How Jacqui Saw Me Naked

[Summers]

Honestly, that's a good way to end the story, at least for this particular one.

You could lead into other stories in the same universe, maybe a couple of the other girls have their own nude boy at their mercy, and eventually can bring them all together or have some characters pop up in other stories.

As long as each story is a little different, and the dynamics and personalities a little different, it could all work.

Or, just leave the whole thing at this ending point, and make other unrelated stories, like you have been doing, and avoid having to worry about keeping track and remembering a hundred characters and 10 different stories set in the same world

[EverythingOff]

You could lead into other stories in the same universe, maybe a couple of the other girls have their own nude boy at their mercy, and eventually can bring them all together or have some characters pop up in other stories.

Yeah. That might be too complicated for me.

Maybe I'll come back to this someday with some additional installments. There are many more adventures they could have together. But for now, I think I'll focus on some other things.

Thanks for reading it.

[Reginald Veers]

Now we need THAT chapter!

Which chapter? The Naked Jacqui time?

I was wondering whether to go into that, or just let the story rest here. It seems like a natural conclusion, at least for now. I love the characters and would love to continue writing them, and there are PLENTY more ways Jacqui can embarrass him in front of Christine, Tracy, and others.

But if we get into the Naked Jacqui time, does that really go on the ENM board? And of course, it's not a moment of embarrassment for her. It's really just sweet exploration. So I don't know how well that fits in with the theme of the site.

She also said she'd let him play naked Simon Says with her, and that would be more ENF than ENM. I don't know how strict people like to keep that kind of separation here.

Please keep this saga going. This is the by far the best I’ve seen on this site. You’re a great writer and we’re all invested.

[steam train]

Wonderful chapter and a perfectly good way to end the story. If you choose to do the naked Jacqui chapter I would encourage you, as it would not be a forced nudity scenario but a love scenario and that is rare in the writings here. Either way well done.

[EverythingOff]

Please keep this saga going. This is the by far the best I’ve seen on this site. You’re a great writer and we’re all invested.

That's very kind of you to say. I think this story, or at least this segment of the story, is concluded. I'm glad you liked it. The story had a nice arc from initial embarrassment all the way through to first love. So it's a sweet story. I don't want to prolong it simply for the sake of prolonging it. If I think of a way that the story can continue in a meaningful way, I might come back to it. (Certainly if you or anyone else has any suggestions, I'm open to them. But it can't just be about him getting naked over and over. There would need to be something more.) In any case, whatever happens, I'm of a mind that Jacqui and James live happily ever.

[EverythingOff]

Wonderful chapter and a perfectly good way to end the story.

Thank you. And yes, it's a sweet ending.

If you choose to do the naked Jacqui chapter I would encourage you, as it would not be a forced nudity scenario but a love scenario and that is rare in the writings here.

Exactly. James would absolutely want to get some playful revenge on Jacqui—especially because she made him skip around the room wearing a princess backpack. So I think he would do his best to embarrass her. Although, now that I say that, I also have the feeling that Jacqui doesn't embarrass easily—if at all. I think, if anything, James might be too respectful—and as a result, very timid—in the kinds of things he would ask Jacqui to do. I could actually see Jacqui trying to take control of the situation, saying something like, "James Emerson Bradley! I demand that you humiliate me! Or else there's going to be trouble!" And he still can't bring himself to make her do something truly embarrassing. So she starts volunteering ideas. She puts on music and starts doing crazy dances up on a table or something, and James is too embarrassed to even look. So it might end up being more silly than hot. But that's the dynamic I see. James is a good kid with old fashioned values. I don't know how far he would try to push her.

Of course, when I write, I just start typing and whatever comes out, just comes out. So you never know. Maybe James has a bit of an inner sadist.

[Freesub]

Wonderful chapter and a perfectly good way to end the story.

Thank you. And yes, it's a sweet ending.

If you choose to do the naked Jacqui chapter I would encourage you, as it would not be a forced nudity scenario but a love scenario and that is rare in the writings here.

Exactly. James would absolutely want to get some playful revenge on Jacqui—especially because she made him skip around the room wearing a princess backpack. So I think he would do his best to embarrass her. Although, now that I say that, I also have the feeling that Jacqui doesn't embarrass easily—if at all. I think, if anything, James might be too respectful—and as a result, very timid—in the kinds of things he would ask Jacqui to do. I could actually see Jacqui trying to take control of the situation, saying something like, "James Emerson Bradley! I demand that you humiliate me! Or else there's going to be trouble!" And he still can't bring himself to make her do something truly embarrassing. So she starts volunteering ideas. She puts on music and starts doing crazy dances up on a table or something, and James is too embarrassed to even look. So it might end up being more silly than hot. But that's the dynamic I see. James is a good kid with old fashioned values. I don't know how far he would try to push her.

Of course, when I write, I just start typing and whatever comes out, just comes out. So you never know. Maybe James has a bit of an inner sadist.

I think Jacqui pushing James to stop being so respectful and humiliate her could make a really, really good story arc. And then when the gentleman falls away, all that's left is a sadistic, horny teenage boy - a recipe for a lot of fun

[steam train]

“ So you never know. Maybe James has a bit of an inner sadist. ”

Our James …. Never

[EverythingOff]

“ So you never know. Maybe James has a bit of an inner sadist. ”

Our James …. Never

Well, I think even James might be able to find his inner sadist, with the proper incentive...

[DrWhoFanJ]

Just popping in mainly to say this is (as far as I remember) the first story on this site I haven’t written to contain a character with the same name as me! It’s strange how underused such a common name seems to be here!