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Re: Peripubertal Female Dysregulation Syndrome (ENF, CMNF, discipline and more)
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2026 4:36 am
by raiken
I really like this story. But ...when they initially head towards the park, the girl is quite definitely described as wearing both shoes and socks: "naked from head to ankles." So it came as a surprise when she's easily apprehended later because she's running away barefoot. Perhaps add a scene where she's made to get TOTALLY naked after arriving at the park?
Re: Peripubertal Female Dysregulation Syndrome (ENF, CMNF, discipline and more)
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2026 7:10 am
by mars357
raiken wrote: Fri Jul 10, 2026 4:36 am
I really like this story. But ...when they initially head towards the park, the girl is quite definitely described as wearing both shoes and socks: "naked from head to ankles." So it came as a surprise when she's easily apprehended later because she's running away barefoot. Perhaps add a scene where she's made to get TOTALLY naked after arriving at the park?
Well spotted! There really is a missing bit! I'll look at that before posting the next chapter.
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