Maggie: Part 1 by Mr Somebody

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Maggie: Part 1 by Mr Somebody

Maggie was a 13 year old girl who was slightly poor. She did normal things, went to school etc. She was going through puberty like every normal girl, her breasts had developed but she hadn't grown any hair down there yet, something that she didn't see as a problem as no-one would ever see, or at least that's what she thought. One day she was going to school on the bus, her family was slightly poor so wearing clothes with the occasional mark or stain was common, however the clothes she grabbed had stains in some bad places. To save money her parents brought her diapers instead of actual panties so that they could save money on washing and could easily replace them and they didn't buy her bras as they couldn't afford it. She was on the bus, and that's when the popular girl, Stacy, who bullied her got on the bus. She walked back a few rows until she reached Maggie, and that's when she noticed the stain that Maggie didn't see. A day or 2 before Maggie had accidentally spilled some juice on her crotch area and it had stained.
"Hey Guys, it looks like Raggie has pissed herself" Shouted Stacy
Maggie looked down and was shocked as she hadn't noticed it
"Please leave me alone" Whimpered Maggie
"Those trousers look wet, let me help you and remove them, I think baby needs changing, don't you all agree" Said Stacy with an evil grin
Everyone on the bus cheered and laughed
Stacy dragged Maggie onto the middle of the bus in view of everyone and removed Maggie's socks and shoes
"Now baby, stay calm so mommy can change you" Said Stacy
She undid the zipper and prepared to pull down her trousers
"Lets see if baby here has done a pee pee in her panties"
She pulled down her trousers, and saw Maggie's diaper, she burst out laughing
"Oh My God, Raggie really is a baby, and she's all dry, I think"
Everyone was laughing, and Maggie had tears streaming down her face, Stacy threw Maggie's trousers out of the window
"Little baby here doesn't need those, do you, come to mommy"
She grabbed Maggie and sat her up, she then reached up her top, and to her surprise, felt a bare pair of breasts instead of a bra
"Hey guys, little baby here isn't wearing a bra, someone pass me one of their gym tops for her to wear"
Someone threw a skimpy vest top, Stacy ripped off Maggie's top, threw it out of the window, exposing her breasts and put the top on her, the cleavage was very revealing and showed off almost everything, worse was that her top could no longer hide the diaper, her nipples poked threw the top as well
They got off the bus and walked threw the hallways getting laughed at from everyone
"Little baby here thought she could have it easy, but babies don't get it easy, now crawl on the floor"
Maggie got down, tears streaming and crawled, as she knew what Stacy could do if she wanted to
After a few minutes Stacy got bored and so did the crowd
"How about something good"
They all cheered
"Stand up baby"
Maggie stood
"Now everyone on the bus got a look at some of this baby, but for the ones who didn't, here's what you missed"
She ripped off Maggie's top, leaving her breasts exposed
"Don't cover, no-one cares about a baby being topless"
She obeyed, and put her arms at her sides, with tears going everywhere
"God, this is boring, how about we see the rest"
She reached for Maggie;s diaper and Maggie kept putting her leg in the way
"Move your leg bitch"
She obeyed, knowing her fate was sealed
Stacy ripped off Maggie's diaper, showing her bald hairless pussy to everyone
"Well look, she really is a baby, now crawl"
As she crawled, she knew that her legs were slowly being pulled apart, showing off her most private of parts, leaving her completely exposed
Maggie's family eventually had more problems and Maggie temporarily had to go live with a new family for a few weeks, only problem was that it was Stacy's family, and the fun had just begun.

-Hey, Mr Somebody here, part 2 will come soon, can't wait for it, please leave feedback, see ya -

Maggie: Part 2 by Mr Somebody

Maggie walked into Stacy's house, not knowing what to expect but she was nervous anyway after what had happened at school the other day.
"Welcome to our home" Said Stacy's father
"You'll be sharing a room with Stacy" Said Stacy's Mother
"Lets go" Said Stacy
They walked through Stacy's house until they reached Stacy's room, she shut the door and then locked it
"You will do as I say, now go stand in front of the window facing me" Said Stacy
She obeyed, scared. Stacy grabbed her bag and emptied it onto the floor
"Look at these rags, these won't do, neither will your current clothes, remove them now" Said Stacy
"Please, everyone will see my butt threw the window" Said Maggie
"I don't care, do it now or I will do it for you" said Stacy
She stripped off all her clothes except for her diaper
"Remove that too" Said Stacy
She removed her diaper and was stood there naked with her bare ass facing the window
"Now go get in the shower and I will pick you an outfit, bathroom is down the hall" Said Stacy
Maggie reached for the towel on the bed
"You don't need that, go as you are" Said Stacy
Maggie walked through the house naked to the bathroom, Stacy looked for something to give her
Maggie walked back from the shower and accidentally got seen by Stacy's father, he saw every bit of her including her still hairless pussy
"Maggie, what is the meaning of this" Said Stacy's father
She threw her hands over her body and thought of the only response she could think of
"This is how we did things at home, I didn't realize things were different here" Said Maggie
"Alright then, next time cover yourself with a towel" Said Stacy's father
She run past him into Stacy's room
"Loving the look" Said Stacy
"Your dad saw me" Said Maggie
"Don't worry, here are a few ground rules for you staying here, when it is just you and me around you stay as you are now, you do everything I say and every day I choose your outfit" Said Stacy
Maggie nodded
"Good, here is today's outfit" Said Stacy
She threw a mini skirt which failed to cover Maggie's ass cheeks and a tube top that kept sliding down due to Maggie's small breasts and she wasn't given any underwear, not even a diaper
"Lets go for a walk" Said Stacy
They walked through town, with Maggie getting a lot of stares
They stopped at a bus stop for a few minutes
"Remove the skirt" Said Stacy
"What???" Said Maggie
"You heard me" Said Stacy
Maggie removed her skirt, leaving her bare pussy and ass uncovered
"Don't cover up, we're going home" Said Stacy
Maggie was forced to walk home showing off her bare pussy to everyone in town, they even walked through a busy park, they reached home and as they were alone, Maggie had to strip naked and cook Stacy and herself dinner.
"Now, mom and dad have gone out to get you some new clothes and they have gone out for dinner, so bed time, tomorrow we are going for a trip to the forest outside of town for a walk, I just thought of a new rule, you must sleep naked as well"
They walked to Stacy's room and went to sleep, Maggie scared of what tomorrow may bring

-Note: Hey, Mr Somebody here, this is part 2, I have 2 more parts definitely coming and I'm considering a 5th one, hope you enjoy this, leave feedback as usual, see ya guys-

A couple of recommendations: by ENFusiast

Hey MS.

A couple of recommendations:

- Space out your story a bit. Paragraphs make it much easier to read and avoid the dreaded wall of text.

- Slow it down a little bit. I feel a lot of the action is rushed. (This happened, then this happened, then they went for a walk, then back, someone saw her, ect ect. ) It would be nice to be a bit more descriptive when embarrassing stuff happens.

Like the concept though I'd mostly recommend taking your time with the chapters a bit more and posting more fleshed out ones.