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[superevil7]

Sorry for the bad wording

It's all good! You do some amazing writing, so I'm not surprised how many people enjoy your work.

Also, in reference to a previous comment I made, I just realized that Amy probably looks a lot like the girl in your avatar.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[MGS]

Sorry to hear you have been having a tough few weeks. Hopefully things are started looking better for you. Whenever you are ready, I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm much better, thanks. Chapter 5 will be ready this week.

That is amazing to hear. I cannot wait. This story is so good, and it is good to hear that you are doing much better. I am so interested to read where the story goes when you said this at the beginning of the story "I already know that my story will also include darker themes"

Sounds very exciting! So glad you are back.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[MGS]

That is amazing to hear. I cannot wait. This story is so good, and it is good to hear that you are doing much better. I am so interested to read where the story goes when you said this at the beginning of the story "I already know that my story will also include darker themes"

Sounds very exciting! So glad you are back.

Thanks for your nice words. I'm very glad that you enjoy it so far. At the pace Amy's story is progressing it might still take some time, but yes, Val has no good intentions and she is not the only one Amy will have to deal with.

Very attentive readers might've already spotted one or two hints pointing at an underlying conspiracy.

How far things will go in terms of "dark themes" I'm still undecided on. It will depend on reception and whether it feels right in the context of a story I come up with mostly on the fly.

That is ok. I love this story and will be here for the long run. Hopefully she is forced into becoming the reluctant nudist that her friend is trying to make happen which will lead to all sorts of very embarrassing situations that will keep poor Amy horny throughout!

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[Hooked6]

You asked if readers would notice in chapter 5 if there was a downgrade from your previous chapters? I personally think the opposite is true. Chapter 5 was an upgrade, in my humble opinion.

I enjoyed this chapter very much. The details about the backstory explaining Emma's motivation and her willingness to expose her friend, Amy, was very well told and added plausibility to the story that hadn't existed up to now. The added length is also much appreciated, though length isn't the most important aspect of a successful story. Some authors ramble on adding trivial details just to add length that only serves to derail a story that already possessed excellent pacing of the action. You, however, managed to keep the story flowing while adding only the details needed to keep the reader's interest and that alone slowly increased the tension level of the action. Nicely done.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hooked6

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[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[jojo12026]

Lisa a great chapter. I also liked getting some backstory. I think the pacing was better in this chapter. Maybe I will go back and read them all in a row again. Looking forward to more.

[steam train]

I also think the writing in chapter 5 is of a deeper quality. Well done!