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[jojo12026]

Yes. I was able to read first part but no others

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[Hooked6]

Loved the "Splits" dare and Hope and Valerie make a good pair as they seem to possess the same dominate traits that they put to good use on poor little Amy.

I must admit, I felt bad for Amy practically drowning at the hands of her so-called friends. It was a good thing her swim coach came to Amy's rescue in the nick of time.

Nice chapter. Looking forward to the next installment.

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[Somebody]

Really excellent.

[Neverborn]

Yes. I was able to read first part but no others

I checked all 11 chapters and they worked for me. I just scrolled to the comments at the bottom and clicked the reply title for each chapter i wanted. (clicking links does work on these archives)

There are more files in the story folder than there are chapters, each reader reply is its own file. But all 11 are there and working. Maybe you got a bad download?

[DDuck]

Great story. I hope you get time to continue it soon. Thanks.

[jojo12026]

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[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[Hooked6]

Another interesting chapter. Looks like Amy has another antagonist in her life. I hope Valerie still plays a part in Amy's life though. I can see it now: Miss Hendriks, Amy's swim teacher, and Valerie - the dynamic duo of exposure each taking their turns placing Amy into interesting situations.

Regardless, this was a great twist in the plot having Amy discover she is without her own clothes at her teacher's house. Loving it. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Hooked6

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[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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