It’s Rude to Point (Chapter 7b - July 16)

[NickTwisp]

Very good the way they talk Mark into getting naked & then into masturbation in front of everyone. Ironic the star quarterback naked in his livingroom in front of girls younger than him or same age (whom he will no doubt see in school frequently).

[Trundle]

Definitely one of my favourites on here.

I like how you've kept the humiliation aspect to the story, it can be tough to keep that going so far into a story but I think it's important for the story to work and this definitely still has that aspect. I love it.

Looking forward to more!

[superevil7]

I love this story so much.
When dealing with adults in these kind of stories, it’s usually the end of the fun.
Seeing youths carry out such brazenly sexual acts is usually cause for intervention.
But, without the use of any kind of hypnosis or ‘magic’, you’ve been able to (believably) justify everything.

Thanks so much! Would love to hear more about what you are enjoying about the story.

You know, this has some interesting crossover potential with your other story, "new rules." Imagine the two towns and their new cultures meeting. While there is initially some friction, there is eventually a resolution justifying the status of the genders in each town. In addition, females of the cfnm town help the males of the cmnf town control their females, while the males of the cmnf town help the cfnm females control their males. What do you think?

Interesting idea. I'll keep it in mind.

Very good the way they talk Mark into getting naked & then into masturbation in front of everyone. Ironic the star quarterback naked in his livingroom in front of girls younger than him or same age (whom he will no doubt see in school frequently).

Definitely one of my favourites on here.

I like how you've kept the humiliation aspect to the story, it can be tough to keep that going so far into a story but I think it's important for the story to work and this definitely still has that aspect. I love it.

Looking forward to more!

Thank you both . Would definitely love to hear more about what you're enjoying too.