The Classical Physique - Art School Micropenis ENM

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Hopefully he's a grower?
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Poor Dylan, I wonder how that picture will come into play?
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Patiently and excitedly waiting for more of this one
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This story is wonderfully written and so well developed. I've enjoyed it so much that I've looked up all your other stories & plan on reading them. Thank-you.
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Thanks Barely2 :) I'll try to keep writing more!
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The Exhibitionist

The crisp Thursday morning air of North Springs High School hung with an almost suffocating, electric tension, long before the first buses had even begun to rumble down the leafy suburban streets of the tolerant and quirky East Coast town. In the quiet solitude of her bedroom, Ari sat frozen at her cluttered wooden desk. The single, warm bulb of her reading lamp cast long, distorted, and menacing shadows across her bedroom walls, illuminating the scattered debris of her burgeoning artistic obsession. In front of her, resting delicately atop a pile of scattered, dog-eared photography magazines, was the glossy, square Polaroid print.

She stared at it, her chest rising and falling in shallow, rhythmic breaths.

For the past few hours, she’d been using a highly-technical method to enlarge the Polaroid into A4 size copy. Watching with a mixture of terror and exhilarating triumph, the milky white chemicals in the bathing tray had slowly receded to reveal the devastatingly large image underneath. Ari was head over heels in love with the state-of-the-art contraption she’d used to immortalise Dylan’s physique. It was a tool of immense power, she realized. It didn't just capture light; it captured truth. And the truth sitting on her desk was a masterpiece of raw, unfiltered vulnerability.

The harsh, unforgiving flash of her camera had perfectly frozen the frantic, terrible energy of the moment in the art room. There was Dylan Beckett, his milky-white, porcelain skin standing in stark, almost ethereal contrast to the dark, shadowed background of the classroom. His eyes were wide, dilated pools of shock and panic, his mouth slightly parted as if caught mid-gasp. The flash had highlighted the taut, defined outlines of his impressive musculature. His strong chest, his rippled abdomen. His hands were static by his side, relaxed and unassuming – there was a subtle hint that just as the flash had gone off his broad shoulder muscles had reflexively tensed, as if to subconsciously move to cement his hands over his crotch. But the camera shutter had been infinitesimally faster than his reflexes.

There, immortalized in high-contrast colour and undeniable clarity, was the stark reality of his micropenis. His miniscule, barely-visible appendage, hanging no more than a centimetre away from his crotch, was exposed for eternity.

In Ari’s mind, the rationalizations had already taken deep, unshakeable root. She wasn't committing an act of profound cruelty, she told herself repeatedly as she paced the floorboards of her room. She was a studious and serious young girl, a budding photographer who understood the weight of the medium. She was curating a vital exhibition. Dylan himself, a supremely talented young artist, had earnestly lectured them just yesterday that true artists needed to be brave, open, and honest. He had willingly stripped off his blazer, his pants, his shirt, and his underwear, exposing himself for the sake of art. She was merely expanding his audience, allowing the whole school to witness the profound truth of his unique physique. North Springs had won numerous awards for the quality of its artistic achievements; surely, the student body could appreciate such raw portraiture.

Carefully, reverently, Ari picked up the enlarged photograph by its white edges, hyper-aware of the oils on her skin, careful not to leave any fingerprints on the glossy surface. She slipped it into the inside pocket of her school bag, uncreased and pristine. The stiff, chemical-scented paper pressed against the fabric of her bag – it was real. Tangible. A physical manifestation of the explosive secret she was carrying into the world.

The walk to school was a prolonged blur of heightened, almost painful senses. The town's population was known for being quite left-leaning and open-minded, but Ari knew that high school social dynamics were governed by an entirely different, far more primitive set of laws. Every snap of a dry twig beneath her leather shoes sounded to her ears like a gunshot; every distant bark of a dog felt like an alarm siren. She arrived at the school gates nearly an hour before the first bell was scheduled to ring. The grounds of North Springs High were entirely deserted, an expansive, silent canvas of muted brick and dew-soaked grass waiting to be disturbed by the chaotic energy of adolescence.

Ari marched with a quiet, deliberate purpose toward the main administrative building. Her heart hammered against her sternum, a frantic, bird-like fluttering that she tried to suppress with deep, measured breaths. The hallways were dark, smelling faintly of institutional floor wax and stale chalk dust. She slipped into the main hall, her rubber-soled shoes squeaking softly against the polished linoleum. She approached the large, glass-fronted noticeboard that stood directly opposite the cafeteria doors. It was a strategic masterpiece of a location - a high-traffic bottleneck where nearly every student congregated before first period to gossip and loiter. The board was currently a mundane collage of cross-country tryouts, choir rehearsals, and typed lost-and-found notices.

Ari’s hands trembled slightly as she reached out and popped the metal latch of the glass casing. The squeak of the brass hinges sounded deafening in the cavernous, empty hall. She froze, her breath catching painfully in her throat, listening intently for the heavy footsteps of a janitor or an early-arriving teacher. Silence stretched out, thick and heavy.

Slowly, her fingers steadying with resolve, she removed a single, red pushpin from a forgotten, yellowing flyer. She withdrew the picture from her bag. For a fleeting second, looking at the terrified, athletic, and toned physique of the boy in the photograph, a sliver of doubt pierced her artistic armour. He trusted you, a small voice whispered in the back of her mind. He thought you were a fellow artist.

She clamped down on the thought, her jaw tightening. It’s art, she reminded herself fiercely. It’s the truth.

With a swift, practiced motion, Ari drove the red pin cleanly through the top white margin at the top, mounting it directly in the absolute centre of the board, at perfect eye level.

She stepped back, tilting her head to analyze the composition. The contrast was devastating. The boy's vulnerability was now a public monument, completely inescapable to anyone walking through the doors. Satisfied that her masterpiece was perfectly positioned to maximize its impact, Ari silently closed the glass casing, clicking the latch back into place with a definitive snap. She turned on her heel and retreated toward the safety of the library, seamlessly removing herself from the scene of the crime to wait out the inevitable explosion. Her anonymous exhibition was officially open.

The Gathering Storm

Out on the playground, the morning mist was slowly burning off under the gentle warmth of the rising Australian sun. Carly and Robin had assumed their usual positions beneath the sprawling, protective branches of the large oak tree at one end of the playground.

The nervous, giddy energy that had fuelled their endless whispering the previous afternoon had completely curdled overnight into a heavy, nauseating knot of anxious anticipation. Neither girl had slept well. Carly felt entirely out of her depth. Robin, usually confident, looked equally pale and drawn.

The image of Dylan, trembling and completely naked in the narrow walkway between the buildings, hiding from the hordes of students passing by, was burned vividly into their memories.

"I still can't believe Ruby actually saw him," Carly whispered, her voice barely carrying over the gentle rustle of the oak leaves above. She nervously pushed her glasses back up her nose, huddling closer to Robin. "Do you think she told anyone? If she talks, the whole school will know we were there."

"I don't know," Robin replied, her usually studious demeanour cracking under the immense strain of their shared secret. She began picking frantically at a loose thread on her skirt. "She promised him she wouldn't look when he was climbing the window sill. But when he fell…I mean, she saw everything."

Before Carly could voice her mounting dread, a familiar, chaotic energy bounded across the dewy grass. It was Thanh. Her jet-black hair bounced with every step. Her face was flushed, and her trademark toothy grin radiated a mischievous, unbothered delight that seemed entirely inappropriate given the gravity of the situation. Of all the girls, Thanh displayed the most confidence and worldliness.

"Hi guys!" Thanh chirped loudly, dropping her heavy bag onto the grass with a careless thud. "What you whisper about? You think about Dylan falling on his head like idiot?"

"Thanh, be quiet, it's not funny!" Robin hissed, her eyes darting around the playground, scanning the slowly growing crowds of arriving students to ensure nobody was eavesdropping. "He could have been really hurt. And Ruby was standing right there! He was completely nude!"

Thanh simply shrugged her shoulders, thoroughly nonplussed by their panic. To her, seeing naked boys was a common occurrence in her homeland and stirred neither excitement nor interest. "It his own fault. He clumsy. Plus, he get mad at me for telling truth. If he not yell at me to shut up, he not slip on the bricks."

She reached deep into the pocket of her dress. With a sly, conspiratorial wink, she pulled out the small trench coat button she had sourced from the equipment cabinet the day before - the very button she had hovered over his genitals to humiliate him in the art room. She flipped it into the air, catching it neatly in her palm.

"Nút nhỏ!" Thanh cackled softly, her eyes dancing with wicked amusement.

The infectious nature of Thanh's complete lack of empathy slowly began to work its dark magic on Carly and Robin. Despite the heavy guilt weighing on their chests, the sheer, chaotic absurdity of the previous day - the frantic search for the missing keys in Thanh's bag, the terrified naked boy huddled against the brick wall, and Ruby Richards's look of utter, breathless bewilderment - bubbled dangerously to the surface.

Against her better judgment, Carly clamped a hand over her mouth, a high-pitched snort escaping through her fingers. Robin bit her lip, her shoulders beginning to shake with violently suppressed laughter. The tension was breaking, replaced by the cruel, intoxicating levity of teenage gossip.

Their private, guilty amusement was suddenly shattered by a strange, collective noise echoing from the main building.

It started as a low, indistinct murmur, a ripple of hushed whispers carrying across the playground. But within seconds, it rapidly escalated. The whispers morphed into loud gasps, then into a cacophony of raucous laughter, shrieks, and shouting. It sounded less like a school hallway and more like a coliseum crowd baying for blood.

"What's going on?" Carly asked, the smile evaporating instantly from her face, replaced by a cold dread.

The three girls exchanged confused, panicked glances. Without another word, Thanh grabbed her bag, and Carly and Robin scrambled to follow, jogging toward the heavy double doors of the main hall to witness whatever catastrophe had just unfolded.

The False Dawn

Outside, entirely unaware of the social execution currently taking place in the main hall, Dylan Beckett walked slowly through the front gates of North Springs High.

He moved tentatively, his long, dark hair gently flowing down the sides of his still-aching head. He reached a pale hand up to the back of his head, wincing slightly as his fingers brushed the tender, swollen bump where his skull had collided violently with the ground the day before. His stomach was a churning, acidic pit of anxiety. The memory of the previous afternoon was a chaotic, fragmented nightmare that played on a relentless loop in his mind. The terror of the heavy art room door clicking shut. The sheer panic of realizing Thanh had left the keys inside the room. The freezing humiliation of pressing his naked back against the cold brick of the walkway, goosebumps forming over his body, while hundreds of students walked mere feet away.

But amidst the terror, and the sharp sting of Thanh's relentless, cruel mockery, there was one shining beacon of hope that he had clung to all night in his dark bedroom: Ruby Richards.

With her piercing blue eyes reminiscent of a very young Grace Kelly, she was the absolute pinnacle of the social hierarchy. And she had seen him. She had turned around when he fell from the window sill, and she had gazed down at his naked body as the rays of midday sunshine highlighted every fiber of his skin. She had seen the stark contradiction of his athletic, chiselled physique and his pitiful micropenis.

Yet, in the walkway prior to the fall, she had offered him compassion. She hadn't laughed like Thanh. She hadn't recoiled in disgust. She had thrown her arms around him in a tight, warm bear hug and told him it was sweet he would do this for his friends. She had looked into his eyes and told him he had absolutely nothing to be embarrassed about.

As he walked toward the main block, his heart fluttered with a desperate, burgeoning affection. If Ruby accepted him, if the most beautiful, popular girl in the grade could look past his physical shortcomings and see the mature, intellectual, and well-read boy underneath, then the rest of the world didn't matter. He could survive this nightmare.

He spotted her standing near the bank of lockers in a quiet, sunlit corridor just adjacent to the main hall. She was alone, retrieving her heavy textbooks for first period. Her pristine blonde hair caught the morning sunlight, and she looked as perfect and untouchable as ever.

Taking a deep, stabilizing breath, Dylan approached her, his hands sweating profusely inside his pockets.

"Hi, Ruby," he said softly, his voice trembling slightly, betraying his shattered nerves.

Ruby spun around. For a fraction of a second, her eyes widened in surprise, but her expression rapidly softened into a warm, deeply empathetic gaze.

"Dylan! Hi," she smiled, her voice a soothing melody. "How’s your head? Are you feeling better after?"

"Yeah, it's just a little sore," he replied, shifting his weight nervously from foot to foot. He looked down at the ground, struggling to find the words, acutely aware of the vast chasm in their social standing. "Listen...about yesterday. I just wanted to say thanks. For not...you know. For not making fun of me when you saw...everything. It was a nightmare."

Ruby closed her locker with a gentle click and stepped closer to him. She was the very picture of genuine kindness. She reached out, just as she had done the day before, and gently placed a reassuring, warm hand on his forearm.

"Dylan, I told you, it's okay," she said softly, her blue eyes locking onto his. "You don't have to be embarrassed around me. What happened was totally unfair, and you were so brave to pose for them. I promise you, your secret’s safe with me."

A wave of profound, intoxicating relief washed over the young boy. The tight knot of anxiety that had kept him awake finally unspooled. He smiled, a genuine, glowing smile that brought a rush of colour back to his pale cheeks.

"Thanks, Ruby," he breathed. "You’re the best!"

"Come on," she said brightly, offering him a sweet, perfect smile as she adjusted her books in her arms. "Let's get to class before the warning bell goes."

They began to walk side-by-side toward the main hall, a comfortable, electric silence settling between them. Dylan felt a strange, soaring sense of triumph. The worst had happened, and he had survived.

The Execution

As they turned the final corner toward the main administrative building, the deafening roar of the student body hit them like a physical wall of force.

The main hall was packed wall-to-wall, devolving from a place of mundane transit into a ruthless arena governed entirely by a cruel herd mentality. It was a chaotic, writhing sea of pointing fingers, jeers, and hysterical laughter bouncing violently off the high ceilings. The sheer volume of the mockery was overwhelming, completely drowning out the usual morning chatter. The atmosphere was thick with a palpable, almost predatory psychological tension; human empathy had been entirely suspended in favour of collective spectacle.

Dylan frowned in confusion, his steps faltering as the heavy noise washed over him. "What's going on?" he asked, attempting to peer over the heads of the smaller Year 7 students congregating at the back of the mob.

Ruby, slightly taller, craned her neck. Her piercing blue eyes locked onto the glass-fronted noticeboard in the distance, cutting through the chaos to find the source of the commotion.

Dylan watched closely as the colour drained entirely from Ruby's flawless face. Her expression morphed in real-time from mild curiosity to stark, unadulterated horror. Her hand, which had been brushing gently and affectionately against his as they walked, snapped back to her side as if she had been burned by a hot iron. She physically recoiled, putting a foot of space between them instantly, her breathing growing shallow.

"Ruby? What is it?" Dylan asked, his pulse suddenly beginning to race with a terrible, instinctual dread.

Without answering, Ruby began to back away from him, her eyes wide with a sudden, panicked realization. She looked at him not with the empathy she had shown seconds ago, but as if he were a disease that could instantly infect her social standing.

Driven by a sickening sense of inevitability, Dylan pushed his way forward, forcing his slender frame into the fringes of the laughing crowd. "Excuse me. Move. Let me through," he muttered, his heart hammering violently against his ribs.

The closer he got to the centre, the more the disjointed snippets of conversation began to form a horrifyingly coherent picture. He found himself trapped behind a large group of Year 7 girls from his own grade. They were staring up at the board, their eyes wide, completely abandoning any sense of filter or decorum as they clinically, ruthlessly dissected his most profound vulnerability.

"I don't understand," a girl with pigtails scoffed, leaning closer to the glass. "He's so tall...how can his thing be so tiny?"

"Look at his face, he looks terrified!" another girl shrieked, clutching her stomach.

"It’s barely a nub! It's like a weird defect," a third girl added, her voice dripping with morbid fascination. "My little cousin’s a toddler and he's bigger than that. This is the most embarrassing thing I've ever seen."

Dylan felt the blood rush from his head, leaving him dizzy. He tried to push past them, but the crowd suddenly surged to the left as a teacher frantically tried to usher a visiting group of students through the hall. It was a class of Year 4 children from a neighbouring primary school, visiting North Springs for an orientation day. The 9-year-olds, small and easily swallowed by the crowd of older kids, found themselves pushed directly in front of the noticeboard.

"Miss, look!" a small boy yelled, pointing a stubby finger directly at the picture. "Why is that boy nude?!"

"Ew, gross!" a little girl with a missing front tooth squealed, covering her eyes but peeking through her fingers. "He’s not wearing anything!"

"Miss, what’s wrong with his thingy?" another young girl asked loudly, genuinely perplexed by the anatomy on display. "I can’t see it properly!" she quizzically announced as she moved closer to the board.

"Keep moving, children! Eyes front! Do not look at that board!" their flustered teacher demanded, her face turning crimson as she desperately tried to herd the innocent, loudly observing 9-year-olds away from the scandalous exhibition. But the damage was done. The innocent, confused observations of the young children only amplified the surreal, suffocating humiliation of the moment, sending the surrounding teenagers into fresh fits of howling laughter.

Dylan threw his shoulder into the backs of two older boys, finally breaking through the tightly packed front line of students. He stopped dead in his tracks. The air left his lungs in a rushed, silent exhale.

There, illuminated mercilessly by the harsh fluorescent lights of the hall, pinned securely to the centre of the board, was his naked body. Exposed for every single student at North Springs High to consume, ridicule, and mock. The bright flash of Ari's camera had immortalized his ultimate shame, capturing his milky-white, porcelain skin and exposing the pathetic reality of his micropenis.

The world seemed to literally tilt on its axis. The roaring noise of the crowd suddenly faded into a high-pitched, ringing static in his ears. His legs felt like lead weights; his stomach dropped into a bottomless void. He slowly turned his head, desperately searching the laughing faces for a lifeline, for anyone who would pull it down.

He spotted Ari standing near the back, leaning casually against the cafeteria wall. Her arms were crossed, and a look of profound, arrogant satisfaction rested on her freckled face as she surveyed her 'artistic' achievement. She met his terrified gaze and offered a small, cold smirk.

He saw Thanh, Carly, and Robin pushing through the crowd. Thanh was pointing directly at the board, her shoulders heaving with laughter as she chatted openly with a group of older boys, entirely unapologetic. Carly and Robin were standing right beside her. They were giggling nervously, aggressively avoiding his gaze, staring firmly at the linoleum floor as if it held the secrets of the universe, utterly abandoning the boy they had convinced to strip for them.

Then, his frantic eyes found Ruby.

She was standing near the edge of the crowd, having been instantly swarmed by a group of the most popular, ruthless, well-connected girls in their grade. They were whispering frantically, their eyes darting aggressively from the photograph on the board, directly to Ruby, and then over to Dylan.

"Ruby, oh my god," one of the blonde girls sneered, her voice carrying sharply over the din of the hallway. "Were you just walking in with him? Did you know about...that?"

The girl gestured dismissively toward the board, her face twisted in a mask of cruel disgust.

Dylan took a desperate, trembling step toward her, his dark eyes pleading. Please, he silently begged across the expanse of the hall. You promised. You just told me I was brave. You said you didn't care.

Ruby looked at Dylan. She saw the absolute, soul-crushing devastation etched into his pale features. She remembered the boy shivering in the walkway yesterday, desperately trying to protect his dignity while the school walked by. Her natural instinct, the genuine kindness that had prompted her to hug him and comfort him, screamed at her to defend him. She could end this.

But then she looked at the expectant, judging faces of her friends. She saw the disgust, the mockery, the imminent social execution waiting for anyone who dared associate themselves with the pathetic boy on the noticeboard. In the brutal, unforgiving hierarchy of North Springs High, loyalty to an outcast was absolute social suicide. The pressure was a physical weight pressing down on her shoulders, threatening to crush her perfectly manicured existence.

Dylan watched the internal war wage across her beautiful features, and he watched, with a breaking heart, as human vulnerability was sacrificed to the mob.

Ruby's expression hardened. The warmth in her blue eyes froze over in a microscopic instant. She tossed her blonde hair over her shoulder, straightened her spine, and let out a loud, theatrical scoff, ensuring every popular girl in her inner circle, and half the hallway, could hear her.

"Ew, no! Are you kidding me?" Ruby announced, her voice dripping with a manufactured, venomous revulsion.

She raised a perfectly manicured hand and pointed a finger directly at Dylan, singling him out for the entire crowd to witness.

"I was only talking to him because I felt sorry for him! I didn’t know he had baby dick! You can't even see it!"

The popular girls erupted into shrieks of approving laughter, validating Ruby's cruel pivot. The surrounding crowd, hearing the beautiful Ruby Richards condemn him so thoroughly, laughed even harder. The Year 7 girls he had overheard earlier pointed at him anew, their faces alight with vicious glee.

But Ruby wasn't finished. Desperate to entirely sever herself from the boy she had comforted just moments prior, to prove beyond a shadow of a doubt to her peers that she found him repulsive, she reached for the ultimate weapon. A declaration of permanent rejection – a demand to stay away from her forever.

"Seriously, Dylan" Ruby yelled, her voice echoing shrilly off the glass casing of the noticeboard. "Don’t bring that thing near me again!”

The crowd roared with fresh, delighted laughter at the strange, exotic-sounding insult. The betrayal was complete, absolute, and utterly devastating.

Dylan stood completely paralyzed as the words physically struck him like heavy stones. The girl he liked, the girl who had held him and promised his secret was safe, had just delivered the fatal blow to his dignity in front of the entire school. The artistic bravery he had so proudly clung to, the maturity he had tried to project, shattered into a million irreparable pieces on the linoleum floor.

He looked at Ruby one last time, his dark features contorted in absolute agony, his eyes brimming with unshed tears of pure, unadulterated humiliation. For a fraction of a second, as she met his gaze, the facade of the popular girl cracked. A flash of intense, agonizing guilt passed over Ruby's face.

But she quickly turned away, breaking eye contact, immersing herself safely back into the centre of the laughing, cruel crowd.

Unable to breathe, unable to hide, and stripped bare of the last remaining shred of his pride, Dylan Beckett turned his back on the photograph. He pushed his way violently through the mob of his classmates, ignoring their taunts and the pointing fingers of the visiting primary schoolers, and sprinted blindly out of the heavy main hall doors. He fled into the cold, empty expanse of the school oval, leaving his ruined reputation pinned to the board behind him. But quietly, emerging from the throng of maniacal children cackling and gossiping with glee, a mousy, young figure started quickly walking in the direction of the fleeing boy.

She slipped away from the boisterous crowd with barely anyone noticing, not uncommon for the painfully shy student, her pace increasing to catch up with Dylan. Aside from her best friend she barely interacted with any of the other kids, which made her concerned and hurried beeline for him even more perplexing.

Perhaps, in a sea of mocking cruelty, she might be the life raft to which Dylan could cling:

Willow Calloway.
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Finally read the rest of this.
Profoundly humiliating and upsetting.
Well written, and while I’m not a SPH fan, I was enjoying the friendly banter and acceptance.
Ruby’s sudden heel turn put a huge damper on things for me.
They’re all 11?
I guess even then, they’d have *some concept of (size to attraction) ratio.
Still, Dylan’s got plenty of room for growth over the next few years.
Maybe puberty will be kind to him.
It just seems a bit *too aggressively mean on the girls’ parts.
(For me, anyway)
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School can be a jungle, I guess. Survival of the (socially) fittest, and every boy/girl for themselves.

Everything the girls are doing seems in character, from what we've seen of them so far. I do hope Dylan finds some better friends though, and a more worthy object of his affections.

I like the creeping sense of dread you've captured here in every chapter. The signs are always there that Dylan is doomed, and you make us feel for him and his impending (and actual) humiliation every time it happens.
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Absolutely agree with the ‘creeping dread’.
It hit.
I’m just a bit conflicted about Dylan’s misplaced lack of modesty.
It did make for an embarrassing reveal, but there seemed to be a bit of ignorance regarding his own shortcomings, and how others perceive them.
Like, does he not compare himself to other boys?
Did he not pick up on the art instructor’s hints about being cold?
Obviously, the girls in his class knew he was well undersized.

None of this really matters, or has any bearing on your level of writing, just trying to understand the character a bit more for my own purposes.

Edit:

Just reread and caught the ‘homeschool’ line.
Makes sense now.
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This feels weird.

It’s absolutely not the usual story I’m drawn to, yet I’ve read it 3 times.
It evokes a sense of shame I’m not used to actually feeling in these kind of stories.
There’s an innocence to it, but it feels cruel at the same time.
But it’s (unfortunately) very realistic.
I feel bad for the MC, but at the same time, he kind of did it to himself.
He can’t help it.
He did nothing wrong.
And there is cruelty, but it’s almost a ‘natural’ / unavoidable cruelty.

Ugh😓

Well done
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