Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 6 01/19/26

[Sanford7727]

Nice premise. This very much reminds me of that other story where a girl ends up topless at a water park. I like that this one is more paced out and not so fast moving. I think one or two bracelets on her wrist would probably suffice, rather than making her wear four (that seems excessive and will make for tacky tanlines around her beautiful ankles - she should have her toenails painted pink, or something to make it even hotter). I cannot wait for those panties to get wet and see through, and I am genuinely curious if they will even stay on, once she starts going down those water jet slides. How many kids from school will show up? How many male classmates will be there? Lots to look forward too, for sure.

[Enfishot]

I'm loving the story. Looking forward to future chapters. I wonder if her friend will have ENF moments. Welcome aboard!

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

Important note:

After some very helpful and constructive feedback I decided to partially re-write chapters 1 and 2 and change some minor details. As it’s still early in the story’s development, some things turn out to not be quite thought out yet.
I will try to stay away from further alterations of previous chapters from now on, though. This was a one time thing.
I suppose you might want to re-read chapters 1 and 2, though as I said the changes are kept to a minimum.

Thanks for all your feedback!





Chapter 3 – Sliding down

Amy looked around, taking in the bustling waterpark. Kids and teenagers splashed in the pools, while their parents relaxed on comfortable loungers. Others wandered around or stood in line for the thrilling slides. To her surprise, there were no rude comments or angry people with torches and pitchforks coming after her. She felt a slight calm, though the tension remained.

As they walked, the girls came across two middle-aged men engaged in a heated political debate at the edge of a kiddy pool. They were likely watching their children while the moms enjoyed a drink at one of the bars. When Amy and Emma approached, the men suddenly stopped talking, their heads turning to look at Amy. One man's grumpy expression transformed into a pleasant smile, and the other raised his hand in a friendly wave. Amy, caught off guard, waved back, feeling a mix of anxiety and a strange tingling sensation in her stomach. The approval in their eyes fueled this feeling, and she couldn't help but blush, her cheeks in a soft pink.

While passing them, Emma glanced over her shoulder, suppressing a giggle at the men's obvious stares. Amy certainly draws some eyes, she thought to herself.

They finally reached the edge of the biggest pool. Emma nudged Amy's shoulder, pointing at a slide that didn't look too wild and had a shorter line. "Let's try this one first. We can work our way up to the bigger ones," Emma suggested, her tone encouraging.

Amy nodded, her voice a little shaky. "Yeah, but you go first."

As they waited in line, Amy observed people going down the slides, their screams of excitement echoing through the air. Slowly, her initial excitement returned. Maybe it isn't so bad after all, she realized, a small smile playing on her lips. I can still have fun.

There were only a couple of people in front of them, and they were almost at the top of the stairs when Amy felt a poke at the naked part of her left butt-cheek. She turned to see a small boy, no older than six or seven, his mom standing behind him, engrossed in a conversation with another woman.

The boy looked up at Amy with an innocent smile. "You can't swim?" he asked, his head tilted to the side in curiosity.

Amy was taken aback. "Of course I can swim!" she replied, confused by his question, her brows furrowing.

The boy pointed at one of the pink bracelets Amy was wearing. "I used to wear those, too. But I ever only wore one, why do you have four?" he asked curiously, his eyes wide with genuine interest.

Amy remembered what the lady from earlier had said. Kids wore these bracelets for the lifeguards to keep an eye on them. "It's, uh... because... um...," Amy stumbled over her words, her face turning red with embarrassment.

Emma stepped in, laying her arm around Amy's shoulder. "It's because she's not wearing a bikini top. The lifeguards must know that she's allowed to go topless, so she's made to wear the bracelets," she explained, her voice confident.

Amy turned to Emma in disbelief, feeling totally betrayed. Why would she just tell him? Amy wondered, her mind racing. Didn't Emma understand how vulnerable she felt?

The boy's eyes widened in realization. "Oh. But why don't you wear one?" he asked with a giggle, his voice filled with childlike innocence.

"I lost it before coming here," Amy finally said blushing, her hands fidgeting nervously at her sides.

The boy giggled even more. "You've got little boobies!" he blurted out without any inhibition, his words echoing in the air.

Immediately, Amy felt her head turn red from the unwanted attention, and it got worse when the mom turned around. "Billy, what are you saying?" she began, but her words trailed off as her eye fell on Amy. "Oh my! Billy, it's rude to say that," the mom said, not taking her eyes off Amy, her tone gentle.

"But mommy! Look, I can see her nippies. They're bigger than mine," Billy pointed out, his voice filled with wonder and a touch of excitement.

Emma cracked up at the boy's innocent silliness. He didn't mean to be rude, but his curiosity brought all the attention to Amy's bare chest, making her squirm with discomfort.

Amy was too embarrassed to respond. The mom explained casually, "Yes, because when girls get older, their nipples grow and later on they get breasts. And then they wear bras, just like your sister."

"Oh. Yeah," the boy said, his eyes down at the ground, seemingly thinking about something, his expression thoughtful.

"Sorry girls. Little Billy always asks questions. He can't help himself," the mom told them, her tone friendly and not at all irritated, a warm smile on her face.

Amy felt a little better, having expected a much worse reaction, especially after the encounter with the teenagers earlier.

"Hey, it's our turn!" Emma said, nudging Amy, who was glad that the awkward situation would finally be over, a sense of relief washing over her.

When the green light flashed, Emma went down the slide first. Amy watched her friend disappear down the slide, hearing her scream in excitement. A moment later, Emma hit the water with a big splash. Amy's heart raced with every second she waited for the green light, her palms sweaty with anticipation.

Amy looked down the slide; even though it wasn't the highest or most twisty one, it looked quite steep from up here. It was formed like an S and had a little ramp at the end of it.

Finally, the light went from red to green, and it was Amy's turn. She took a deep breath, gathered some courage, and sat down on the slide's edge. Using her hands, she pushed herself forward until gravity took over, and she began her descent down the slide's plastic half-tube.

The adrenaline rushed through Amy's veins as she gained speed and quickly reached the first bend. As she passed through, she felt the forces push her body to the side, making her ride up the wall. Amy began to scream from the exhilarating experience, her voice echoing through the slide, and didn't stop until she reached almost the end, her heart pounding in her chest.

After passing the second bend, she approached the small ramp with a lot of speed and was flung up into the air before coming down in the water with a splash. Amy found herself submerged and quickly swam back up. When she resurfaced, Emma was already there, smiling from ear to ear. "That was awesome! Let's do that again!" she exclaimed, her eyes sparkling with excitement.

Amy nodded enthusiastically in agreement. Her heart was still pumping fast. The slide was so much fun, adrenaline coursing through her veins, making her feel alive and carefree.

They climbed out of the pool and walked the short distance to get back in line for the same slide again. The wait was shorter than the first time, and they were halfway up the stairs before meeting the end of the line.

"I didn't expect it to be so much fun! You go down so fast!" Amy said, still amazed by the slide, her voice filled with great excitement.

"Huh? Oh yeah, I know right?" Emma murmured, seeming distracted, her gaze distant and her brows furrowed slightly.

Amy noticed her friend not looking at her directly but somewhere lower on her body, a sense of unease creeping up her spine. What was Emma looking at? Amy wondered.

Amy was about to follow Emma's gaze, but before she could, someone shouted from below. "Oh my god, it's Emma and Amy! Hey girls!"

The girls looked down and saw Valerie Simons and two of her friends quickly coming up the stairs behind them. Amy and Emma were at the end of the line, so Valerie and the other two girls quickly caught up to them.

"Damn. Did someone lose a bet or something?" Hannah, an Asian girl and one of Valerie's minions, said visibly amused, her lips curled into a smirk.

Amy's heart sank. These girls were probably the last people she wanted to see her like this, a wave of dread washing over her, her palms suddenly clammy and her mouth dry.

Emma stepped up for her speechless friend. "No, Amy just lost her swimsuit, so she decided to go in her panties. It's no big deal," she said, her voice steady and calm, a hint of defiance in her eyes.

"Oh wow. I could never go out like this. I mean, you're practically naked. Aren't you embarrassed at all?" Amber, the beautiful redhead and Val's second in command, asked, her tone a mix of curiosity and disbelief, her eyebrows raised in surprise.

Amy, shocked to see these girls, quickly brought one arm in front of her chest, her face flushing a deep red, her heart pounding in her ears. Valerie and her friends were notorious bullies. Val's family was devilishly rich, and no one, including faculty and even the principal at their school, dared to cross her. If someone did, their life would turn into a nightmare.

Amy had heard a story about another girl who had made the mistake of sitting on Val's chair during lunch break. She hadn't been aware of Val's reputation and refused to leave when asked. A few days later, pictures of the girl standing almost naked on the school’s well-lit football field, with the words "dumb bitch" written on her forehead, circulated throughout school and town. Almost every kid had seen them. Shortly after, the girl had to move away, and Val and her bully friends were never discovered to be the perpetrators, but everyone knew that Val had been behind all of this, her reputation preceding her like a dark cloud.

"Hey, don't worry Amy. You don't need to be shy around us. We're girls too, you know? I think it's pretty dope the way you, uh..., handle yourself," Valerie said with an unexpected friendly tone in her voice, her eyes softening slightly, a small smile playing on her lips. Even Amber and Hannah seemed surprised, their expressions shifting from amusement to something closer to respect.

"Yeah, it's... quite brave?" Amber said, looking first at Valerie, who nodded back at her, and then at Amy directly, her tone hesitant. "It takes a lot to walk around like this," she continued, her gaze lingering on Amy for a moment longer than necessary.

Amy was expecting mocking and harassment from these girls, but instead, they sounded weirdly supportive for some reason. She wasn't sure how honest they were, though, a nagging doubt lingering in the back of her mind, making her uneasy.

Emma saw that Amy was still covering herself and knew that she needed help to overcome her embarrassment. She grabbed Amy's arm and pulled it to her side, her grip firm but gentle, her eyes encouraging. "See, I told you. No one cares if you are topless. You should listen to me more," she said, a warm smile on her face.

"Oh Amy, you're so cute like that! Looking all embarrassed and all I mean," Val said, her tone teasing but not unkind, a playful glint in her eyes.

"Yeah, just like my little brother when he peed his pants that one time," Hannah quickly added chuckling, but not snarky.

"I like the way her nipples look. Are you cold Amy? Because I bet they could cut glass the way they are right now," Amber mentioned, her eyes lingering on Amy's chest.

The three girls giggled at the last comment, which made Amy blush deeply, her heart racing in her chest. The reality was that she didn't feel cold at all right now. Quite the contrary. Her head was burning hot from the embarrassment she experienced, her skin flushed and her pulse quickening.

No, her nipples were rock hard simply from being exposed. Every look she received made them tingle in response and made them stiffen up, the sensation both uncomfortable and strangely pleasurable, a mix of emotions coursing through her.

"Look! Not only her nipples are like this. It almost looks like she has a little gemstone down there!" Hannah said, pointing at Amy's crotch.

Amy followed everyone's look down at her crotch, and what she saw hit her like lightning, a jolt of shock and embarrassment coursing through her, making her gasp and her eyes widen in disbelief.

"Yeah, it's amazing. I would've never thought a girl like you Amy would dare put everything on show like that, but here we are," Valerie said, chuckling, her voice filled with amusement and even a hint of admiration, her eyes gleaming.

Amy's panties had turned see-through. The white cotton material did exactly nothing to hide her most private place anymore. The wet fabric clung to her like a second skin, making every crevice and fold visible down there. For all intents and purposes, Amy stood completely naked, her most intimate parts on display for everyone to see.

And the worst: Amy could see the fold of her clitoral hood poke out like a little baby finger. And it was so clearly visible, too! A wave of mortification washed over her, making her want to shrink into herself and disappear, her face burning with shame.

Screaming, Amy's hands shot down to cover her exposed privates. Who else had seen her like this? This was a nightmare! Valerie and her friends would tell everyone what they'd seen! She was done for!

"Hey Val, do you think Amy is some kind of pervert?" Hannah chimed in, her eyebrows raised in question, her lips curled into a smirk.

"I don't know. Maybe. I heard of people who get off on exposing themselves in public," Valerie said with an amused chuckle, her voice laced with a hint of mischief.

Amy's flight instincts finally kicked in. She quickly turned around and saw that in that exact moment the light for the slide went green again. There was a group of three boys in front of her, but they were arguing about who was to go down the slide first, oblivious to the drama unfolding behind them.

Without hesitation, Amy took that opportunity and darted away from Emma and the other girls. She managed to slip past the younger kids in front of her, who were perplexed by the sight of Amy's almost naked butt, their eyes wide with surprise and their mouths agape, whispers of "What the...?" and "Did you see that?" following in her wake.

They all watched the strange girl take a big head-on dive towards the slide, which actually looked quite impressive. Amy heard the boys complain, their voices a distant murmur, but she was already going down the slide. This time head first, her adrenaline surging through her veins, a mix of fear and exhilaration coursing through her.

On her way down, something quite unexpected happened to Amy. The slide was built from multiple small segments, with each plastic segment interlocked with the next one in an overlapping way. At every junction, there was a very slight groove in the slide that Amy felt on her skin, the sensation both unfamiliar and intensely pleasurable, making her gasp and her body tingle with every pass.

When she went down the slide the first time, she was on her back, and it wasn't as noticeable. But now that she went down on her belly, it felt ten times more intense. With every groove she passed over, it felt like her already super sensitive nipples got flicked by a small finger. And even worse: she felt the exact same sensation further down at her crotch, the pleasure building and the intensity growing with every passing moment, her body on fire and her mind a whirl of conflicting emotions.

Amy couldn't count them, but there were at least over a dozen or so of those grooves hitting her. Each time, electric jolts shot through her whole body, making her gasp and flinch.

In the end, she landed in the water just like before, but this time her stimulated areas felt burning hot while the water felt like ice cubes pushed against them, the contrast making her body shiver, the sensation both soothing and intense, a mix of relief and lingering pleasure coursing through her.

Knowing that there wasn't much time left before Val and her friends came down the slide as well, Amy hurried to swim towards the ladder and leave the pool. She was already climbing out of the water when she looked down and saw something that almost made her faint, her eyes widening in shock and her heart pounding, a wave of dread washing over her.

SHE WAS NAKED! COMPLETELY NAKED! The transparent panties were now gone, too! In an instant, Amy let herself fall back into the water, nervously looking around, her mind racing with panic and her body shaking with adrenaline, her heart threatening to burst out of her chest.

It seemed as if no one had seen her naked lower body, but now her plan of leaving the water and hiding in the changing room from Val and her friends wasn't an option anymore, a sense of desperation and helplessness washing over her, making her want to scream and her eyes sting with unshed tears, her mind spinning with what to do next.

Amy turned around and saw that two of the three kids who had been standing in line in front of her and Emma were already back in the pool. She knew she had to be quick in finding her panties, her mind racing with possibilities and her body trembling with urgency.

Amy swam back towards the area at the slide, diving down to look for them. Without diving goggles, she had a hard time seeing anything under water. Everything was blurry, the water distorting her vision and making it impossible to make out any details, her heart sinking with every passing second. More panic set in. She had to find these panties! Amy thought, desperate, her heart pounding in her ears like a drumbeat, urging her to act fast.

Amy swam back to the surface to get some air and saw that now the third boy was in the water also. Just as she surfaced, all three of them looked over at her and began swimming towards her, their eyes wide with curiosity, their grins growing wider with every stroke, their intentions unclear but their interest evident.

Great, she thought, what do they want? Amy wondered, her mind racing with possibilities, her body tensing with a mix of fear and apprehension, her heart sinking with dread.

Amy wasn't interested in talking to anyone right now, especially in her naked state. She knew that finding her lost panties without goggles was very unlikely, and so she decided to swim away from the boys in the hopes that they would leave her alone.

Unfortunately, Amy wasn't able to lose the boys, and she quickly got cornered at the shallow end of the pool. If she swam any further, she would have to stand up and expose herself to everyone, which wasn't an option, her mind racing with the horror of such a scenario, her body trembling with the thought, her heart aching with the weight of her predicament. But what happened next was certainly unexpected.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

Very enjoyable chapter! I loved the interaction with the Swim Coach and the Pool Staff. Kim's logic was very unexpected, and I loved it. You have set up some amazing opportunities for Amy in the future. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Hooked6

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Thanks, she's certainly in for a ride!

Great story! Thanks for posting I am also a big fan of the Erica story and am anxious to see where this goes.

Me too!

Thank you for the chapter 2

It is indeed a good story and I am looking forward for the next chapter. It should be very interesting and exciting in the next chapter.

Thanks, sorry it took me so long.

An excellent story and read so far. Lots of possibilities could be opened up. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I appreciate your feedback!

Wonder if this'll lead to Amy being naked in Ms. Hendrix so she can experience her nudist lifestyle without fear

Possibilities, possibilities...

Nice premise. This very much reminds me of that other story where a girl ends up topless at a water park. I like that this one is more paced out and not so fast moving. I think one or two bracelets on her wrist would probably suffice, rather than making her wear four (that seems excessive and will make for tacky tanlines around her beautiful ankles - she should have her toenails painted pink, or something to make it even hotter). I cannot wait for those panties to get wet and see through, and I am genuinely curious if they will even stay on, once she starts going down those water jet slides. How many kids from school will show up? How many male classmates will be there? Lots to look forward too, for sure.

Get out of my brain

I'm loving the story. Looking forward to future chapters. I wonder if her friend will have ENF moments. Welcome aboard!

I asked that myself too

[Hooked6]

The tension in Chapter Three is marvelous! I love the addition of Val and her minions. I hope that trio will figure prominently in the future. Looking forward to the next chapter (which I hope will be soon, )

Hooked6

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[Debbifan]

I'm loving the story. Looking forward to future chapters. I wonder if her friend will have ENF moments. Welcome aboard!

I asked that myself too

Excellent chapter. For me, I always prefer when it is just the one unfortunate protagonist i.e. Amy. Emma seems too street smart to get caught out ?

[MGS]

I always prefer when it is just the one unfortunate protagonist

Same 100%. Definitely much prefer when it is just the one, main girl who is the only one who is the ENF.

[Somebody]

Particularly when they have this kind of dynamic. There are times when it's fun for others to join in enf, but this is not one of those scenarios

[superevil7]

Fun story so far! I was wondering the entire time if Amy was going to orgasm while going down the slide, lol. I'm glad she's lost her panties. Larson is a great last name for her

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

The tension in Chapter Three is marvelous! I love the addition of Val and her minions. I hope that trio will figure prominently in the future. Looking forward to the next chapter (which I hope will be soon, )

Hooked6

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Such comments certainly motivate me to invest more time into writing!

Excellent chapter. For me, I always prefer when it is just the one unfortunate protagonist i.e. Amy. Emma seems too street smart to get caught out ?

Emma IS smart, maybe a little too smart for her own good?

Same 100%. Definitely much prefer when it is just the one, main girl who is the only one who is the ENF.

Amy will be the only one naked lots!

Particularly when they have this kind of dynamic. There are times when it's fun for others to join in enf, but this is not one of those scenarios

Thanks for the input. Let's see where all of this will lead us.

Fun story so far! I was wondering the entire time if Amy was going to orgasm while going down the slide, lol. I'm glad she's lost her panties. Larson is a great last name for her

I like a good climax, too! As of 2010, the surname Larson ranks 247th in the U.S. btw.


> I'm currently writing on chapter 4 and without making promises, I estimate a release sometime next week. Interesting times ahead!