Beckie Bradshaw (The best Christmas present ever!) part 6 added

[Bucket]

Bump as they say in the movies.

[EddieDavidson]

I had a similar story where the main character's name was Mary Christmas (She's heard all the jokes at her expense) and my favorite line was "It was the best worst christmas we ever had" because it was supposed to go like this.

Unfortunately, a friend of mine at the time kept telling me how they would kill themselves and made it sound so awful that it put me off writing it. I gave it to him and he chewed it up and shit it out into a story that I didn't recognize. I've always felt like giving them a proper Christmas, this story sort of inspires me to think about that.

There are a lot of parts of this one that make me wonder/puzzle. My main constructive feedback is some of the paragraphs are massive walls of text and at times I find myself not wanting to read them. That's just me getting old though.