Peripubertal Female Dysregulation Syndrome (ENF, CMNF, discipline and more)

[raiken]

I really like this story. But ...when they initially head towards the park, the girl is quite definitely described as wearing both shoes and socks: "naked from head to ankles." So it came as a surprise when she's easily apprehended later because she's running away barefoot. Perhaps add a scene where she's made to get TOTALLY naked after arriving at the park?

[mars357]

I really like this story. But ...when they initially head towards the park, the girl is quite definitely described as wearing both shoes and socks: "naked from head to ankles." So it came as a surprise when she's easily apprehended later because she's running away barefoot. Perhaps add a scene where she's made to get TOTALLY naked after arriving at the park?

Well spotted! There really is a missing bit! I'll look at that before posting the next chapter.
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[Bucket]

I really like this story. But ...when they initially head towards the park, the girl is quite definitely described as wearing both shoes and socks: "naked from head to ankles." So it came as a surprise when she's easily apprehended later because she's running away barefoot. Perhaps add a scene where she's made to get TOTALLY naked after arriving at the park?

Well spotted! There really is a missing bit! I'll look at that before posting the next chapter.
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I saw this comment and got excited thinking its chapter 9 for a moment.