I didn't see any girl naked

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Just for reference:
Mrs. Kapoor, i am imagining like someone like this: https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/imag ... kLjX4&s=10

And Swathi: https://southindianactress.in/wp-conten ... taa-11.jpg

I can give reference to some people who are above 18+. Rest, i would like if anyone would like to add references as per your taste. Idk rules behind giving reference of fully cloth Aravind but not risking posting kid pics

I mean fully clothed anything is fine. Doesn't really matter the age if they're fully clothed.

[nabpa]

Just for reference:
Mrs. Kapoor, i am imagining like someone like this: https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/imag ... kLjX4&s=10

And Swathi: https://southindianactress.in/wp-conten ... taa-11.jpg

I can give reference to some people who are above 18+. Rest, i would like if anyone would like to add references as per your taste. Idk rules behind giving reference of fully cloth Aravind but not risking posting kid pics

I mean fully clothed anything is fine. Doesn't really matter the age if they're fully clothed.

Sure, btw, u didn't tell how the story is

[nabpa]

I’ve loved creating this world, but writing is a two-way street, and the total lack of response lately has been pretty disheartening. It makes me feel like the story isn't quite hitting the mark or worth your time. Because of that, I’m seriously considering abandoning this project and walking away from writing entirely to focus on other hobbies. This might be my final update. If you care about these characters and want the story to continue, please speak up now, otherwise, I’ll consider this my official goodbye. Not leaving because I am not getting response from anyone but leaving because I can't write any good stuff that people like reading...that's what I currently feel like. I know some write because it is fun for them, for me, I enjoy reading but I also write. If my writing is not that great, I would stop writing but rather just imagine all the stories in my head but never waste time putting it on paper.

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I’ve loved creating this world, but writing is a two-way street, and the total lack of response lately has been pretty disheartening. It makes me feel like the story isn't quite hitting the mark or worth your time. Because of that, I’m seriously considering abandoning this project and walking away from writing entirely to focus on other hobbies. This might be my final update. If you care about these characters and want the story to continue, please speak up now, otherwise, I’ll consider this my official goodbye. Not leaving because I am not getting response from anyone but leaving because I can't write any good stuff that people like reading...that's what I currently feel like. I know some write because it is fun for them, for me, I enjoy reading but I also write. If my writing is not that great, I would stop writing but rather just imagine all the stories in my head but never waste time putting it on paper.

I'll be frank, I liked the first chapter a lot, but I do feel like it is a bit single-tone? Like, it's purely Arvind-bashing. Which is fine , many people like that, but personally I prefer some give and take.

I don't think you should give up, but I do feel like this story was a great single-chapter story. I think you should start afresh with a new story with new characters you can create.

I still think you have great potential as an author.

[nabpa]

Thanks...you could have told me the same after chapter 2 or 3 ...yeah...though i initially planned it just chapter 1 but then i wanted to expand thr story and did what i can. Yeah, got the feedback. Thanks for that. And yeah, i did plan for Aravind to get back or rebel out on these ladies but was taking it a bit slow until Aravind burst out and says enough is enough, before getting back at all those females...Aravind in this story is not that soft as he appeared so far tbh...i did plan for push back strong enough though ig prolonging story is not my main skill...maybe i will end this or abandon and next story, i will plan for a more Distributed focus. Anyways, i got inspired from few authors. Like stories from asstr or few stories from here. Those where all mc-bashing endless...i initially didn't know how they wrote wuch great stories without getting boring even when it was always just mc bashing but i do love it...tbh, i feel boring when the mc accepts it or feel less embarassed or who does not overcome the feeling at all even after months or ages and people still tease him but i also like when he takes revenge or fightback which just adds humilation for the other but his humilation never fades. Anyways, now i got clarity...if people like more back and forth stories like jarring punishment, let me try that by abandoning this...thanks again because i was working on next chapter but seeing not many liked the previous chapter, i thought i was just wasting my time and comes out to be true...atleast it saves my time now.

[NudeBaG]

Personally, constant degradation and humiliation is a turn off.
If titillation is the goal, you need balance.
Public nudity is almost always a turn on, but if all it is is taunting and cutting-down on repeat, no matter who is involved?
Nah.
And don’t let comments or engagement be the driving force behind your writing.
Do it as an outlet for you.
There are more readers on this site than you realize.
You don’t need an account just to read.
If you want engagement, look at the stories with a high number of comments/interactions.
Read the story as well as the comments and see what is said.
No need to quit writing, just figure out your goals.
Do you want the outlet?
Or praise?
If both, you need to find that balance

[nabpa]

That's cool and worth hearing...i don't need praises but critics also is fine as long as i get a feeling like i am heard . I feel like this world can't appreciate nor dislike everyone even if they make some content with alot of efforts not because they don't want to but it is just that, when someone posts something along with 100s of other members, some content just vanish because no one seen it and it became a article of past. I just fear it. And personally i don't like to waste time if no one reads it. I don't like competing for attention because i can't. I am more straightforward. It would be nice if i make some friends who no matter what, remembers to read my content and discuss. I mean that would be the reason for me to write. And infact, there are q lot of readers who do not login and i was one of them too and i also feel bad about not being able to read every story that worth appreciation for their efforts

Eitherway, i am very bad at making friends but if i do, it always would be closest friend (infact i only make closest friends or none, can't be casual just like how i write. Idk my brain is wired to always be at edge or extreme cases). I cannot force others to read my storiea but even if it is just one who enjoys my stories, i would like to write. I mean one closed friend i can share my thoughts with or he sees me not as a author but as a fellow person. Ig not many are here after making friends. I do get it. Internet is the place we can not trust anyone but ig i am more introvert in rl. So this is one place i usually make friends but not like i never had rl friends. I do but they all, j can not share my stories with...i did with one and he stopped talking entirely

I have like plenty outlets in life, ones in a while, i choose this but feels like no one liked it after chapter 1 or 2 and i am stuck on understanding what everyone enjoys for now

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That's cool and worth hearing...i don't need praises but critics also is fine as long as i get a feeling like i am heard . I feel like this world can't appreciate nor dislike everyone even if they make some content with alot of efforts not because they don't want to but it is just that, when someone posts something along with 100s of other members, some content just vanish because no one seen it and it became a article of past. I just fear it. And personally i don't like to waste time if no one reads it. I don't like competing for attention because i can't. I am more straightforward. It would be nice if i make some friends who no matter what, remembers to read my content and discuss. I mean that would be the reason for me to write. And infact, there are q lot of readers who do not login and i was one of them too and i also feel bad about not being able to read every story that worth appreciation for their efforts

Eitherway, i am very bad at making friends but if i do, it always would be closest friend (infact i only make closest friends or none, can't be casual just like how i write. Idk my brain is wired to always be at edge or extreme cases). I cannot force others to read my storiea but even if it is just one who enjoys my stories, i would like to write. I mean one closed friend i can share my thoughts with or he sees me not as a author but as a fellow person. Ig not many are here after making friends. I do get it. Internet is the place we can not trust anyone but ig i am more introvert in rl. So this is one place i usually make friends but not like i never had rl friends. I do but they all, j can not share my stories with...i did with one and he stopped talking entirely

I have like plenty outlets in life, ones in a while, i choose this but feels like no one liked it after chapter 1 or 2 and i am stuck on understanding what everyone enjoys for now

I would suggest you read something from BareB4U for an example of give-and-take in a story as opposed to continuous humiliation.

Some people like continuos humiliation too, but most of us seem to prefer give and take.
Also, you can try posting your real stories in True Stories, many great stories start from there and turn into fiction later.