Hospital dilemma part 2

[Revengedpirate]

Vicky’s mum stopped pulling her daughter. Vicky relieved didn’t want more people to see her in a nappy and socks. She thought her mum Zooey and Zooey’s dad had given up. Suddenly the room went dark and Vicky fell to her knees, before collapsing completely on the floor.

To be continued...

[cober]

I think this become really hard to understand and read due to the fact other stories will bump all these parts to 2nd page the board.

Might be a better idea to combine it into one story thread. Its a very creative idea tho.