The Secret Halloween Power (Chapter 5 added, Dec 25)
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The Secret Halloween Power (Chapter 5 added, Dec 25)
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Chapter 1
Once a year, on Halloween, Lisa had a secret power: the ability to completely disappear the clothes a male was wearing. She could focus on a guy, and then poof! The clothes would be removed from existence, leaving the poor victim as naked as the day he was born.
This power was a gift given to her by a literal witch she met at a Halloween party on a trip to Peru during her early 20s. The witch took a liking to her, and she (drunkenly) gave her this ability with the restriction that she could only use it once every Halloween.
This restriction made Lisa choose her victim wisely, especially after the Halloween of 2017. She was at a house party, trying to think of who to use the power on, and saw the cutest guy talking to his friends in the living room. She really wanted to see what he had on underneath, so she focused, and then...
...darkness! The person hosting the party had a prank prepared where they had cut the power to the house, and started playing spooky sound effects (chainsaws, etc) to freak everyone out. Right when she had made the guy's clothes disappear! When the lights came back on, he was nowhere to be found, but soon emerged from a bedroom wearing other clothes he had taken from the closet. Her once-a-year only nudifying was a complete waste! Meanwhile, while still extremely confused, he thought it was just part of the prank that someone had stripped him when the lights went off.
Lisa was salty after that. But the following Halloween, 2018, made up for it. It was a school day, and she sat in her car across the street from her local middle school, watching all the students walk inside for a miserable day of learning. She laughed at the irony that if it was a man watching the students, everyone would think he was a creep, but because she was a young attractive woman, nobody cared, even though she was actually about to do something creepy.
She just needed to find somebody perfect. There were lots of okay looking boys marching into the building, but she wanted someone ideal. Again, she could only do this once a year. She wanted the best.
Then she finally saw him. The cutest boy! And there were plenty of girls around. This would be great.
She focused, and then... Gone! Even the school backpack the boy was carrying had disappeared.
Every student around him acted differently. Boys were laughing. Girls were screaming. Lisa didn't know it, but one of the girls who saw his nakedness was actually the boy's long-time crush, and to have her laugh and see it all absolutely destroyed him.
The confused boy could do nothing but what his instincts told him: run. He turned and started running. As fast as he could. He was miles from home (having taken the bus) but he didn't care. He wasn't going to stop. This was a nightmare come to life.
Lisa started her car and drove up to him. She called out to the boy. "Quick! Get inside!"
The boy knew not to take rides from strangers, but he really had no choice. As soon as the car was slow enough, he opened the door and jumped in. He covered his crotch with his hands. There were tears in his eyes.
"I don't know what h-happened!" He cried.
"It's okay, I'll get you home." Lisa replied. She felt kind of bad. He was young, and being seen naked in front of all your school peers really was an awful thing to happen. But she also found it so damn hot.
"Do you have a towel or something I can cover myself with?" The boy asked.
"No, sorry." Lisa lied, knowing there was a beach towel in the trunk.
"I live at 8 Maple.... Oh no! My keys were in my bag and my bag is gone too! Nobody will be home to let me in!"
Lisa thought for a second. "It's okay. I can take you to my house and get you something to wear. Then we'll try to figure out where all your things went."
She pulled up to her house. It was a small street, and there were cars parked everywhere along the road, but it seemed as though nobody else was around. Still, the boy refused to get out of the car. It's like he was having a panic attack.
"Please... can l stay here? I don't want to get out." The poor thing was traumatized.
"Just come inside. It'll take a while to find something that fits you, and people walking past might look in through the car window. You'll be safer inside." Lisa said.
The boy sat for a few more minutes, catching his breath and calming himself down as best he could. Then he finally agreed to go inside. "Please get out first and unlock the front door so I can run in."
Lisa led the way, the boy looked around to make sure the coast was clear, then opened the door and ran into the house.
There was just one thing Lisa hadn't told him. To save money, she lived on the top floor above a ballet school. The naked boy had run into a ballet class, with ten little girls staring open mouthed and shocked. The instructor had her back to him, and didn't know what the girls were gawking towards. Once they all began laughing, she turned to finally see the naked boy for herself.
The boy was frozen in shock, covering himself with his hands. Lisa walked into the room, grinning at the predicament.
"Lisa, who the heck is this?!" Her roommate asked.
"I have no idea." Lisa lied. "Did you want to leave, please, you rude little boy?"
The betrayed boy turned and ran to the exit, giving all the girls a view of his bare behind, which caused them to laugh even harder.
Lisa never knew how the boy got home. She did feel pretty bad about that one. It had been the best Halloween so far, but nothing compared to the next year.
To be continued...
Chapter 1
Once a year, on Halloween, Lisa had a secret power: the ability to completely disappear the clothes a male was wearing. She could focus on a guy, and then poof! The clothes would be removed from existence, leaving the poor victim as naked as the day he was born.
This power was a gift given to her by a literal witch she met at a Halloween party on a trip to Peru during her early 20s. The witch took a liking to her, and she (drunkenly) gave her this ability with the restriction that she could only use it once every Halloween.
This restriction made Lisa choose her victim wisely, especially after the Halloween of 2017. She was at a house party, trying to think of who to use the power on, and saw the cutest guy talking to his friends in the living room. She really wanted to see what he had on underneath, so she focused, and then...
...darkness! The person hosting the party had a prank prepared where they had cut the power to the house, and started playing spooky sound effects (chainsaws, etc) to freak everyone out. Right when she had made the guy's clothes disappear! When the lights came back on, he was nowhere to be found, but soon emerged from a bedroom wearing other clothes he had taken from the closet. Her once-a-year only nudifying was a complete waste! Meanwhile, while still extremely confused, he thought it was just part of the prank that someone had stripped him when the lights went off.
Lisa was salty after that. But the following Halloween, 2018, made up for it. It was a school day, and she sat in her car across the street from her local middle school, watching all the students walk inside for a miserable day of learning. She laughed at the irony that if it was a man watching the students, everyone would think he was a creep, but because she was a young attractive woman, nobody cared, even though she was actually about to do something creepy.
She just needed to find somebody perfect. There were lots of okay looking boys marching into the building, but she wanted someone ideal. Again, she could only do this once a year. She wanted the best.
Then she finally saw him. The cutest boy! And there were plenty of girls around. This would be great.
She focused, and then... Gone! Even the school backpack the boy was carrying had disappeared.
Every student around him acted differently. Boys were laughing. Girls were screaming. Lisa didn't know it, but one of the girls who saw his nakedness was actually the boy's long-time crush, and to have her laugh and see it all absolutely destroyed him.
The confused boy could do nothing but what his instincts told him: run. He turned and started running. As fast as he could. He was miles from home (having taken the bus) but he didn't care. He wasn't going to stop. This was a nightmare come to life.
Lisa started her car and drove up to him. She called out to the boy. "Quick! Get inside!"
The boy knew not to take rides from strangers, but he really had no choice. As soon as the car was slow enough, he opened the door and jumped in. He covered his crotch with his hands. There were tears in his eyes.
"I don't know what h-happened!" He cried.
"It's okay, I'll get you home." Lisa replied. She felt kind of bad. He was young, and being seen naked in front of all your school peers really was an awful thing to happen. But she also found it so damn hot.
"Do you have a towel or something I can cover myself with?" The boy asked.
"No, sorry." Lisa lied, knowing there was a beach towel in the trunk.
"I live at 8 Maple.... Oh no! My keys were in my bag and my bag is gone too! Nobody will be home to let me in!"
Lisa thought for a second. "It's okay. I can take you to my house and get you something to wear. Then we'll try to figure out where all your things went."
She pulled up to her house. It was a small street, and there were cars parked everywhere along the road, but it seemed as though nobody else was around. Still, the boy refused to get out of the car. It's like he was having a panic attack.
"Please... can l stay here? I don't want to get out." The poor thing was traumatized.
"Just come inside. It'll take a while to find something that fits you, and people walking past might look in through the car window. You'll be safer inside." Lisa said.
The boy sat for a few more minutes, catching his breath and calming himself down as best he could. Then he finally agreed to go inside. "Please get out first and unlock the front door so I can run in."
Lisa led the way, the boy looked around to make sure the coast was clear, then opened the door and ran into the house.
There was just one thing Lisa hadn't told him. To save money, she lived on the top floor above a ballet school. The naked boy had run into a ballet class, with ten little girls staring open mouthed and shocked. The instructor had her back to him, and didn't know what the girls were gawking towards. Once they all began laughing, she turned to finally see the naked boy for herself.
The boy was frozen in shock, covering himself with his hands. Lisa walked into the room, grinning at the predicament.
"Lisa, who the heck is this?!" Her roommate asked.
"I have no idea." Lisa lied. "Did you want to leave, please, you rude little boy?"
The betrayed boy turned and ran to the exit, giving all the girls a view of his bare behind, which caused them to laugh even harder.
Lisa never knew how the boy got home. She did feel pretty bad about that one. It had been the best Halloween so far, but nothing compared to the next year.
To be continued...
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Oh that ending was amazing. He got lucky too. I thought something much worse was going to happen to him when she started trying to lure him in lol.
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I think having to find his way home naked skips out on all sorts of potential fun.
Imagine the poor boy having to try on several types of Lisa's clothes including panties.
Hopefully the next victim will have more prolonged agony.
Imagine the poor boy having to try on several types of Lisa's clothes including panties.
Hopefully the next victim will have more prolonged agony.
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That's a hot idea. I will definitely have the boy in the next chapter go through a lot more.TeenFan wrote: Sat Oct 18, 2025 3:27 am I think having to find his way home naked skips out on all sorts of potential fun.
Imagine the poor boy having to try on several types of Lisa's clothes including panties.
Hopefully the next victim will have more prolonged agony.
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I agree with TeenFan, I think this setup could have resulted in a longer story with the boy going through more embarrassment.
Like I said in the tutoring Chelsea story you seem to have a gift of coming up with fun premises for stories. It's great to see a new writer here!
Like I said in the tutoring Chelsea story you seem to have a gift of coming up with fun premises for stories. It's great to see a new writer here!
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Maybe I could've still included the ballet school, but then had him just run upstairs to her room.Trundle wrote: Sat Oct 18, 2025 11:22 pm I agree with TeenFan, I think this setup could have resulted in a longer story with the boy going through more embarrassment.
Like I said in the tutoring Chelsea story you seem to have a gift of coming up with fun premises for stories. It's great to see a new writer here!
I'm going to brainstorm some of the most humiliating scenarios possible and have a boy go through them in the next part. I like the idea of a boy having a first date with a girl he really likes, and losing his clothes there. That would definitely be a fun, memorable first date for the girl as well.
Or maybe not even a first date. Maybe a boy finally getting the nerve just to approach the girl he likes and ask her out, and then they disappear. Humiliating.
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I mean of course it's totally up to you, but I was thinking it could have been a fun first chapter of a longer story. As TeenFan said there was the possibility of him having to try on Lisa's clothing which like you said is a very hot idea. What if Lisa forced the boy to stay at the ballet class, imagine how red faced he'd be. What other tricks could Lisa have played on the poor boy?lovestosplooge wrote: Sat Oct 18, 2025 11:30 pm
Maybe I could've still included the ballet school, but then had him just run upstairs to her room.
I'm going to brainstorm some of the most humiliating scenarios possible and have a boy go through them in the next part. I like the idea of a boy having a first date with a girl he really likes, and losing his clothes there. That would definitely be a fun, memorable first date for the girl as well.
Or maybe not even a first date. Maybe a boy finally getting the nerve just to approach the girl he likes and ask her out, and then they disappear. Humiliating.
I still really enjoyed it though , don't get me wrong.
Either one of your ideas sounds great by the way.
The boy losing his clothes on the date may have more long term potential though, him trying to find clothes before his date sees him, maybe Lisa uses her magic on him before his date sees him naked and he has to dash into the bathroom, but shock horror it's the ladies bathroom. I dunno, you're a talented writer and I'm sure you have your own ideas
I look forward to your next update
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Yeah, he could be seeing a movie with the girl and that's where his clothes disappear. So he's able to sneak out without her noticing he's naked because it's so dark and she's focused on the movie. The closest hiding spot is the ladies bathroom.Trundle wrote: Sat Oct 18, 2025 11:38 pmI mean of course it's totally up to you, but I was thinking it could have been a fun first chapter of a longer story. As TeenFan said there was the possibility of him having to try on Lisa's clothing which like you said is a very hot idea. What if Lisa forced the boy to stay at the ballet class, imagine how red faced he'd be. What other tricks could Lisa have played on the poor boy?lovestosplooge wrote: Sat Oct 18, 2025 11:30 pm
Maybe I could've still included the ballet school, but then had him just run upstairs to her room.
I'm going to brainstorm some of the most humiliating scenarios possible and have a boy go through them in the next part. I like the idea of a boy having a first date with a girl he really likes, and losing his clothes there. That would definitely be a fun, memorable first date for the girl as well.
Or maybe not even a first date. Maybe a boy finally getting the nerve just to approach the girl he likes and ask her out, and then they disappear. Humiliating.
I still really enjoyed it though , don't get me wrong.
Either one of your ideas sounds great by the way.
The boy losing his clothes on the date may have more long term potential though, him trying to find clothes before his date sees him, maybe Lisa uses her magic on him before his date sees him naked and he has to dash into the bathroom, but shock horror it's the ladies bathroom. I dunno, you're a talented writer and I'm sure you have your own ideas![]()
I look forward to your next update
The plot device of Lisa just being able to disappear clothes makes it so much easier (and more fun) to write. A boy can be anywhere in any situation and his clothes can vanish.
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