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[Sanford7727]

I am enjoying this and certainly hoping that she will have to stay like this for a long time. Just keep her naked. She might even start to enjoy it.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[perseus]

Wonderful story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope those panties stay lost forever . I also hope the rest of her clothes go missing too! I'm wondering if Val will pull something before the day is over.

[MGS]

> I'm currently writing on chapter 4 and without making promises, I estimate a release sometime next week. Interesting times ahead!

Really hope that maybe you'll have a new chapter for us this week. If not, that is ok but I am seriously looking forward to re-reading this revised story, as well as the coming chapter!

Edit: I don't know if I am losing my mind, but I could have sworn there were a few tweaks made to this story with a disclaimer at the beginning. Do I need to re-read the first three chapters, or am I imagining things lol? Either way, love this story.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[MGS]

I'm glad you like it so far!

I made the disclaimer when I posted chapter 3 and it's still there for people, who read my first two chapters before I published chapter three. If you read my story for the first time when I published chapter three you don't have to re-read anything. If you're here from the beginning I recommend to read chapters 1 and 2 once more, but it's not a must as the main plot hasn't been touched. Just minor details, which I wanted to add or change in order to make everything more believable. As I stated before, I won't touch older chapters again from here on out because I feel this disrupts the reader too much. I'm sorry for that.

Chapter 4 definitely coming soon!

Oh I see. I was looking at the introductory message at the beginning of the story instead of looking at the third chapter. I have not actually read chapter 3 yet, so I will re-read chapters 1 and 2 then. If chapter 4 is ready this week I will read 3 and 4 together, but if it is not, it is ok and I will go ahead a read chapter 3. I am excited to see what is in store for poor Amy! And you dont have to apologise. I definitely look forward to see what changes occurred.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[Debbifan]

First rule of writing for a forum such as this; write what you want to write and would like to read. Don't try to cater for everyone's preferences, they are bound to vary. Some prefer instant gratification, some like the slow burn and build up of tension. I am in the latter camp and so very much enjoy and look out for a continuation of your story while ignoring others that are not to my taste.

It was nice that Amy got a surge of pleasure from the water jets but I can't help hoping that Val and her cronies have a few tricks to play ! She may regret not having the nerve to admit to the boys that the panties were hers ?

[Hooked6]

Some prefer instant gratification, some like the slow burn and build up of tension. I am in the latter camp and so very much enjoy and look out for a continuation of your story while ignoring others that are not to my taste.

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I totally agree with Debbiefan. I too love your slow but ever-increasing tension that you are building in this story and the mental visuals you create are just marvelous. I also truly like Valerie and her minions.

You asked earlier if your pacing was okay and whether the venue you are dwelling on in these chapters was still interesting. I must tell you that I am truly loving the story and, as Debbifan already pointed out, you should write what pleases you. Write the story you want to write. Your instincts in this area seem right on target.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter and learning what the girls have in mind for Amy.

Hooked6

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[mikewozere]

I'm surprised the boys didn't use their goggles to check underwater themselves