, her fingers tracing the vein that ran up the underside of my shaft. "He's already dripping for us. So eager. He wants this so bad."

"He's such a strong boy," Mia added, her free hand resting on my thigh, the weight of it grounding me, holding me in place. "All those football muscles, all ours to look at and touch. It's no wonder he's always pointing. His body knows its place. Here, naked for us."

"And we're all so dressed, Tommy," Emma whispered, her breath a warm caress against my ear. She gently cupped my balls in her soft hand, a small, possessive gesture that made my whole body clench. "I can feel my panties getting so wet right now, you have no idea. This pretty yellow dress is keeping me all bundled up. You'll never get to see how my body is trembling for you."

"My pussy is so swollen, I think my black panties are going to rip. You make me so horny, but you will never get to see how wet my tight black panties are for you," Mia chimed in, her thumb pressing into the sensitive skin just behind my knee, sending a jolt straight to my core.

"Don't be silly, girls. Of course, Tommy loves it. His penis is just so happy to see all of us. See? He's pointing again!" Lisa chirped, leaning over to poke me right in the belly button. "He's trying to point at my shirt so he can see what's underneath it, but he can't!"

It was too much. It was all too much. The constant stream of words, the conflicting sensations of their different touches. Sarah's firm, possessive grip, Mia's clinical, exploring touch, Emma's soft, hesitant caress, and Lisa's childish, poking curiosity. My head was spinning, my body a live wire of conflicting needs. I wanted it to stop, I wanted it to never end, I wanted to scream, I wanted to beg for more.

A strangled gasp escaped my lips, and my hips bucked, a desperate, primal movement that was no longer under my control. I was bucking for them, pushing myself into their hands.

"That's it, Tommy," Mia purred, her dark eyes glittering with triumph. "Give in. Let your body take over. Your mind is so slow, so full of silly, outdated ideas about pride and shame. Your body knows the truth. It knows what it wants."

"It wants to be our naked toy," Sarah whispered, her lips right against my ear, her hot breath sending a shiver down my spine. "It wants to be played with. To be drained. To be... ours."

My whole body tensed. My back arched off the couch, a final, desperate rebellion. The pressure in my groin was a volcano, ready to erupt. And they knew it. Their hands, their words, their very presence was pushing me right to the edge.

"Thank us, Tommy," Emma whimpered, her own arousal making her bold. "Thank us for... for taking care of you."

And then Lisa did the one thing she could have done to finally break me. She leaned right in, her face inches from mine, her own little body buzzing with an excitement she didn't even understand, and she chirped, in her sweetest, most innocent eleven-year-old voice: "It's okay, big brother. You can like it. You're supposed to like it."

And I did.

The wave crashed over me, a tidal wave of pure, overwhelming pleasure that obliterated everything else. I wasn't on the couch in my living room anymore. I wasn't being watched by my mom, or Mrs. Malone, or my sister. I was just... gone. A blinding, white-hot light flashed behind my eyes, and my whole body went rigid.

"Yes! He's erupting!" Lisa squealed with delight, her little hands clapping together.

I came. And came. And came. It wasn't a normal sneeze. It was like a dam had burst. The shame, the anger, the resistance, it all came flooding out of me in one long, agonizing, blissful wave. I could hear myself making a sound, a strangled, garbled sob that I didn't even recognize.

My back was arched so far off the couch it hurt. My toes were curled into knots. My hands were gripping the cushions so tight my knuckles were white. My mom and Mrs. Malone were holding me by the shoulders, keeping me from launching myself right off the couch and onto the floor.

But Sarah's hands, Mia's hands, Emma's hands... they didn't stop.

The wave of pleasure receded, but a new, more intense wave took its place. A wave of pure, agonizing sensitivity. The slightest touch was like lightning. The slightest brush of a finger was like a hot brand on my skin.

"Aaaah! Stop! Please, stop! No more!" I cried, my voice a ragged, shredded thing. My hips bucked wildly, trying to escape their touch, trying to crawl away, but I was trapped. Pinned between our two mothers, a prisoner of their own well-meaning horror and my own body's betrayal.

"He's getting super sensitive now, guys," Emma noted, her own eyes wide with a mix of horror and fascination.

"Of course he is. That means the toxins are at the surface, trying to escape," Mia said in her calm, scientific doctor-voice. "This is the most critical part of the extraction. The 'rinse cycle.' We have to get all the last little remnants out, or the blockage will just reform even stronger. We're doing this for your own good, Tommy."

"But it hurts! Please, it hurts! It's too much! You're torturing me!" I sobbed, tears streaming down my face. I was a mess. A blubbering, pathetic mess.

"But you're so beautiful when you're in pain, Tommy," Sarah cooed, her blue eyes shining with a dark, excited light. Her hands were relentless, her grip firm, her movements a steady, maddening rhythm that was pushing me past the point of endurance. "I love seeing you all squirmy and over-sensitive. I love knowing I'm the one making you feel like this. Look at you," she purred, her voice a hot whisper against my ear. "You're so strong, Tommy, and you're taking all this pleasure for us like such a good boy. Your naked body is trembling, and you're making my little panties so wet, but you'll never, ever get to see them."

"Yeah, you look so silly, flopping all around like a fish out of water, Tommy. My shorts are covering up my butt. And you'll never ever see it, even though it's right here in front of you," Lisa chirped, giving my leg a happy little slap. She was having the absolute best day of her life.

"Your body is reacting so perfectly, Miller," Mia said, a note of pure, scientific glee in her tone. Her cool, analytic touch was somehow worse than Sarah's possessive teasing. "Look at the way your muscles are clenching. The flush on your chest. It's all such a good sign. You're flushing out all the yucky toxins."

My hips bucked wildly, a desperate, instinctual movement to get away from their hands, to get more of their hands, I didn't even know anymore.

"Oh god, please! Please, please, please," I sobbed, the words a broken, desperate prayer. My body was on fire, every nerve ending raw and exposed. I was a guitar string, tightened to the breaking point, and they were plucking me over and over and over again. "Make it stop! I can't! I can't take anymore!"

"Mmm, look at him. Look at our powerful, broken football player, begging for us," Emma whispered, her face flushed, her eyes wide with a mix of terror and a dark, thrilling fascination. "But he's so pretty like this, all helpless and overwhelmed. I've never seen anything so... beautiful. You're not going to get to see how my bra is barely holding up my big, aching breasts. They feel so heavy, but they're all covered up for me."

The words were a constant, dripping poison, mixing with the relentless, maddening stimulation. A strange pressure started to build again, deep in my core, an ache that was so intense it was almost pain.

"No... no, don't," I whimpered, my hips bucking in a helpless, rhythmless dance. My own body was my enemy.

"Look at me, Tommy," Sarah commanded, her voice low and sharp. She let go of my aching penis, and the sudden lack of contact was a shock, a cold void that was somehow worse than the torture. She grabbed my chin, forcing me to look at her. Her blue eyes were blazing, a fire that was burning me alive. "Look at me and say the words. Tell me you love it."

I could only shake my head, a desperate, silent plea.

"If you don't," she purred, a cruel, triumphant smile playing on her lips, "we'll stop. Right now. We'll all just get up and walk away. And you'll be left here. Naked. Aching. With a blockage in your system that's bigger and more toxic than ever. You'll get sick, Tommy. So, so sick. And we won't be here to help you." Her threat hung in the air, a heavy, suffocating blanket.

"Don't... please don't leave me like this," I begged, the words a raw, shredded gasp. My erection was still standing at attention, throbbing with a desperate, lonely need for a touch that wasn't there.

"Say it," she commanded.

My mind was a battlefield. The old me, the me who valued pride and dignity, was screaming a final, defiant 'no'. But the new me, the me who was born in a haze of pleasure and pain and shame, the me who was addicted to the feeling of being completely, utterly at their mercy... he was a coward. He wanted the torture to end. But a deeper, darker part of him, a part he was just starting to understand, didn't want the good parts to stop.

"I... I..." I stammered, my whole body trembling with a need so intense it was a physical agony.

"I love it," she whispered, prompting me, her blue eyes boring into mine.

"I... I love it," I choked out, the words feeling like hot coals in my throat.

"Say the whole thing," she urged, her thumb stroking my cheek. "Tell us you love being naked. Tell us this is what you were born for. To be our naked toy."

"Please, Sarah," I whimpered, a fresh wave of tears streaming down my face.

"Just say it, Tommy," Emma chimed in, her soft voice a gentle, persuasive push over the cliff's edge. "It's okay to like it."

It was like a switch flipped inside me. The resistance just... crumbled. The fight was over. I was broken.

"I love being naked!" I sobbed, the words a torrent of shame and relief all at once. "I love it! I love being your... your toy! Please, please don't stop!"

A slow, triumphant smile spread across Sarah's face. "There's our good boy."

She rewarded me with her touch. Her hand wrapped around my aching erection again, and this time, there was no hesitation. This time, the overwhelming wave that crashed over me wasn't agony. It was bliss. Pure, unadulterated, mind-numbing bliss.

My body went limp, a puppet with all its strings cut. I sank back into the couch, into the firm, supportive hands of our mothers, who were now cooing and murmuring things like "He's so brave" and "It's almost over, sweetie." But it wasn't over. It was just beginning.

My hips started to move, a slow, lazy rhythm, pushing myself into her hand, into all their hands. I was begging for it now, my body a traitor, my mind a ghost. I was gone.

"Look at him go," Mia purred, her dark eyes alight with the thrill of her experiment, its success proven. "He's finally accepting his place."

"My strong, handsome football player," Emma whispered, her own hands exploring my chest, my stomach, my thighs, her touch soft and reverent. "All those muscles, all naked for us. You have no idea how much I wish you could see how my nipples are so hard they're almost pushing right through my dress. But you can't, because I'm all covered up. And you're not."

"I love it," I heard myself say, the words a drowsy, blissed-out mumble. "I love it."

"Mmm, say it again, my naked boy," Sarah urged, her lips against my ear, her teeth nibbling on my earlobe. "Tell me how much you love being our naked toy."

"I love it," I repeated, my hips still moving, pushing myself into her warm, slick hand. "I love being your naked toy."

A chorus of happy, feminine sighs filled the room. A deep, warm satisfaction, a feeling of rightness, settled over me. The fight was over. The shame was... still there, but it was different. It was a soft, warm blanket now, not a prickly, scratchy sweater. It was part of the fun.

And that's when I felt it. A new kind of pressure, a fresh build-up of a desperate, aching need. I was empty, but I wasn't full. I was full in a different way now. I still needed... more.

"Please," I heard myself whisper. I was surprised by the sound of my own voice. It was raspy, full of a longing I didn't know I was capable of. "Please... don't stop."

Sarah giggled, a low, throaty sound that vibrated through my entire body. "Oh, we won't, big boy," she purred, her hands never ceasing their maddening, wonderful rhythm. "We've got all day. You're ours now."

And they did.

The next twenty minutes were a blur of hands, and whispers, and a slow, delicious build-up of an agony so sweet it was almost pain. They were no longer trying to break me. They were trying to see how far they could push me. How much I could take. I was their experiment. Their toy.

And I loved it.

"Your body is so responsive, Tommy," Mia observed, her glasses perched on the end of her nose, her dark eyes alight with the thrill of discovery. "Your hips move like you were born for this. Your muscles are all tensed up, all for us."

"And your penis is so hard, and so beautiful," Emma whispered, her cheeks flushed with a pretty pink that I found myself wanting to kiss. "It's pointing right at me, like it knows how much I want to see it. And you know what I'm wearing under this dress, Tommy?" she asked, her voice a sly, teasing whisper. "I'm wearing my favorite pink lace panties. They're so soft and so pretty, and they're getting so wet right now, just looking at you. But you'll never get to see them. You'll never get to feel how soft they are against my skin."

"Please," I begged, but the word had no meaning anymore. It wasn't a plea for it to stop. It was a plea for... more. A wordless, helpless begging for the sweet torture to never, ever end.

"You have no idea how much I want to touch my own breasts right now," Mia said, her own arousal making her scientific tone waver just a little. "They're so achy, and the nipples are so hard. But you'll never get to see me touch them. You'll never get to see my tight t-shirt pull away from my skin, and the curves of my little titties jiggle."

"We're all dressed for you, Tommy," Sarah purred, her voice a low, hypnotic murmur that was the only thing holding my shattered mind together. "All dressed up, with our special parts all hidden away, all tucked away safe and sound in our panties and our bras. While you're here. All naked. All exposed. All ours."

Their words were a constant, seductive poison, mixing with the relentless, maddening stimulation, weaving a web of pure, unadulterated bliss around me. I could feel another wave building, slow and deep, a wave that was going to wash me away for good.

"I want to see you all... dressed... like this... forever," I heard myself slur, the words a drowsy, happy mumble. A hot blush crept up my chest, but it was a happy, warm blush, a blush of pure, unadulterated truth.

"Of course you do," Emma whispered, her hands gently stroking my aching, trembling thighs.

"You know, it's only right that girls wear clothes while boys should be naked," Mia added, pushing her glasses up on her nose. "It's how nature always intended it to be. Just like your big, strong penis is pointing at me, you're supposed to know your place, and know who's in charge. You'll never get to see what color panties I'm wearing, Tommy. You'll never get to see my special girl parts that are all covered up and safe."

"It's your best life, isn't it, big brother?" Lisa chirped from her spot on the floor, her little legs crossed in front of her. "You're naked in front of your mother, your sister, your best girl friends. I bet there's no girl, no woman, that you don't want to be naked in front of. And we're all dressed for you, to keep you nice and comfortable in your place. Your special little play place. I can't wait until you're the football captain, and you get all the boys on the team to come here to get their extractions, so they can all be naked, too."

My mind tried to grab onto her words, to process them, but the thought was too big, too wonderful, too terrifying. A whole team of naked football players, all writhing and begging under the hands of these beautiful, dressed girls. The thought made me dizzy.

"Imagine all those jockstrap bulges, all bare and out in the open for us, huh, Tommy?" Mia purred in my ear, as if she was reading my mind. "But you'll get the best spot, because it was your idea. You'll get to see them all get all embarrassed and then get all blissed-out. And we'll still be here. For you. All dressed, all in charge. You'll never get to see us naked, even if you beg. Which you will."

The thought was so overwhelming, so perfect, it was the final push I needed. A strangled sob escaped my lips, and my hips bucked, a desperate, primal movement that was my body's final, complete surrender to their power. The last of my pride, the last of my resistance, was washed away in a flood of pure, overwhelming ecstasy. It wasn't a sneeze. It was an earthquake. My whole body convulsed, my back arching off the couch, a silent scream tearing from my throat as wave after wave of pleasure crashed over me, a feeling so intense it was almost pain.

"Boys are supposed to be naked, while girls wear all their pretty clothes," I mumbled, a final, broken piece of truth, a drowsy, happy acceptance that cemented everything. My body went limp, a puddle of blissed-out goo, a zombie just like the Malone boys. I was theirs. I was their project. And I never wanted it to end.

But of course, it didn't. The girls were relentless, their hands still moving, a slow, teasing rhythm that was keeping the pleasure alive, a low, humming thrum under my skin.

"Oh, please, please, please," I found myself begging, but the words had no meaning now. They were a happy, hopeful prayer. A plea for this sweet, agonizing bliss to never, ever stop. My hips started to move again, a slow, lazy push, asking for more without even having to say it. "Don't stop. Please."

"I knew you'd come around, big guy," Sarah purred, her hands still moving, her touch a little softer now, more of a reward than a torture. She leaned down and pressed a soft, gentle kiss to my temple. My whole body shuddered at the feeling of her lips on my skin. "Thank you, Tommy. Thank you for... for letting us take care of you. You have no idea how much this means to us. How much you mean to us."

I opened my eyes, which I didn't even realize I'd closed, and looked up at her. At her beautiful, smiling face, her blue eyes shining with a love that was so intense it was almost scary. My own gaze drifted over her, down to her perky little breasts, which were pushed up by the cut of her top, to the soft curve of her hips, to her long, tanned legs. She was so beautiful. And she was all dressed.

A wave of pure, unadulterated gratitude washed over me, so strong it almost knocked the wind out of me.

"Thank you," I heard myself say, the words a drowsy, happy mumble. "Thank you... for... for everything."

Sarah beamed, a bright, radiant smile that made my heart do a funny little flip-flop in my chest. "Anything for you, Tommy," she whispered.

Then, to my surprise, Emma leaned down too, her honey-blonde curls brushing against my cheek. She gave me a quick, little kiss on the other cheek. "Thank you for letting us help you, Tommy," she whispered, her voice soft and shy.

"Thank you," I repeated, my head fuzzy with a happy, floating feeling.

"You're welcome," Mia's cool, calm voice cut through the happy fog in my brain. She was standing over me, her arms crossed, her dark, intense eyes taking in every single detail of my naked, spent body. A slow, satisfied smirk played on her lips. "You've been a very... cooperative test subject, Miller." The approval in her tone was even better than the orgasm. So much better.
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Re: It’s Rude to Point (Chapter 4 - Feb 24)

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Another brilliant chapter, well worth the wait!

I love how the girls have manipulated the situation so now Tommy is thanking them for it. He's completely humiliated but he's so messed up hes grateful for their "help".

Cannot wait for chapter 5. I'm hoping we get Tommy exposed to more people. Brilliant stuff!
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Trundle wrote: Fri Feb 27, 2026 11:51 pm Another brilliant chapter, well worth the wait!
Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it :D

I wanted to do something a little different. Rather than edging, I thought orgasm torture would be fun. And it gives the girls a reason that Tommy isn't able to do this to himself.
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It’s Rude to Point - Chapter 5a

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We all sat there for a little while, in a strange, comfortable silence. The boys, what was left of us anyway, were still in their own little zombie worlds. Jeffrey was just staring at the ceiling, a little, dopey smile on his face. Jason was curled up in a ball on the armchair, fast asleep. And little Joe was sprawled out on the floor, snoring like a tiny, chainsawing buzzard. I was just... floating. A happy, naked balloon.

"Alright," Mom said, finally breaking the spell. "Up and at 'em, Tiff. Let's get these boys home before they wake up... They're so cute, all tuckered out."

"Good idea," Mrs. Malone said, getting to her feet with a sigh. She looked a little shaky, but she also looked... happier. Lighter, somehow. "Come on, boys. Time to go home."

She and my mom started to herd the Malone boys towards the door. Mrs. Malone had to carry little Joe, who was dead to the world. Jeffrey and Jason sleepwalked behind them, their bare feet shuffling on the carpet, their minds still blissed out. Lisa followed them, like a little parade marshal, making sure nobody made a run for it.

The door closed, and then it was just me and the girls. I was still naked on the couch, a big, goofy smile on my face. The fight was gone. All the fight.

Mia, ever the scientist, sat down on the couch opposite me, her notebook open on her lap. She looked... different. Her face was softer, her scientific detachment replaced by a kind of buzzing, intellectual excitement. Emma and Sarah sat on either side of me, but they were quiet, watching Mia, waiting.

"Well, Miller," she began, her voice low and intense. "The experiment was a resounding success."

I just blinked at her, my brain still a little fuzzy. "Experiment?" I asked, my voice raspy. "What experiment?"

She looked at me, a slow, sly smile spreading across her face. "My real experiment," she said. "The one Catalina and I designed together. Not this whole Toxic Male Syndrome thing. That's... well, that's just a very useful tool. A very, very effective way to... loosen things up."

I could feel Emma and Sarah tense up next to me.

"What are you talking about, Mia?" I asked, a confused frown wrinkling my brow. "I thought... I thought you were trying to help me."

"Oh, we are," she said, her smile widening. "But in my own way. I'm studying something. Something... very specific. I call it: The Conversion."

"The... the conversion?" I repeated, the words not making any sense.

"My original hypothesis was simple," she explained, her dark eyes alight with the thrill of her own intellect. "Can you induce a fetish in a subject who has previously shown no predisposition, and indeed, an active aversion to it? Could we, through a carefully controlled application of psychological and physical stimuli, essentially re-wire a person's brain to crave what they once feared?"

"That sounds silly. You use too many big words, Mia," I said with a sleepy giggle.

Sarah let out this long, happy sigh. She leaned her head on my shoulder, a contented little purr escaping her lips. "I think it worked, Mia," she whispered, her blue eyes shining with pride. "Don't you think? Look at him. He's so... calm."

Mia's gaze was fixed on me, a look of intense, analytical curiosity. "He does seem remarkably... placid, doesn't he?" she mused, tapping her pen against her notebook. "The post-extraction bliss is a useful state for this kind of deprogramming. The mind is malleable. Receptive." She leaned forward, her elbows on her knees. "My fetish, Tommy, which you are so intimately familiar with now, is CFNM. Clothed Female, Naked Male. I find the dynamic... aesthetically pleasing. Psychologically potent. The inherent power imbalance. The vulnerability. The humiliation that, when processed correctly, becomes a form of worship."

"Okay..." I said slowly, the words starting to make a weird kind of sense, even through my happy little fog.

"I have always found it... titillating. But Catalina and I, we wondered... is it something you're born with? Like being left-handed? Or is it a learned behavior? A preference that can be... taught? And you, Miller," she said, pointing her pen at me like I was a frog on a dissection table, "you were the perfect specimen. You had an extreme aversion to being naked, to being seen. A deeply ingrained sense of modesty, drilled into you by a well-meaning but... misguided mother. You were our baseline. Our control. And now... you're our success story."

"A success story?" I repeated, a goofy, happy grin spreading across my face. "You mean... like a science fair project?"

"Yes, Tommy. Exactly like a science fair project," she purred, her satisfaction palpable. "A project we want to take on the road."

"The road?" I asked, like I was drunk. "Where are we going?"

"You're not going anywhere," she said, shaking her head. "But your status as a converted, thriving subject... it's the key to our next phase. To convincing other boys... and other parents... and soon, the whole school, that this is normal. Necessary. Even... desirable."

"And that's where you come in, big guy," Sarah said, giving my shoulder a happy little squeeze. "You get to be the poster boy. The brave boy who's not afraid to show everyone what being... healthy... really looks like."

My brain was still a mess of goo and happy feelings, but the word "school" managed to stick to the sides. "I have school on Monday," I said, stating a fact that suddenly felt very far away and very important.

"I know," Mia said, her slow, sly smile was back. A real shark's smile. "And you're going to go. But we need a special accommodation. For you. And for... well, for your continued health."

She was looking at me, her eyes all sparkly and intense, waiting. "What kind of accommodation?" I asked, genuinely curious.

"Think about it, Tommy. All day, in class. At lunch. At football practice. Restrictive clothing... it's dangerous for you. The manual says so. The blockage could dislodge. We can't have that. You need to be naked. At all times. For your own safety."

The word didn't scare me anymore. It just... made sense. "Okay," I said, nodding my head slowly. The idea felt so right, so obvious.

"And it's not just about the safety aspect," she continued, her voice a low, persuasive hum. "It's about... awareness. Other boys, Tommy. They're sick. And they don't even know it. The boy next to you in algebra. The one in front of you at lunch. The one in the locker room who thinks it's funny to point and make jokes. They're all at risk. They need to see you. They need to see what a boy who's getting proper... treatment... looks like. They need to see you happy. Healthy. Unashamed."

"That makes sense," I said, my mind a happy, agreeable sponge. I wanted to help. Of course, I wanted to help. I was a helper boy now.

"And... when you're at school," she added, a dark, hungry gleam in her eye. "I can do my second study. A field study. The conversion rate. I can have my notebook out and be watching all of them. Watching the boys and the girls and see how... successful you are at making a difference. And you'll be naked the whole time, and that will make my notes in my notebook very, very informative."

"I'll make your notes good," I promised, puffing out my chest a little. I could be a good note-taker-helper. I wanted to make her notes good.

"See?" Sarah said, giving my arm a proud little squeeze. "He's already a leader."

"He is," Mia purred, her satisfaction a warm, glowing thing in the room. "He's a pioneer. He's going to make history. But... there's a final step. A little... paperwork. To make it all official." She looked at me, her expression all serious again. "We need your help, Tommy. You're our project, but you're also our... key. The key to unlocking the whole school. We need you to do this. To say the words."

I looked at her, my brain a happy, mushy fog, but I knew she was right. Mia was smart. She knew what she was doing. If she said I needed to do something, then I needed to do it. It was for science. And for my health.

"What words?" I asked.

Just then, we heard the front door click open. Mom and Lisa were back. "Alright," mom called out, her footsteps echoing down the hall. "The Malone's are all tucked in at their own house. Tiffany's going to keep an eye on them."

She walked into the living room, and her eyes immediately went to me, still naked and smiling on the couch. A new look came over her face. It wasn't the worried, scared look she'd had before. It was a look of... relief. And pride. Like she'd just watched me win a big game.

"There's my brave boy," she said, a smile playing on her lips.

"Mom," I said, sitting up a little straighter, a wave of determination washing over me. I had a mission now. I had words to say. "We need to talk."

She sat down on the armchair, leaning forward, her full attention on me. "What is it, sweetie? Are you feeling okay? Are the... the blockages... coming back?"

I thought about it for a second, shaking my head. "No, not right now. I'm sure they'll come back later, though," I said, making my best serious face. "But that's not what I wanted to talk about. I want to go to school on Monday."

"That's great, sweetie! I was so worried you'd have to miss," my mom said, her face brightening. "But of course you can go. You're feeling better now."

"No, Mom," I said, shaking my head again. I looked over at Mia, who gave me a tiny, almost invisible nod. Her look was all I needed. "I have to go. And I have to be... like this. Naked. The girls told me it's for my own safety."

Her smile faded, replaced by that same look of worried confusion she'd had earlier. "Naked? At school? But... honey, that's... that's not possible."

"It's more than possible, Mrs. Miller," Mia jumped in, slipping back into her expert role with the ease of a snake shedding its skin. "It's medically necessary. The manual is very clear on this. After an aggressive extraction protocol like the one we've administered, the male body becomes... hypersensitive. The skin, especially in the... genital region, is too delicate for the abrasive nature of modern textiles. The risk of chafing, of irritation that could trigger a new, more volatile blockage... it's simply too high."

She paused, letting the weight of her words sink in. "And that's not even the main concern. The manual warns of Post-Extraction Syndrome. The toxins, while flushed from the reproductive tract, can linger in the bloodstream. The pressure of restrictive clothing, especially underwear, could dislodge these microscopic clusters. If one were to travel to the heart or the brain... it could cause an embolism. A stroke. Even an aneurysm."

"Aneurysm?" my mom repeated, the word a whispered puff of horror. The color drained from her face. She was looking at me now, but she wasn't seeing me. She was seeing a headline in the newspaper. A news report on TV. Her son, gone, because of a pair of jeans. I knew that look.

"It's a real danger," Sarah added, her voice all soft and serious, a perfect echo of Mia's fake concern. She was holding my hand, her fingers laced with mine, her touch a warm, supportive anchor in the sea of my mom's terror.

"Mom, don't worry. What's the big deal? So, I'll just stay naked. That's the easiest solution, right?" I said, and I tried to make it sound like no big deal. Like it was just a practical choice. Easy. Simple.

"Tommy's really going to go to school naked?" Lisa chirped from the doorway, her face lit up with a joy so pure it was almost blinding. "What about Jeffrey? Should he go to school naked too?" She was already thinking about her expanding empire. My little sister, the little dominatrix of 6th grade.

"We're taking it one step at a time," Mia said, holding up a hand in a calming gesture. "Tommy is the main concern here. His condition is much more advanced than Jeffrey's or his brothers. Once we get the official accommodation for him at the school, and we see how the other boys and girls react to him, then we can start worrying about others."

"I... I don't know," my mom said, wringing her hands. "The school... what will they say? What will the other kids say? They'll make fun of you, Tommy."

"They won't," I said, a strange, unshakable confidence filling me. It wasn't my confidence. It was Mia's, flowing into me through some weird, invisible wire. "They'll see me, and they'll be scared. And they'll know. The girls will know I'm not a threat. And the boys... they'll know there's something wrong with me. Something that might be affecting them too."

"And that's where the paperwork comes in," Mia said, a sly little smile on her lips. "We're not just going to send him to school naked. We're going to make it legal. Official." She pulled out her phone. "I have Catalina on speed dial. She'll email a letter directly to the school. It will be on official 'Tri-County Chemical Spill Health Advisory' letterhead. It will detail Tommy's condition, referencing a classified section of the medical response manual about Post-Extraction Syndrome."

She paused, letting her words paint a picture of officialdom and bureaucratic power. "It will explicitly state that Tommy must be allowed to attend school in a 'clothing-free state for medical reasons' to prevent a... a catastrophic health event."

"An aneurysm," my mom whispered, the fear a cold, heavy stone in her belly. The word was her ultimate weakness.

"Exactly," Mia confirmed, with a grim little nod.

"And the school can't say no to that," Sarah chimed in, her voice full of fierce certainty. "It's a disability. They have to accommodate him. It's the law. It's not like they want to be on the news for letting a kid have a stroke because they made him wear pants."

My mom just stared, her mind racing, trying to find a flaw in their logic. But there was none. They had built a perfect, horrifying little cage of medical jargon and legal threats, and she was trapped inside it with me.

I squeezed Sarah's hand, a fresh wave of purpose washing over me. "So you see, Mom, it's settled. I'll go to school. And I'll be naked. It's the only way."

I looked at Mia, and she gave me another one of those tiny, secret nods. It was my cue. The final performance.

"And... and I think I'd need help at school, too," I said, trying to make my voice sound as serious as I could. A medical decision. "I'll need helpers."

"Helpers?" my mom repeated, her brow furrowed.

"At all times," Mia confirmed. "He can't be left alone, not for a minute. Not in the classroom, not at lunch, not at... at practice." She said the last word with a little bit of a wicked glint in her eye.

"He can't be left alone," Sarah agreed. "He's going to need a dedicated team. A support staff. A... a harem," she said, then blushed, realizing what she'd said out loud.

"A harem, Mom," Lisa chirped from the doorway, hopping from one foot to the other with excitement. “What’s that?”

“Never you mind,” Mom responded to her, looking like she wanted to put the cat back in the bag, but it was too late.

“Helpers, Lisa,” Sarah covered, taking over the conversation. "Since there are three of us, we can divide ourselves into Tommy's schedule. Each of us already have multiple classes with Tommy, so it shouldn't be too difficult to shift the rest around a little," She explained. Then it was her turn to get excited again, her face lighting up. "And at football practice! Oh my goodness, I can be his 'equipment manager'," she said, using air quotes with her fingers. "I can carry his helmet, his towel, a big bottle of aloe... it'll be perfect! It will give me an excuse to be on the field, with all the boys. All the sweaty, muscly boys," she said, her face getting all dreamy.

Emma went bright red. "I could be... a cheerleader?" she offered, her voice small and shy. Everyone's heads were swimming in the clouds, thinking about naked boys.

"I can carry the clipboard to track your pointing incidents," Mia offered. "Just to keep the scientific records clear, of course. You know, for Catalina's records. We have to see if being at school with all the other boys makes the blockage form more quickly."

"You... all of you... you'd do that for him?" my mom asked, her voice choked with a new wave of emotion. She looked from Sarah's determined face to Emma's blushing one, to Mia's cool, intelligent eyes. This was no longer just about her son. This was a team. A platoon. They were soldiers in a war she hadn't even known was being fought. They were her little army. And their mission was my penis.

"It's what friends do," Mia said, putting a comforting arm around my mom's shoulders. "And besides," she added with a little smirk, "this is a once-in-a-lifetime scientific opportunity. We'd be crazy not to document it properly."

"Alright. I'll start by getting in contact with Mrs. Carlson, your principal," Mom said, her phone already out. The fight was gone. The questions were gone. She was a soldier now, getting her marching orders. She was no longer just my mom. She was the recruiter, the quartermaster, the one who would make the phone calls and sign the permission slips that would send me, naked and willing, into the world. "She was really worried when the Tri-Chem spill happened. This will all be perfectly reasonable to her," she said, her mind already spinning with the logistics.

"Good. And I'll get in contact with my cousin. I need to get home and scan my notes into digital form and send them to her," Mia added. "She will put together a final report for Mrs. Carlson. Emma, you should come with me. We can compare notes about our observations of the male subjects today. We'll need to calibrate our future research instruments properly," she added, winking at her.

"I'll... um... clean up," Emma said, a bright blush creeping up her neck as she looked at her hands. Then she looked at me, her gaze shy but steady. "We... we had a really productive afternoon, Tommy. I'm proud of you."

"Thank you," I mumbled.

"I'll stay here with Tommy," Sarah declared, snuggling up next to me on the couch like a cat claiming its favorite sunbeam. "Someone needs to watch him, for his health and well-being." She gave me a little wink that was just for me.

"Alright, girls. Off you go," my mom said, already dialing the phone. "Sarah, make sure he's... comfortable."

"Oh, don't you worry about that, Mrs. Miller," she said, running a single, teasing finger down my bare chest.

Now it was just Sarah and me. My mom had gone into the kitchen to make her phone call in private. Lisa was... well, who knows where Lisa was. She was probably in her room, drawing little pictures of naked boys with sad, happy faces. And the living room was quiet. Really quiet. The whole world felt small and warm, like a little snow globe, and it was just me and her, in the middle of it.

And I was naked. And I was happy.

"Hey," Sarah whispered, shifting so she was tucked right up against my side. She felt warm and soft, and the smell of her shampoo was all flowery and nice. "We did it."

"We did it," I repeated, a big, goofy grin on my face.

"Are you... okay? Like, really okay? With all of it?" she asked, her blue eyes searching mine. The mean, teasing girl was gone. This was just Sarah. The beautiful, cute, caring girl I had a crush on.

I thought about it. The shame was still there, a little echo in the back of my mind. But it was... faint. Like a memory of a bad dream. Mostly, what I felt was... calm. Safe. I knew the rules now. I knew my place. And my place was right here, next to her.

"Yeah," I said, my voice coming out in a happy, relaxed sigh. "I'm... okay. More than okay. I feel... good."

"Good," she whispered, her head finding my shoulder. Her hair tickled my neck. We just sat there for a while, the silence filled with the sounds of the house settling, the faint murmur of my mom's voice from the kitchen. It was nice. Just the two of us, me without any clothes, her snuggled up close. Her hand started to move, her fingers tracing lazy little patterns on my chest, a slow, gentle circle that made my whole body feel all warm and tingly.

"You know," she said, her voice a soft, dreamy murmur. "I was thinking. Your mom, she's totally on board with the whole... medical supervision thing now. And that's a 24/7 job, right? The manual must say so."

I nodded slowly. "Probably. Blockages don't sleep."

"Exactly," she said, her fingers stopping right over my heart. I could feel it beating a little faster under her touch. "What about tonight? Who's going to watch you? Your mom can't do it, she needs her sleep. And Lisa's too little. She needs her rest to be a good helper for Jeffrey and his brothers."

A little flutter of panic started in my chest. She was right. What was I supposed to do? I couldn't sleep alone. What if a new blockage formed in the middle of the night? I'd wake up, and I wouldn't know what to do, and I'd be alone, and my head might explode. Or something. The idea suddenly seemed very, very real and very, very scary.

"What... what do we do?" I asked, my voice a little shaky.

She shifted, leaning up so she could look me right in the eye. Her face was so close to mine, I could see the little gold flecks in her blue eyes. "I could," she whispered, the idea hanging in the air between us, soft and full of promise. "I could stay. I could... monitor you. Overnight."

The thought of her being there, all night, was so… comforting. A warm, safe little blanket wrapping around my worries. But then another thought, an older thought, tried to poke its way through my happy fog. Me and Sarah. Alone. All night. My old self would have been terrified. Excited, but terrified.

"Mom wouldn't let you," I said, but even as I said it, I knew it wasn't true anymore.

"Your mom won't have a choice," she said, a sly, confident little smirk playing on her lips. "We'll just tell her the truth. That the manual specifically warns against leaving a subject unsupervised for more than four hours in the initial 24-hour post-procedure period. It's for your health, big guy." She gave my shoulder another happy little squeeze. "A blockage could form while you're sleeping. We can't have that."

"Okay," I said, the word coming out all soft and easy. Of course, we couldn't have that. It was so simple.

She stood up, grabbing my hand and pulling me to my feet. "Come on. Let's go tell her."

My mom was still on the phone in the kitchen, pacing back and forth, her voice a low, serious murmur. "Yes, Mrs. Carlson, I understand… No, of course not… A necessary medical accommodation… Yes, that's what it would be…" She hung up with a satisfied little sigh, then she saw us. Me, still naked and holding hands with a fully-dressed Sarah. Her face didn't even change. It was like seeing a boy and a girl, one naked, one not, standing in her kitchen holding hands was just a normal day now.

"The principal is on board," my mom announced, a proud little smile on her face. "Mrs. Carlson is going to have an emergency staff meeting before school on Monday. She'll have the letter from Dr. Garcia by then. She said she'll do everything she can to make sure Tommy is... comfortable."

"See? It's all falling into place," Sarah chirped, giving my hand a happy little squeeze. "But Mrs. Miller, we have another issue. A very serious one."

My mom's face went back to being all serious and worried. "What is it? Don't tell me the blockages are coming back already."

"No," I said, shaking my head. "But what about tonight? I can't be alone." The idea had a real weight to it now. It wasn't just a good idea for Sarah to stay over. It was a necessity.

"Someone needs to monitor him," Sarah said, all serious, her expert face back on. "The manual is very clear. In the first 24 to 72-hour period after a multi-extraction event, a subject must be under constant observation. Blockages can form very rapidly, especially during REM sleep. The risk of a nocturnal embolism is just... too high." She was so good at this. The words just rolled off her tongue, all smooth and scary.

"A nocturnal embolism," my mom repeated, her face a mask of pure horror. The words were like a magic spell. A bad, scary magic spell that took away all her ability to think for herself.

"Mrs. Miller," Sarah said, her soft, serious voice cutting through my mom's panic. "I know how to look for the signs. I know how to perform the... the procedure. It's not safe for Tommy to be alone tonight. But with me here… he'll be safe."

My mom just stared at her, her eyes wide with a desperate, helpless gratitude. She looked from Sarah's determined face to my own worried one, and I saw the decision being made for her, sealed by her love for me and her fear of a word she didn't even understand.

"Okay," my mom said, a shaky breath escaping her. "Okay. You're right. Of course, you're right. But... you don't have anywhere to sleep. I know, you can take Tommy's bed, and he can sleep in his old sleeping bag."

"No, Mrs. Miller. Tommy is sick. I won't take his bed from him. I can share Tommy's bed with him. It's a full size. Should be plenty of room for two," Sarah said with a bright smile.

"Okay. Yes. That is probably the smartest move. He shouldn't have any reason to get out of bed in the middle of the night and have an incident. He should stay right where you are with him, in his bed," my mom said.

"Great. Then Tommy and I will head to my house. I need to grab a few things, and a change of clothes for tomorrow." She looked at me, a happy little spark in her blue eyes. "And you're coming with me, of course. You need constant supervision, remember? We can't leave you here alone even for a minute."

The thought of going outside. Of being naked. In my neighborhood. Where people could see me. A little thread of the old me, the scared me, tried to wiggle its way back into my brain. But then I looked at Sarah. At her calm, confident face, and the fear just sort of... melted. It was for my health. It was what Dr. Catalina would want. It was what was best.

"Okay," I said, my voice all soft and easy.

"Great," she said, grabbing my hand again, a thrill rushing through her, and pulling me toward the back door. "Let's go on a little adventure, big guy."

It was almost dark outside when we stepped out the back door. The sun had just disappeared behind the houses, and the sky was a deep, dark purple, like a big, beautiful bruise. The lights were on in the neighbor's houses, little warm squares in the growing dark. The air was cool on my bare skin, sending a little shiver through me. It felt... weird. Good, but weird.

"This is good practice," Sarah said, her own voice a happy little buzz of excitement. "For Monday. You need to get used to being outside. Naked. In the open. So it doesn't feel so... new. At school." She squeezed my hand. "You'll be a pro by then."

My own neighborhood felt different. Bigger. Scarier. The little cracks in the sidewalk, the overgrown rose bushes along the fence, the funny little garden gnome in the neighbor's yard two doors down... it all felt like it was staring at me. Watching me. Judging me. We didn't go all the way around to the front. We cut through the backyards, the way I always did when I was sneaking out to meet my friends. But this was different. I wasn't sneaking. I was just... walking. And I was naked.

"Wow. Okay. This is really happening," I said, my breath a little shaky as we stepped onto the sidewalk that ran in front of the houses. The streetlights had flickered on, casting a weird, yellow glow on everything.

"And you're doing great," Sarah said, her grip on my hand tightening, a solid, warm anchor in the sea of my nerves. "Just keep walking. Head up, shoulders back. You're a boy on a mission. A boy with a medical condition."

I tried. I really did. I tried to focus on what she was saying, on the solid ground under my feet, on the warm feel of her hand in mine. I even tried to do that stupid thing that never worked, thinking about football plays. But it wasn't working. My brain was too busy screaming 'NAKED!' at the top of its lungs.

A car turned the corner, its headlights slicing through the twilight, making me jump like a startled deer. The headlights washed over me, painting my naked body in a bright, unforgiving light. I could see every little detail of my own pale skin in that split second. And I knew the people in the car could, too.

They slowed down. Just for a second. Just long enough for me to see the shocked, confused faces. A woman in the passenger seat, her mouth forming a perfect little 'O' of surprise. A girl in the back seat, probably Lisa's age, her eyes wide, then she whispered something to her sister, and they both started giggling.

The car sped up, turning the corner, but the damage was done.

And that happy, comfortable blanket that had been wrapped around my brain all afternoon? It was gone. Completely. Ripped away by the sweep of a pair of headlights and the sight of a few shocked faces. The reality of it all hit me like a ton of bricks. I wasn't in the controlled little world of my living room anymore. I was on the street. Naked. A freak show for a passing car.

And in two days... I was going to have to do this. At school. In front of everyone. Hundreds of kids. My teachers. My best friends, Chris and Amanda. People who I had known my whole life. People who weren't part of Mia's weird science project. People who would think I was crazy.

The world started to tilt. The edges of my vision got all fuzzy and dark, like I was looking down a long, black tunnel. The little yellow glow of the streetlights started to swim and swirl. My chest got all tight, like a big, heavy band was being squeezed around it, squeezing all the air out of my lungs. I couldn't breathe.

"Tommy? Tommy, are you okay? Look at me," I heard Sarah's voice, but it sounded far away, like she was calling to me from the bottom of a deep well.

"I... I can't," I gasped, pulling my hand away from hers. I started to pace back and forth on the little patch of grass between the sidewalk and the road, my bare feet digging into the cool, damp earth. I was trying to run, but my legs were made of lead. I was trapped. "I can't do it. I can't go to school like this. I can't! I'm not sick! It was all a lie! A stupid, crazy lie!" The words came spilling out of me, a jumbled, desperate torrent of all the fears I'd been pushing down. A lie. This whole beautiful, blissed-out afternoon was a beautiful, crazy lie.

Sarah was right there in front of me, her hands on my arms, stopping my panicked pacing. "Hey. Hey, look at me," she said, her voice no longer a happy purr, but a firm, steady command. I had to look. She had this intense, determined look on her face that was kind of scary but also... weirdly calming. "Breathe with me. In. And out. Come on, Tommy. You can do it."

I tried. I really tried to take a breath, but my lungs were all tight and floppy, like they didn't remember how to work.

"A lie?" she asked, her blue eyes burning into mine. A sly, little smirk started to play on her lips. "It feels real, doesn't it? The pointing? The blockages? The aches?"

My own body betrayed me. My penis, which had been all shrunken and scared, gave a little twitch of interest at her words. A low, dull ache started to throb in my balls, the ghost of the extraction, the memory of the pleasure. It was true. It did feel real.

"That car," she said, her voice a soft, persuasive purr, pulling my gaze back towards the street. "They didn't look at you like you were a joke, Tommy. They looked at you like you were a hero. A brave, suffering boy, and a girl right there beside you, helping you. They looked at me, Tommy. They saw a girl who cares. They saw a girl who is so special that a boy would trust her with everything. With his most vulnerable secret. They were jealous."

The thought was so crazy, so twisted, it started to make a weird kind of sense. I wasn't a freak. I was a hero. And she was my hero-helper. My own personal hero of penis problems.

"They saw the lie too," she whispered, her lips so close to mine I could feel the warmth of her breath. "That's the secret, Tommy. A lie that feels real is more powerful than the truth."

My chest was still tight, but my breathing was starting to slow down. The little yellow light of her bedroom window was just a few houses down. So close.

"Really?" I asked, my voice a shaky whisper. "That's what they saw?"

"They saw you. The real you," she said, a soft, triumphant smile spreading across her face. "And so do I. I wouldn't do this for just any boy."

I didn't say anything. I just waited, my breath held tight in my chest.

"It's just... there's something about you, Tommy," she continued, her gaze unwavering. "I've liked you for a long time. And when this whole... thing happened... with your mom making you get naked... I saw it as a sign. As an opportunity."

I wanted to laugh. An opportunity for what? To humiliate me?

She seemed to know what I was thinking. "Not to be mean," she said, her voice a little defensive. "I know you don't exactly like being naked. I get that. But... I hope that'll change. I hope you'll see it the way I see it."

"And how's that?" I asked, my voice a shaky whisper.

"Like we're young," she said, a dreamy, faraway look in her eyes. "Like we're only young once. And how many people get to do something like this? To get away with something so... crazy? So exciting?" She looked at me, her blue eyes sparkling with a wild, giddy light. "This is living, Tommy. This is an adventure."

It was a crazy, upside-down way of looking at it. But a part of me, a very small, very stupid part of me, could see her point. It was an adventure. A terrifying, humiliating, naked adventure.

"I'm not doing this to be mean to you," she said, her voice earnest, pleading. "I'm doing this because I love you, Tommy."

The words hung in the air between us, so big and so real that they felt like they might just swallow me whole. She loved me. After everything she had done, she had the nerve to say she loved me.

I must have looked skeptical, because she rushed on. "It's true! I know it's weird. And I know you don't understand. But... I do. And if our roles were reversed, if you were the one who had somehow convinced my mom to make me go naked for you..." She bit her lip, hard. "I wouldn't just be okay with it. I would go crazy. I would be so aroused I wouldn't know what to do with myself."

The image flashed in my mind, so sudden and so vivid it made me dizzy. Sarah. Here. Naked. Me. Fully dressed. Holding her hand. Leading her down the street. Me, telling her how beautiful she was. How her body made me feel. A strange, hot, dizzying surge of power washed through me, a feeling so intense it was almost nauseating. I wanted that. Oh, god, I wanted that. I wanted to see her blush. I wanted to see her squirm. I wanted to be the one in charge.

"It's my deepest, darkest secret, okay?" she whispered, her confession a vulnerable, fragile thing in the cool night air. "My fetish. Not just being naked, but... forced exhibition. Seeing someone be made to be naked. It's the control, the vulnerability, the... the taboo of it all. It turns me on like nothing else."

I just stared at her, my mind a whirlwind of a million different emotions. Anger, betrayal, confusion... and a hot, shameful spark of understanding. I wasn't a science project. Not really. I was her fantasy.

"That's why I worked with Mia," she said, a guilty little flush creeping up her neck. "The lie had to be good. It had to be something your mom would believe. Something no one could argue with. Otherwise... we would have just had an afternoon of you being naked until she made you get dressed again. And we wouldn't have this."

"This," I repeated, the word feeling heavy and strange in my mouth.

"This," she confirmed, her gaze sweeping over my naked body, a hot, possessive look that made me shiver. "Me and you. And an adventure that nobody else gets to have. We only get to live once, Tommy. How often does anyone get the opportunity to do something so crazy, something so outlandish?"

She was right. It was crazy. It was outlandish. And a dangerous, thrilling little seed was starting to sprout in the back of my mind. What if she was right? What if this wasn't a curse? What if it was... an opportunity?

"But you get off on making me feel this bad?" I asked, my voice barely a whisper, the last little bit of my old self making a stand.

"I get off on making you feel! Period!" she shot back, her cheeks flushed, her blue eyes blazing with an intensity that took my breath away. "If you were just... numb about it, if you didn't feel anything, it would be boring. The shame, the embarrassment, the panic... it's all part of it. It makes the pleasure... better. Doesn't it?" she challenged. "But you also love it, don't you? Some part of you, at least. You might have been out of your mind, but you did go straight to your mom and ask her to let you go to school naked. You want it. And we both know it."

I had. I remembered the words coming out of my mouth, the certainty. The shame of it all made my face burn hot.

"And besides," she continued, a sly, secret smile spreading across her face. "I have my own secret. A secret I've only ever told one other person, and that was Mia. And now I'm telling you. Because I trust you. Because I want you to know everything."

She leaned in even closer, her lips practically brushing my ear, her voice a low, conspiratorial whisper. "My exhibition fetish? It goes both ways. I love the idea of seeing someone made to be naked," she breathed. "But I'm also turned on by being the one who is forced."

My brain came to a screeching halt. The whole world tilted on its axis. "You what?" I asked, my head snapping back to look at her.

A slow, triumphant smile spread across her face. She had me. The hook was set. "If our roles were reversed," she whispered, her eyes locked on mine. "I wouldn't fight it, Tommy. I'd love it. I'd be embarrassed, and humiliated, and so... so turned on I wouldn't be able to think straight. I would want to be your... naked toy. And I want that from you, too."

The confession hung in the air between us, a shocking, electrifying thing. The thought of it, of having that kind of power over her, was intoxicating. A dizzying rush that chased away the last of the fear I had. A dangerous, thrilling seed was starting to sprout. She'd like it if I was in control.

"But these are the cards we were dealt, Tommy," she said, her voice a soft, sighing whisper. "You're the one who's naked. And I'm the one who gets to look." She gave my arm a little squeeze. "And I'll make it up to you. I promise. Tonight. In your room. When we're all alone in your bed." Her words sent a shiver down my spine, a mix of fear and a dark, thrilling anticipation.

We were at her house now. A little blue bungalow with white shutters, looking all quiet and normal. Just like nothing crazy was happening.

"Just... just wait here a second," she whispered, letting go of my hand. I wanted to grab her back, to pull her close, to keep that solid, warm connection with the normal, clothed world, but I just stood there, my hands clasped in front of me, hiding myself as best I could. It didn't do much good.

She ran inside, a blur of motion and light. A few seconds later, she came back out, motioning for me to follow her inside. I took a deep breath and stepped into her house.

"Mom, you remember Tommy Miller, right?" she called out, shutting the door behind me.

Sarah's mom was sitting on the couch in the living room, her face lit up by the glow of her tablet. She looked up, and her eyes got all wide when she saw me. Not in a mean way, but in a surprised, almost impressed way.

"Wow," she breathed, her gaze moving over me in a slow, appraising sweep. "I see Sarah wasn't exaggerating." She had the same look Mrs. Malone had had.

"I know you're surprised to see me like this, Mrs. Sanders," I said, my voice barely a whisper. I tried to cover my privates with my hands. "I have TMS..."

Sarah quickly pushed my hands away from my junk. "Now, Tommy. You know you aren't supposed to cover it up," Sarah scolded me. "You need to air out your skin."

"I am so sorry you have to deal with this, Tommy," Sarah's mom said, her face full of genuine pity. It was worse than the surprised look she was giving me before. "To be so sick at your age." Then her pity turned to admiration for her daughter. "And you, Sarah. You are such a good friend, to take this on. I'm so proud of you. It's so mature."

"She's the best," I managed to say. The praise, while meant for Sarah, made my chest swell with a bit of pride. Even though it was based on a complete lie. A very convincing, very big lie.

"I just need to get some of my things," Sarah said, pulling me towards the stairs. "Then we'll go back to your house."

We went up to her room. It was so... pink. And fluffy. A totally normal girl's room. With pictures of her friends on the walls and a big, unmade bed with a comforter that had little sparkly stars all over it.

It was in there, in the safety of her room, with the door shut, that she let her real face show. Her teasing, playful face.

"So... did you like seeing my mom check you out?" she purred, running a single finger down my chest. "She has a thing for naked football players. She thinks they're cute."

I blushed, I could feel my whole face getting hot. "Shut up," I mumbled.

She giggled, a happy, tinkling sound. "See? You're already blushing. That's the fun part." She reached out and gave my nose a little poke. "But I know you liked her looking at you. You liked me telling you about my fetish, didn't you?"

I didn't answer. I just stood there, feeling like my brain was full of fuzzy static.

"Come on," she said, grabbing a little backpack from a chair and starting to shove some clothes into it. "We need to hurry. We don't want to leave your mom alone for too long. She might get worried." As she packed, she kept looking at me. A happy, dreamy look on her face. Like she won a prize.

Then she went over to her dresser and started pulling things out of a drawer. I saw some lacy things, things I knew were her panties and bras. She picked out a tiny, black, lacy pair of panties. My own penis twitched, a little traitorous jump of interest.

"You like these, big guy?" she whispered, holding them up. "You wish I'd put them on for you?"

I just stared, my mouth suddenly dry.

She let out another happy little giggle. "Maybe when we get to your house... Maybe," she teased, dangling them in front of me before she crammed them into her bag.

"Before we go, I want your help," she said, her face turning serious again.

I was so confused. "Help you do what?"

"We need to plant the seed in my mom. Get her to start to worry about Mark, and about how he might have TMS, like you," she said, looking at me all conspiratorial.

"Do you really have such hate for your own brother that you'd do this to him, or do you just want to see him naked?" I looked at her, trying to understand why she would want to put her own brother through all of this.

"Both," she admitted with a little happy shrug. "It's hot for me to think about making him go naked, and he's been the biggest jerk ever since he became the captain of the football team. Someone needs to take him down a peg, or two. Who better than me?"

It was a crazy, mean idea. But a dark, mean part of me couldn't help but like it. After every pointless drill he had put me through, the idea of her perfect, jock brother, Mark, going through it too... well, it served him right.

"So, what's your plan?" I heard myself ask. The question hung in the air, a strange, new kind of possibility. I wasn't just the victim anymore. I could be a co-conspirator.

"Okay, so you just stand here," she said, positioning me in the middle of her fluffy pink rug. "And act really grumpy and irritated when I get back." Then she ran back downstairs. 

I could hear their voices, all muffled and far away.

"Mom! Tommy's having an issue!" I heard her yell. Her words made my heart start to pound again.

Then they were back in the room. Me, naked, in the middle of her pink, fluffy rug. Her mom, looking all worried again. And her, the beautiful, smiling demon who was ruining my life.

"What's wrong? What happened?" her mom asked, rushing to my side.

"It's the irritability," Sarah declared, her face all serious, her expert mask back in place. "It's a textbook symptom. The pressure build-up in his system is making him agitated. The manual warns that he could become a danger to himself and others."

"You don't know what you're talking about, Sarah," I said, trying my best to play my part. "I feel fine. Can we please just get out of here?" I tried to push past her, my body a knot of fake frustration.

"See what I mean, Mom?" Sarah said, grabbing my arm and holding me in place. She was surprisingly strong. "He's being so disagreeable. Just like Mark. Remember?" Her own mom looked at her, then at me, her mind making the connection, a little seed of worry being planted. "You've said it yourself. Mark's been in a foul mood for months. Grumpy, picking fights with me for no reason. Pushing people around. And he's always pointing in his pants."

My own mom had said the same thing about me, before she'd decided I was sick. It was weird hearing another boy described that way.

"He's seventeen, Sarah," her mom said, but her voice was uncertain now. "He's a teenage boy. They're all... moody."

"Maybe a little, but not to that level. Mom, didn't you see how polite and sweet Tommy was when we came in? Now look at him. All angry and aggressive. And that was only in, like, a few minutes. The change can happen really fast," she explained. She was good. She was really, really good.

Her mom's face paled. "Oh my gosh. You don't think... Mark? You don't think he has the sickness too?"

"You should have seen him at practice last week," I said, jumping on the opportunity. My role felt so natural, I was surprised at myself. "He was awful. Yelling at everyone. Pushing one of the younger guys for no reason. Making everyone run pointless laps. He was being a real jerk."

I saw a flicker of pain and shame in her mom's eyes. A familiar, motherly denial. "Well... he's the team captain. He's under a lot of pressure..."

"He doesn't have to be a bully," I insisted, my voice getting a little louder, a little more worked up. I was drawing on real-life stuff now, not just playing a part. "And just because he's a good football player doesn't mean he gets to be a mean person."

Sarah's mom just stared at me, her face a mask of horror. It was the look. The same look my mom had had right before she had completely given in to the lie. The truth was suddenly very clear. Mark, her son, the perfect football captain, was just like me. And she didn't want to believe it. She couldn't believe it. But the seed had been planted.

"Mom, we have to help him. When dad and Mark get back from their fishing trip tomorrow, we need to do an exam on him," Sarah said, her voice all serious and caring.

"Sarah, you're not a doctor," her mom said, but her protest was weak, a last little puff of air from a balloon that was already deflating.

"I'm an extractor, Mom," Sarah corrected her. "I'm Tommy's official helper. I know the protocol. Mia's cousin, Dr. Garcia, taught us a simple way to diagnose boys at home. It's the best way."

"Okay," her mom said, her shoulders slumping in defeat. "Okay. I'll talk to him tomorrow. We'll help him."

"I'll invite Mia to help. She knows the more about this than I do," Sarah said.

"Okay," her mom whispered, the word barely audible. Another mother was lost. Another victory.

"Okay," I said, a strange, warm feeling spreading through my chest. We did it. We had a new recruit for our little army.

Sarah grabbed my hand, pulling me toward the door. "Okay, Mom, we've got to go," she said. "It's late, and Tommy still needs to eat dinner before bed. I need to monitor him."

"Okay, honey," her mom said, her eyes still dazed and far away. "Be safe."

Then we were back outside. The night air felt even cooler on my bare skin now that I wasn't in a panic. We were just walking, the sounds of our footsteps a quiet, steady rhythm on the pavement. Me, naked. Her, fully dressed, a little backpack slung over her shoulders, holding a spare change of clothes all for her.

"Tommy," she said, her voice a low, earnest murmur. "I was wondering something. And I want you to be honest with me."

"Okay," I said. My heart started to do this little pitter-pat thing, a nervous beat against my ribs.

"Would you... would you want to be my boyfriend?" she asked, her blue eyes fixed on the sidewalk in front of us. "For real, I mean. Not just... this. This... whole... situation. But in a normal way. A boyfriend and a girlfriend way."

I was quiet for a long second. The question she asked me was so... normal. And it felt so out of place in the middle of all the craziness. We weren't normal. We hadn't been normal since yesterday. We probably would never be normal again.

"Wh-why?" I stammered, my mind all fuzzy from her question. "Why would you want to be my girlfriend?" A stupid, hurt, insecure question I didn't mean to ask, but it popped out.

She looked up at me then, her blue eyes all intense and a little bit of hurt. "Because I like you, silly. I've had a crush on you forever. I just never knew how to say it without sounding like an idiot. And now... well, now it's complicated. But I still... I still like you... No, love you. I love you, Tommy Miller."

The words hung in the cool night air, big and solid and real. She loved me. After everything she'd put me through, she was saying she loved me.

I hated her. I absolutely hated her for what she had done to me, for the shame and the humiliation she had put me through. But she was also the most exciting, the most beautiful, the most terrifying person I had ever met. She had seen me at my worst, at my most vulnerable, and she didn't run away. She leaned in.

"Yes," I whispered, the word so quiet it was almost a breath. "Yes, I want to be your boyfriend."

A huge, brilliant smile spread across her face, so bright it seemed to light up the whole dark street. "I knew it," she whispered, and then she leaned in and kissed me. Right there, on the sidewalk, under the yellow glow of the streetlights, she stood on her tiptoes, pressed her lips to mine. It wasn't a quick peck on the cheek. It was a real kiss. Her lips were soft and warm, and she tasted like cherry lip gloss and the faintest hint of toothpaste.

My whole body went stiff. I'd never kissed a girl like this before. And I was naked. The whole thing was so crazy and so wonderful, my brain just sort of... shut down. I wasn't scared anymore. I wasn't even embarrassed. I was just... here. With her.

When she pulled away, she was blushing, her cheeks all rosy in the dim light. "Wow," she breathed. "Just... wow."

"Yeah," I mumbled, my own face feeling so hot it was practically on fire. "Wow."

She took my hand again, her fingers lacing with mine, and we started walking again. The world felt different. Warmer. Kinder. We were a couple now. A weird, crazy, mixed-up couple, but a couple all the same.
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Re: It’s Rude to Point (Chapter 5a - April 16)

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I was just thinking about this story the other day and hoping we'd get a new update! Great treat to come on and see there was a new chapter for us all to enjoy.

This one was very intriguing, to see Tommy at the start with no fight left. Almost in a daze, happy to just follow orders no matter how shaming or humiliating they'd be. I liked that he acknowledged those feelings of shame were still there deep down, surely he won't be able to fully suppress them forever. Especially if he has to be naked at school...

Really love how easily manipulated he is :D

Poor Mark, he won't know what's hit him.

A sweet ending, I can't wait to see what happens. I'm hoping for more embarrassments for Tommy, I'm also hopeful we get 5b very soon :lol:

Great stuff!
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