The Girls Just Want to Have Fun at the birthday pool party

[Jeepman89]

I would have him turn 14.

[NickTwisp]

I would have him turn 14.

That would make the story more intense for sure.

[Sleepy Slobber]

If this were my story, I would perhaps have the girls and/or Mrs. Swimerton jerk him off to a dry orgasm (he's only about age 11) in the bedroom. The girls would know or be told what had just occurred. It seemed he was getting close to that while tied to the flagpole. That's as far as I'd go.

I thought about making the mother drunkenly groping, jerking and blowing him while he was tied to the pole and the preteen girls watched in awe, but due to the ages it was too hardcore to write so I went with only the girls doing the action, then the mother unties him with open ending options.

Another option was jerking him on the bedroom as you said (Many boys can already ejaculate at 11), as she teased him about how the girls watched him naked and groped him and It would be a memory that will resurface every time he sees any of the girls in his class and will shape the rest of his romantic life.

And also another option after that, having him tied up on the girls bedroom while the girls had a slumber party, including the older sister's arrival with her friends, Mean Girls-style.

[Sleepy Slobber]

I would have him turn 14.

By age 14, all of my peers already had some degree of sexual experience. I wanted this to be a story about the first time the girls saw a penis of a boy they found attractive.

[NickTwisp]

(Many boys can already ejaculate at 11),

Possible but statistically unlikely. Medically speaking, that would border on a diagnosis of "Early Puberty." Mean age for spermarche in the U.S. is between age 13 to 13.5-

I guess that many guys do have some degree of sexual experience by age 14; I certainly didn't.
Only j/o at that point...

[NudeBaG]

I would have him turn 14.

By age 14, all of my peers already had some degree of sexual experience. I wanted this to be a story about the first time the girls saw a penis of a boy they found attractive.

Those are my favorite set ups

[NudeBaG]

This was one of those situations where a mom’s involvement kind of derails it a bit
Still, great story up to then

[NickTwisp]

I did like the first part where Mrs. Swimmerson gets him to change into her husband's rather loose swimsuit in the bedroom. I can see this happening in fact I did get undressed in front of my best buddy's Mom onetime at their vacation home.

[NudeBaG]

I did like the first part where Mrs. Swimmerson gets him to change into her husband's rather loose swimsuit in the bedroom. I can see this happening in fact I did get undressed in front of my best buddy's Mom onetime at their vacation home.

The changing in front of was fine.
It just kind of kills it for me when a parent steps in just when it gets really exciting/fun for the younger girls.
It’s also kind of creepy when a mother takes that kind of interest in a ‘much younger than her’ teen.