Lia's new reality (Part 24 - (6/30)

[superevil7]

I love Lia running into classmates while she's exposed, especially male classmates

[alberic]

The head coach looked to Trevor, who nodded to them.

SLAP!

The head coach, who was also the PE teacher, spanked Lia. She had been a problem student for him, so he felt like she deserved it. But he didn’t hit her very hard. But still, the girl cried out. Never in a million years did he think he would ever spank a student, especially a girl student. On her naked butt no less.

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

The three other coaches also spanked her butt. Lia stayed on her hands and knees and crawled back to her brother. Facing her, her butt was pointed at the team. “Can I cum now?”

I know everyone is different, but moments like this are totally groan-inducing for me. This was the time to step it up, and it is cut short instead.

My kink is Mdom and abuse of authority, and while I know this is not that kind of story, I cannot help but find it disappointing when the adult men in the story are presented as "big softies" or passive bystanders. Such a waste of potential for a hot scene (from my perspective.)

I tend to skim ahead scenes with young boys and classmates as I don't have much interest in that.

It's a great story, nonetheless. I just wish the fathers and teachers took more advantage of the opportunities presented for them.

[perseus]

The head coach looked to Trevor, who nodded to them.

SLAP!

The head coach, who was also the PE teacher, spanked Lia. She had been a problem student for him, so he felt like she deserved it. But he didn’t hit her very hard. But still, the girl cried out. Never in a million years did he think he would ever spank a student, especially a girl student. On her naked butt no less.

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

The three other coaches also spanked her butt. Lia stayed on her hands and knees and crawled back to her brother. Facing her, her butt was pointed at the team. “Can I cum now?”

I know everyone is different, but moments like this are totally groan-inducing for me. This was the time to step it up, and it is cut short instead.

My kink is Mdom and abuse of authority, and while I know this is not that kind of story, I cannot help but find it disappointing when the adult men in the story are presented as "big softies" or passive bystanders. Such a waste of potential for a hot scene (from my perspective.)

I tend to skim ahead scenes with young boys and classmates as I don't have much interest in that.

It's a great story, nonetheless. I just wish the fathers and teachers took more advantage of the opportunities presented for them.

Thanks for your feedback, I truly do appreciate hearing what works and doesn't work for some readers.

I am going to add more physical dicipline very soon, I wouldn't say that it would get closer to Mdom. The role her family is playing is suportive so they likely won't go overly harsh on her. But when I get the story to the school setting there are going to be some teachers that dish out harsher dicipline.

I am glad you are finding parts of the story you are enjoying.

[computerphoto]

Can't wait for the next part

[computerphoto]

Here's an idea, maybe Steve and Diana have Lia either do a fashion show or clothes giveaway, in either the front yard or back yard, where she invites all her classmates, friends, family and everyone, or you do whats in Steve dream where she is given the clothes to toss in a bonfire in front of everyone to get rid of her clothes.

Yeah, this would be very interesting, maybe some of her favorite clothes she will have to lose, or the clothes she used to wear going out and clubbing.

Yeah, Lia would do whatever she is told to do, no matter what it is, even if it's getting rid of clothes, giving them away, or destroying them. It all goes with how Lia does whatever she is told to do by anyone.

[computerphoto]

This really going to open up issues when she in school, and can create alot of problems since they are opening up a paradox box or a can of worms and it can't be undone.

I've cosidered this. I'll say a little bit about what I've have planned for school. The rule will stand but it won't be widly known. Her friends will know, and probably the staff. But the other students won't know about it...at first

Yeah, but they will know pretty fast, when she ether shows up to school totally naked and barefoot, or gets stripped by either fellow students or teachers and ends up naked by the end of the school day.

This also fits like you were saying

Thanks for your feedback, I truly do appreciate hearing what works and doesn't work for some readers.

I am going to add more physical dicipline very soon, I wouldn't say that it would get closer to Mdom. The role her family is playing is suportive so they likely won't go overly harsh on her. But when I get the story to the school setting there are going to be some teachers that dish out harsher dicipline.

I am glad you are finding parts of the story you are enjoying.

That the teachers will end up having harsher discipline for her.

[darklord66]

Here's an idea, maybe Steve and Diana have Lia either do a fashion show or clothes giveaway, in either the front yard or back yard, where she invites all her classmates, friends, family and everyone, or you do whats in Steve dream where she is given the clothes to toss in a bonfire in front of everyone to get rid of her clothes.

Yeah, this would be very interesting, maybe some of her favorite clothes she will have to lose, or the clothes she used to wear going out and clubbing.

Yeah, Lia would do whatever she is told to do, no matter what it is, even if it's getting rid of clothes, giving them away, or destroying them. It all goes with how Lia does whatever she is told to do by anyone.

Yeah, I agree with you computerphoto, Lia probably will end up doing whatever she is told to do.

[darklord66]

I've cosidered this. I'll say a little bit about what I've have planned for school. The rule will stand but it won't be widly known. Her friends will know, and probably the staff. But the other students won't know about it...at first

Yeah, but they will know pretty fast, when she ether shows up to school totally naked and barefoot, or gets stripped by either fellow students or teachers and ends up naked by the end of the school day.

This also fits like you were saying

Thanks for your feedback, I truly do appreciate hearing what works and doesn't work for some readers.

I am going to add more physical dicipline very soon, I wouldn't say that it would get closer to Mdom. The role her family is playing is suportive so they likely won't go overly harsh on her. But when I get the story to the school setting there are going to be some teachers that dish out harsher dicipline.

I am glad you are finding parts of the story you are enjoying.

That the teachers will end up having harsher discipline for her.

Yeah, I can not wait to see what happens in school and how all the teachers treat her, and her mom did tell her she will be sent to school naked at some point.

[perseus]

I'm hoping to be done with the chapter soon. It won't be long now when she goes to school.

[D74]

Yeah, but they will know pretty fast, when she ether shows up to school totally naked and barefoot, or gets stripped by either fellow students or teachers and ends up naked by the end of the school day.

This also fits like you were saying

Thanks for your feedback, I truly do appreciate hearing what works and doesn't work for some readers.

I am going to add more physical dicipline very soon, I wouldn't say that it would get closer to Mdom. The role her family is playing is suportive so they likely won't go overly harsh on her. But when I get the story to the school setting there are going to be some teachers that dish out harsher dicipline.

I am glad you are finding parts of the story you are enjoying.

That the teachers will end up having harsher discipline for her.

Yeah, I can not wait to see what happens in school and how all the teachers treat her, and her mom did tell her she will be sent to school naked at some point.

I think that should make for a interesting first day if her mom made her do that to get the year started off.