Lia's new reality (Part 23 - (4/27)

[Somebody]

So completely hot. I remember reading a true story back on allaboutsex (only the elderly remember that site) where a sister was helpful like this for her younger brother, albeit not to THIS extent, but letting him have healthy exploration. Very sweet. I'm really surprised she's been able to control herself, at a certain point of starvation/frustration, your body usually just kind of chooses dopamine. What a good girl.

[D74]

Another great chapter. This story is getting better every chapter.

[Justaguy]

A coincidence that I'd randomly open this story less than a day after a new chapter was posted

I think maybe since this story has been written over the course of several years that there might be some continuity issues popping up. I don't mean this as a criticism but I just want to point out some things I'm noticing, though admittedly I don't remember everything myself since it's been a while since I've read some parts.

The part about Lia asking if Steve thinks she's a whore seems redundant. I was sure they've had that conversation before though they may have used the word "slut." I think she was crying about her family thinking she's a slut because of her confession that she likes her new reality, and they reassured her that they don't.

Steve teaching Chuck about Lia's clit seems redundant since Chuck definitely knew to play with her clit during the mall car ride, despite how clumsy he was. This isn't necessarily an error, since it's easy to imagine that Steve doesn't know what Chuck knows and so he'd just assume that Chuck didn't know about the clit and then Chuck would have his reasons for not saying anything.

It was strange to have Steve tell Chuck that no fingers are to be inserted into Lia's vagina since I was sure that fingers have been inserted before. I'm no expert on the subject but I believe a hymen does not completely close the vaginal opening and so it's possible to insert a single finger through it without altering the hymen. That is to say, it's not an error to have her hymen intact despite being fingered before but I think it's an error to act like the fingering never happened.

[perseus]

“My body doesn’t have any private parts anymore. You won’t hurt me. See?”

“She doesn’t own her body; we do. And we’ve decided it doesn’t need to wear any clothes; Lia doesn’t get to decide who sees or touches it.”

“Lia, you can be honest with me. You suggested the touching rule; I’ll allow you to rescind it or make changes to it if you want.”

Lia thought for a long moment, her heart beating fast. Whatever answer she gave now would tell her dad a lot about her headspace.

“I feel like… I shouldn’t get a say about the rules anymore.”

“Are you sure? After this there won’t be any more chances. The decision on when you have sex and who with, will be left to you. But other than that, you won’t have any say over your body and who touches it.”

Lia nodded.

This really going to open up issues when she in school, and can create alot of problems since they are opening up a paradox box or a can of worms and it can't be undone.

I've cosidered this. I'll say a little bit about what I've have planned for school. The rule will stand but it won't be widly known. Her friends will know, and probably the staff. But the other students won't know about it...at first

[perseus]

So completely hot. I remember reading a true story back on allaboutsex (only the elderly remember that site) where a sister was helpful like this for her younger brother, albeit not to THIS extent, but letting him have healthy exploration. Very sweet. I'm really surprised she's been able to control herself, at a certain point of starvation/frustration, your body usually just kind of chooses dopamine. What a good girl.

Thats an interesting story! I wonder how much the girl let her brother explore

[perseus]

A coincidence that I'd randomly open this story less than a day after a new chapter was posted

I think maybe since this story has been written over the course of several years that there might be some continuity issues popping up. I don't mean this as a criticism but I just want to point out some things I'm noticing, though admittedly I don't remember everything myself since it's been a while since I've read some parts.

The part about Lia asking if Steve thinks she's a whore seems redundant. I was sure they've had that conversation before though they may have used the word "slut." I think she was crying about her family thinking she's a slut because of her confession that she likes her new reality, and they reassured her that they don't.

Steve teaching Chuck about Lia's clit seems redundant since Chuck definitely knew to play with her clit during the mall car ride, despite how clumsy he was. This isn't necessarily an error, since it's easy to imagine that Steve doesn't know what Chuck knows and so he'd just assume that Chuck didn't know about the clit and then Chuck would have his reasons for not saying anything.

It was strange to have Steve tell Chuck that no fingers are to be inserted into Lia's vagina since I was sure that fingers have been inserted before. I'm no expert on the subject but I believe a hymen does not completely close the vaginal opening and so it's possible to insert a single finger through it without altering the hymen. That is to say, it's not an error to have her hymen intact despite being fingered before but I think it's an error to act like the fingering never happened.

This is fair. Thanks for the feedback. And yeah I'm just shooting from the hip with this story and I don't usually go back to see what I've done in the past. I've had other writers remind me that I already wrote an idea before. The little heart to heart conversations are pretty much done now, so that won't come up again.

My idea with Chuck learning about the clit was that he got better at playing with Lia after the dinner lesson, I meant to have Lia think about how much better Chuck was the next morning compaired to the car ride. But I forgot to add that.

The idea of not inserting a finger in Lia doesn't have to do with her hymen and not breaking it. Its more about Lia getting to decide when somthing goes up there. She can be touched, but that will still belong to her.

Thanks again for the feeback! All of my plans for this story are looking forward now so there should be less redundicies from here on.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

I feel like a broken record giving feedback to this story, but WOW!

Everytime I think the story has peaked the next chapter is even better!

I especially love these moments where Lia's mom plays an active role in Lia's little humiliations. Like when she made her show her body to everyone at the dinner table, commenting on her aroused state and such.

Then there was the scene in the car when she had to present her naked butt to these boys. Simply fantastic.

And all the edging she's subjected to is always welcome!

[Bucket]

I am running out of superlatives to describe just how much I love this story and how phenomenal it is. Loved this chapter! Lia getting edged into oblivion without release is insanely hot, and I'm seriously looking forward to her daddy daughter date! Yet another sensational chapter.

[darklord66]

“My body doesn’t have any private parts anymore. You won’t hurt me. See?”

“She doesn’t own her body; we do. And we’ve decided it doesn’t need to wear any clothes; Lia doesn’t get to decide who sees or touches it.”

“Lia, you can be honest with me. You suggested the touching rule; I’ll allow you to rescind it or make changes to it if you want.”

Lia thought for a long moment, her heart beating fast. Whatever answer she gave now would tell her dad a lot about her headspace.

“I feel like… I shouldn’t get a say about the rules anymore.”

“Are you sure? After this there won’t be any more chances. The decision on when you have sex and who with, will be left to you. But other than that, you won’t have any say over your body and who touches it.”

Lia nodded.

This really going to open up issues when she in school, and can create alot of problems since they are opening up a paradox box or a can of worms and it can't be undone.

I've cosidered this. I'll say a little bit about what I've have planned for school. The rule will stand but it won't be widly known. Her friends will know, and probably the staff. But the other students won't know about it...at first

Yeah, but they will know pretty fast, when she ether shows up to school totally naked and barefoot, or gets stripped by either fellow students or teachers and ends up naked by the end of the school day.

[D74]

“My body doesn’t have any private parts anymore. You won’t hurt me. See?”

“She doesn’t own her body; we do. And we’ve decided it doesn’t need to wear any clothes; Lia doesn’t get to decide who sees or touches it.”

“Lia, you can be honest with me. You suggested the touching rule; I’ll allow you to rescind it or make changes to it if you want.”

Lia thought for a long moment, her heart beating fast. Whatever answer she gave now would tell her dad a lot about her headspace.

“I feel like… I shouldn’t get a say about the rules anymore.”

“Are you sure? After this there won’t be any more chances. The decision on when you have sex and who with, will be left to you. But other than that, you won’t have any say over your body and who touches it.”

Lia nodded.

This really going to open up issues when she in school, and can create alot of problems since they are opening up a paradox box or a can of worms and it can't be undone.

I've cosidered this. I'll say a little bit about what I've have planned for school. The rule will stand but it won't be widly known. Her friends will know, and probably the staff. But the other students won't know about it...at first

I wonder how long it’s gonna be before she goes back to school. It’s gonna be interesting to see how her first day of going back to school will be.