Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 6 01/19/26

[Sanford7727]

I am enjoying this and certainly hoping that she will have to stay like this for a long time. Just keep her naked. She might even start to enjoy it.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

I am enjoying this and certainly hoping that she will have to stay like this for a long time. Just keep her naked. She might even start to enjoy it.

You're mean! But maybe...

[perseus]

Wonderful story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope those panties stay lost forever . I also hope the rest of her clothes go missing too! I'm wondering if Val will pull something before the day is over.

[MGS]

> I'm currently writing on chapter 4 and without making promises, I estimate a release sometime next week. Interesting times ahead!

Really hope that maybe you'll have a new chapter for us this week. If not, that is ok but I am seriously looking forward to re-reading this revised story, as well as the coming chapter!

Edit: I don't know if I am losing my mind, but I could have sworn there were a few tweaks made to this story with a disclaimer at the beginning. Do I need to re-read the first three chapters, or am I imagining things lol? Either way, love this story.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

Wonderful story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope those panties stay lost forever . I also hope the rest of her clothes go missing too! I'm wondering if Val will pull something before the day is over.

If anyone pulls anything it would be Val, wouldn't it?

Really hope that maybe you'll have a new chapter for us this week. If not, that is ok but I am seriously looking forward to re-reading this revised story, as well as the coming chapter!

Edit: I don't know if I am losing my mind, but I could have sworn there were a few tweaks made to this story with a disclaimer at the beginning. Do I need to re-read the first three chapters, or am I imagining things lol? Either way, love this story.

I'm glad you like it so far!

I made the disclaimer when I posted chapter 3 and it's still there for people, who read my first two chapters before I published chapter three. If you read my story for the first time when I published chapter three you don't have to re-read anything. If you're here from the beginning I recommend to read chapters 1 and 2 once more, but it's not a must as the main plot hasn't been touched. Just minor details, which I wanted to add or change in order to make everything more believable. As I stated before, I won't touch older chapters again from here on out because I feel this disrupts the reader too much. I'm sorry for that.

Chapter 4 definitely coming soon!

[MGS]

I'm glad you like it so far!

I made the disclaimer when I posted chapter 3 and it's still there for people, who read my first two chapters before I published chapter three. If you read my story for the first time when I published chapter three you don't have to re-read anything. If you're here from the beginning I recommend to read chapters 1 and 2 once more, but it's not a must as the main plot hasn't been touched. Just minor details, which I wanted to add or change in order to make everything more believable. As I stated before, I won't touch older chapters again from here on out because I feel this disrupts the reader too much. I'm sorry for that.

Chapter 4 definitely coming soon!

Oh I see. I was looking at the introductory message at the beginning of the story instead of looking at the third chapter. I have not actually read chapter 3 yet, so I will re-read chapters 1 and 2 then. If chapter 4 is ready this week I will read 3 and 4 together, but if it is not, it is ok and I will go ahead a read chapter 3. I am excited to see what is in store for poor Amy! And you dont have to apologise. I definitely look forward to see what changes occurred.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

Chapter 4 - Lost and Found


“Hey you! Wait!” One of the boys called after Amy. As he and his two friends swam towards her, she looked down her body.

Not standing up in the pool, the water reached up to her neck, but it wasn’t opaque enough to hide her from view. Everything was visible.

Her nipples in particular, still very stiff and standing at attention from the incident on the slide, looked like two tiny signal beacons. They were a vivid, rosy pink, standing out in stark contrast against her otherwise pale, smooth chest.

Below that, the absence of her panties or any other type of coverage was blatantly obvious, too. As soon as the boys came close enough, they would for sure notice. She had to hurry before they did!

Amy's mind raced; they weren’t far away anymore. She was at the shallow end of the pool and there was no room to go any further without exposing herself. She knew that it was a matter of seconds before they caught up to her and found out she was completely naked.

Amy hastily looked around in a desperate attempt to find a way to hide. There seemingly was nothing she could do. But just when all hope seemed to run out, nothing short of a miracle happened.

To Amy’s right, a little towards the deeper end, at one of the pool’s walls, she heard the humming sound of a pump starting up, and the water began to bubble and swirl intensely.

Amy acted immediately and made a mad dash towards that spot, reaching it just in time before the boys reached her. The moment she hugged the edge of the pool, she also met the blasting jet below.

Amy, unable to suppress a yelp of surprise, discovered that the jet’s outlet was positioned at the perfect depth for the high-pressure mix of hot water and air to hit her right at her crotch. The resulting sensation was unlike anything she had ever felt before.

Amy struggled to hold onto the pool’s edge because the jet’s stream was quite strong, pushing her away from the wall. Her fingers dug into the small ridge, knuckles white from tension, and she managed to hold on and pull herself against the wall.

She had to keep her legs spread wide enough for the high-pressure stream to shoot through them, meaning that Amy practically rode it like that.

She noticed that something inside her began to build. It was the same feeling she experienced going down the slide the second time but even stronger. At its epicenter was the fold of her clit. She felt it pulsate and swell larger with every heartbeat as it took the jet’s merciless attack.

Meanwhile, Amy felt bubbles move all over her bare skin. In front, they traveled over her flat belly up to her chest where they tickled her nipples. And on her backside, after shooting through between her thighs and right over her most sensitive parts, they made their way through her butt-crack, and over her back all the way up to her neck.

The water felt warm, almost too warm, and the sensation of the bubbles popping against her skin was both soothing and electrifying.

Amy tried to adjust to all these intense sensations. She had never experienced anything like it before. With every passing second that the jet’s stream continued to stroke her like that, Amy lost more of her focus. She almost forgot that she was hiding from being seen naked by the boys.

But of course, she faced reality again when the boy who had called out for her tapped on her shoulder.

“Hey, uh... excuse me?” he said, trying to get Amy’s attention. His eyes were wide with curiosity and excitement.

Amy flinched from the boy’s unexpected touch.

I must make them go away and I got to find Emma. I need her to help me get my panties back! Amy told herself.

Slowly and very careful to not let go, Amy turned around, holding onto the pool's edge. If she let go right now, the jet’s force would push her right into the boy’s arms.

But Amy successfully turned around to face them without exposing herself. The moment she did, Amy tensed up visibly, yelping in surprise

“Eeek!”

Now, her arms were twisted behind her in a position where her hands and elbows were clinging onto the pool’s edge.

Of course, that meant that she had no means to use her arms as cover. The only thing keeping her from being seen completely naked was the jet causing the water around her to wildly bubble and swirl.

Amy had very little room to move. If she went too far to the left or the right, she would risk leaving the bubbly area. She couldn’t pull herself up, because that would cause her to expose her chest and if she moved any further down, she would be pushed off by the jet. The way she held herself in place was the only chance she had to keep her nudity hidden.

The boys were startled. They saw Amy’s face grimace in what they thought was intense pain. But she wasn’t in pain at all.

Even though she kept her legs spread wide enough to let the jet pass between her thighs, some of it still hit her privates.

But now that she had turned around, it impacted her bottom more than her pussy. To be precise: her clenching butthole.

The foreign sensation against her anus was completely unexpected. The hot bubbly water hitting her there felt intense and like nothing she’d ever experienced.

Thankfully, the initial shock wore off quickly so that Amy was able to relax a little.

She felt the hot bubbles invade the crack of her butt only to stroke over her puckered hole and do the same to her vagina. Amy’s swollen clitoris, still pulsating and overstimulated, enjoyed the hot stream push over it from the other direction just as much.

The physical teasing was slowly overpowering Amy to the point where everything around her seemed to disappear.

“Maybe she doesn’t understand us,” the other boy said. All three of them stared at Amy in confusion. They didn’t understand what was going on.

With her eyes unable to focus on any of them, she barely got a good look at their faces. They all looked to be a little younger than her, maybe nine or ten years old. The boy in the middle was the one who had called after Amy initially. He had short dark brown hair, wearing swim goggles pushed up on his forehead.

To his left was a black kid with short black curly hair, and to the right, a ginger boy with lots of freckles. He also wore goggles over his eyes.

“Are you okay? You seem really upset.” the black kid said. He looked at Amy empathetically. He sensed that something was up, and he wanted to understand.

“Tell us your name.” The boy in the middle demanded less caring for Amy’s apparent distress.

Moments went by while all of them waited for Amy to respond.

“I... I...,” Amy stammered. She now realized how utterly out of breath she was. The stream of hot bubbles stimulating every inch of her private parts also took its toll on her ability to concentrate on anything.

She slightly moved her hips, giving the jet an even better angle of attack between her legs.

“I... uh... ohhh... Amy!” she weakly replied telling them her name.

“Hi Amy, I’m Lenny.” the middle boy said introducing himself. The boy grinned, hiding his nervousness. He wasn’t sure what to make of the situation, but he felt excited to learn more about the strange girl.

“I’m Mikey.” the black kid added. He nodded, his eyes softening as he tried to gauge Amy's reaction. He wanted to help but didn’t know how.

“And this weirdo is Chris.” Lenny added, pointing his finger at the ginger boy. Chris blushed slightly, looking away. He was the quiet one.

Suddenly, Amy recognized Lenny as one of the kids she often saw in her neighborhood. His family lived only a couple of houses down the road from Amy. She hoped that he didn’t recognize her. If he did, he didn’t let it show.

“Um... n-nice to meet you-ouhh.” Amy managed to say, trailing off. She felt weak while forcing herself to smile at them.

“What’s going on, are you alright?” Mikey, the black boy asked, visibly concerned. He was still under the impression that the strange girl was in some kind of pain.

Damn it! What’s happening to me? It feels so good that I can barely think straight. I can’t let them know. Amy thought.

“N-no... I’m fine, I... oh god... umm... what do you want?” Amy asked. She had to get the boys to leave her alone as soon as possible. She didn’t know for how long the jet was going to last and keep her covered. It might shut off at any moment, and then her secret would be revealed.

The boys looked at each other, doubt in their eyes, but also something else. Amy spotted some mischief in their expressions. What were they thinking about?

“So... um... we thought you were looking for something over there at the slide.” Lenny said, pointing at the spot where Amy dove to search for her lost panties.

Do they know? Amy immediately asked herself in panic. Why else would they follow and ask me that?

“No.” Amy quickly lied. Her only option was to deny everything. She could never admit to them that she lost her panties. Never.

“Soo… you’re sure you haven’t lost anything?” Mikey asked, raising his eyebrow. He tilted his head.

Amy felt her heart sink. Did they see me climb out the water all naked? She asked herself. Her body was electric and on high alert while her mind began to feel numb.

“N-no. I… I’m just waiting for my friend.” Amy barely managed to say.

“Oh, okay. It’s just that we’ve found these over there and that someone must’ve lost them going down the slide or something.” Lenny said, raising his hand, Amy’s panties balled up between his fingers. He held them up, a smirk playing on his lips.

“Are you sure that they don’t belong to you?” Lenny asked Amy once more. His grin widened, but there was a flicker of uncertainty in his eyes. He wasn’t sure how far to push it.

Amy almost fainted. These boys did find her panties! They had to know it was her who lost them. They knew she was naked.

“I… no.. I… ah.” Amy stammered, unable to form a sentence in reply. The realization that she’d been discovered did something to her. The thought alone that they knew... even though she wasn’t exposed to them right now, was like oil to the fire inside her.

The sensation between her legs suddenly became even stronger. She felt herself slip away into a space in her head she didn’t know existed. A place where the world around her disappeared. It was almost like a cloud of fog engulfed her, making the boys and her problems fade away in front of her closing eyes.

Oh god, what is happening?

Despite the danger of getting pushed off the pool’s wall, Amy's bottom slightly shifted down closer to the jet’s outlet. It happened on its own as Amy was losing control over her body’s actions. It felt like she was on autopilot. The sensation between her legs intensified even more.

Amy's whole nether region began to tense up, the intensity building with every second. She didn’t understand that what she was experiencing, was her approaching her very first orgasm with increasing speed.

“Amy! There you are,” Emma called out from somewhere behind the boys. Amy was suddenly pulled out of her zoned-out state. Her eyes shot open, and she saw the boys’ heads turn to see Emma, Val, and her friends approach them. “We thought you drowned or something!”

“Hey Lenny, what’s that in your hand?” Amber asked the boy, who was still holding up Amy’s panties.

“Someone lost these and we thought she might’ve been looking for them. We tried to return them to her.” Chris answered for his friend, saying something for the first time.

“No one asked you, dwerp!” Amber told the boy, making it obvious that they were siblings.

“So, what did she say?” Hannah asked the boys with a huge grin on her face. She obviously knew that the panties in Lenny’s hand belonged to Amy.

“That they're not hers.” Lenny said.

“Well then, stop harassing her and get lost you little creeps! Bring them to the Lost and Found or something.” Val said in an overly annoyed tone.

“Yeah, don’t you see that you guys are bothering her?” Amber said.

With that, the three boys looked at each other, and after some mumbling that Amy wasn’t able to understand, swam away to leave the pool.

But Amy didn’t even register. Her whole world revolved around that wonderful feeling between her legs. The relentless stimulation she received from the pool’s jet was too strong. Even though she tried to fight it, she began to lose the battle once more.

Shortly after the boys left, the cloud around Amy had fully returned. She closed her eyes while letting her head fall back. Amy’s mouth opened, and without any control over it, she let quiet moans escape her lips. All the while, her hips began to move, rotating and bucking against the pulsating jet. She simultaneously felt numb and tingly all over.

Everything went silent, Amy’s ears only registering the distant hum from the water pump working and the bubbles popping around her.

Amy felt her vagina and butt clench in unison while she pushed herself harder against the ever-forceful jet. She sensed the edge of release close in on her. Her heart beating at ever increasing speeds. She almost felt like she was about to pee, but ten times more intense.

The built-up tension in Amy’s young body was too much to bear at this point, and she felt like screaming, but there was no control left in her. Her mouth opened wide, but nothing more than small moans and whimpers of pure pleasure came out.

“Ah-ngh… ye-hh.. ouhh. Ah-hh-eee. Ye-hsh-nggh…”

Emma, Val, Hannah, and Amber all watched Amy in fascination. It took them a moment to realize what was happening to her, but they eventually did.

Time almost came to a stop for Amy. She was seconds away from going over the edge. She held her breath as she was almost there.

Almost... there... Then suddenly... everything felt cold.

The jet had shut off, and like someone had flicked a switch inside her, it all came crashing down on Amy.

It was like a blindfold had been taken off her eyes as she opened them. Four familiar faces with very identical expressions stared back at her.

Val and her friends all looked very amused. Especially Val, who had a wide knowing smile on her lips. But Emma also had a look of compassion while the other girls didn’t.

Amy felt her whole body tingle and shake. Just a moment ago, she was the closest she’d ever been to an actual orgasm. But now it hit her like a wave. The water surrounding her felt cold and alien to her skin. All the dread and humiliation returned. The fogginess in her brain quickly disappeared, but it felt like the jet never stopped kissing her.

“You owe us one.” Val said, breaking the silence. She closed the gap between her and Amy until she was right next to her. “And considering you... uh... just lost your panties, you should really think about what we could do with this information.”






>Hope you like chapter 4. I am already working on the next one, but please tell me what you think about the tempo my story is progressing at. Do you like the slower approach where I spend multiple chapters on one location/scene, or should I speed it up a little?
As always, I'm very excited for your feedback!

[Debbifan]

First rule of writing for a forum such as this; write what you want to write and would like to read. Don't try to cater for everyone's preferences, they are bound to vary. Some prefer instant gratification, some like the slow burn and build up of tension. I am in the latter camp and so very much enjoy and look out for a continuation of your story while ignoring others that are not to my taste.

It was nice that Amy got a surge of pleasure from the water jets but I can't help hoping that Val and her cronies have a few tricks to play ! She may regret not having the nerve to admit to the boys that the panties were hers ?

[Hooked6]

Some prefer instant gratification, some like the slow burn and build up of tension. I am in the latter camp and so very much enjoy and look out for a continuation of your story while ignoring others that are not to my taste.

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I totally agree with Debbiefan. I too love your slow but ever-increasing tension that you are building in this story and the mental visuals you create are just marvelous. I also truly like Valerie and her minions.

You asked earlier if your pacing was okay and whether the venue you are dwelling on in these chapters was still interesting. I must tell you that I am truly loving the story and, as Debbifan already pointed out, you should write what pleases you. Write the story you want to write. Your instincts in this area seem right on target.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter and learning what the girls have in mind for Amy.

Hooked6

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[mikewozere]

I'm surprised the boys didn't use their goggles to check underwater themselves