Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

[Barely2]

Wow what a terrific story. One of my favourites. You write beautifully and develop the story at just the right pace. Can't wait until your next story. Well done and thank-you.

[NudeBaG]

Gah!
Just read this back again!
Still brilliant!
And still would LOVE to see Mia, Hannah and Ellie FULLY get to play with Cam more properly

This is still my sentiment.
Maybe use Cam to trick/lure some others in?
He has Ellie, now, after all.
And since Mia can no longer mock him, perhaps she’ll have fun comparing other boys to him instead
Plus, it would be fun to hear if Hannah has gotten any one on one time with Cam

[BareB4U]

Heh, thanks for continuing to bump this story every so often.

I do still want to write a sequel sometime. It's been stuck in the same state for months. I've got very clear ideas on how it starts and ends. I know some of the stuff that happens along the way. I also know how I want to explore the changing relationships between each of the four main characters. The problem is, I haven't been able to pull it all together into anything resembling a coherent story, and every time I try, I get a couple of hundred words in and end up throwing it all out.

I haven't given up. I'm sure I'll get there. I'm hoping that one day everything will just click together in my mind. I love these characters and want very much to play with them again, but I can't force the writing. It has to... ahem, come naturally.

[steam train]

Heh, thanks for continuing to bump this story every so often.

I do still want to write a sequel sometime. It's been stuck in the same state for months. I've got very clear ideas on how it starts and ends. I know some of the stuff that happens along the way. I also know how I want to explore the changing relationships between each of the four main characters. The problem is, I haven't been able to pull it all together into anything resembling a coherent story, and every time I try, I get a couple of hundred words in and end up throwing it all out.

I haven't given up. I'm sure I'll get there. I'm hoping that one day everything will just click together in my mind. I love these characters and want very much to play with them again, but I can't force the writing. It has to... ahem, come naturally.

I am sure the ideas will gel into a coherent plot over time. There is certainly a lot of scope between the 4 main characters and possibly the mother as well acting as the agent of motivation for more embarrassing situations, as she seemed very keen to break down the barriers between her two eldest children.

[NudeBaG]

I almost see the dynamic shift being mostly between Ellie, Mia, and Hannah.

I think Ellie and Cam are solid.
That budding relationship evolves and sticks.

Mia takes advantage of her leverage with Cam, not letting him know the full extent of her attraction or how impressive he actually is.

Hannah is just along for the ride, enjoying her authority over her naked adoptive brother.

Natalie gets to enjoy more of her naked neighbor boy.

It’s a fun dynamic, all around.

Plenty of room to bounce between fun, humiliation and serious budding relationship elements

[NudeBaG]

“Cameron waited for the catch. Mia was only too happy to oblige him. “Hannah and I don’t agree to this for nothing, Cam. Here’s the deal. In return, you’re going to give us an action replay whenever we want. Maybe we’ll share a pool cubicle again, maybe it’ll be somewhere else. But you WILL get naked when we ask you to, and let us do whatever we want with you.”

I love that he and Ellie are together.
It might not necessarily fall under ‘enm’ but I would still love to see:
A chapter with he and Hannah. (Taboo, but not incest.)
A chapter with he and Mia. (Jealousy, and reluctant admiration.)
A chapter with he and Natalie. (Satisfactory exploration at the hands of the classmate/neighbor girl)

[NudeBaG]

Just need to say,
The build up and execution of Cam’s orgasm was amazing.
It wasn’t a deliberate, calculated act.
It was a humiliating, accidental reaction to being touched by the object of affection.
Mia’s touch didn’t do it.
It was Ellie.
Ellie didn’t even mean to.
That’s what puts me over. Every. Time.
The presence and taunting of Mia and Hannah is one thing.
But the admiration and touch of Hannah is that perfect, confusing mix of embarrassment and euphoria that should be the center of an enm orgasm.