Peripubertal Female Dysregulation Syndrome (ENF, CMNF, discipline and more)

[EddieDavidson]

I am in awe. Well told.

It's very plausible, despite the implausibility of the scenario.

For those of us who don't understand British dialect, Cuppa - I could figure out. Unocirn sparkley trainers, I would have appreciated a visual description of what is and isn't popping out.

Yesterday, in a raising canes there was this woman with a tank top wife beater on, but it extended down like a onsie into her jeans, so that her hips were exposed, and the jeans were super low cut. I envisioned that witout the jeans and was surprised to learn it means sneakers.

So, I am curous how she will get on nude in public.

[mars357]

Oh yeah, I actually set a story in the UK for once, so I'm using my natural vocabulary and not butchering American English for a change

It's also easier to imagine/predict reactions in a society I'm familiar with. People's responses get a lot more fictional and disconnected from any lived experienced when I set a story in Alabama or some such place! (I only know the American south from stories, books and movies!)

I imagined something like this for the footwear: https://www.zalando.co.uk/skechers-unic ... 0-j11.html

with socks like these: https://www.happysocks.com/uk/product/P001010

[EddieDavidson]

I have the exact opposite experience. I love the cheeky British humor of a show like two pints of lager and a packet of crisps.

I was told that I write British people a lot like Hollywood writes Hugh Grant movies. I researched everything from the number of hot dogs in a pack in Great Britain versus in America to why you guys talk about biscuits over time. biscuits over here means something completely different.

I'd much rather write British stories. Just don't know the culture well enough. I had this idea for a fat bottom Girls nude bicycle ride story., recently.

What I enjoy about your story is not only the setting and the predicament, but the pacing itself. You use the right level of detail in your technique to keep me engaged and to build tension organically.

[Bucket]

Damn this is so outstanding! It's undoubtedly a top 3 story, and it's only getting better and better! Loving every chapter, and I absolutely cannot wait for more!