Satanic Psychiatrist Edits

[Blondie]

For anyone that might be interested, I recently finished making some revisions to all of the chapters in my story, The Satanic Psychiatrist. Some of the changes involve minor punctuation, but I've also added dialogue where I felt it would enhance Monica Prescott's humiliation. The most significant additions are in Chapter 7, Slave to a Seductress. That's probably my favorite chapter so far, and one I particularly enjoyed writing.

All of the original scenes remain intact, and I haven't added any new ones (that I can recall). I guess I can't help myself; whenever I revisit one of my stories, I inevitably think of something that didn't occur to me when I first wrote it. In this case, I think the additional dialogue really does enhance the story.

You can find it here

And in case you're wondering, yes, I really do plan on continuing this story someday!

[Hooked6]

I have enjoyed EVERY SINGLE one of your stories over the years - both ENF and ENM. You are indeed a master storyteller in this genre. But I have to say that, without a doubt, The Satanic Psychiatrist is my favorite. I know how hard it is to find time to add to or create new stories, but if there is a chance of continuing this story sometime in the future, I would be thrilled.

Thanks for all your contributions here and for the fine work you did for many, many years at your old site. You are an inspiration.

Hooked6

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[colomale2]

This is awesome. I loved the story and would be pumped to see new chapter!

[Blondie]

I have enjoyed EVERY SINGLE one of your stories over the years - both ENF and ENM. You are indeed a master storyteller in this genre. But I have to say that, without a doubt, The Satanic Psychiatrist is my favorite. I know how hard it is to find time to add to or create new stories, but if there is a chance of continuing this story sometime in the future, I would be thrilled.

Thanks for all your contributions here and for the fine work you did for many, many years at your old site. You are an inspiration.

Hooked6

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Thanks so much, Hooked6. That really means a lot coming from you.

[Luca]

I can only agree 100% with what Hooked6 wrote and I also really hope that you, in addition to writing new stories, manage to find the time to continue this beautiful and intriguing tale.

[litrob2000]

Yes, yes, PLEASE CONTINUE. Such a great story!